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Hey Jyo! I read your chapter last night but then I had to sleep as I had my exam today! But finally I've got some time for reviewing this chapter ! 😊 Hereee I goo!
This is by far the best update! I mean like the way they're changing! Got another Zain!! LOOL He was flirting and she just couldn't stopp blushing furiously 😛 This was TOO good! Well 'dimagdaar' is a new word I learned today 😉 WOW ! Their conversations were enough to make me smile yest night till I didn't fall asleep 😳 Then the dori scene! Ohh Jyo THANK YOU for not including all that drama and you know strange stuff! ! You don't know how much I hate itt! 😕 But yours one was totally different and I loved it to bits 😃 Aaliya has got such an amazing character in your story! Up till now I was loving Zain's character onlyy but now Aaliya's too 😉 Like the way she said about heels and long earrings 😆 It was awesome!! And then Zain bana hero LOL! I loved his dialogue"Tootengi tab jab tum girogi, aur wo main hone nahi dunga." ! I really like the way these two have complete trust in each other! And their bond is just fantastic!! 😳
Jyo, the dialogues you include are the backbone of your series! NO DOUBT they are just fabulous!! 👏 Zain's dialogue "Abe ullu, do plate laata. Ek plate hi kyun?" was SO damn amazing! I literally cracked up at 'ullu' 😛 These dialogues act as the cherry on top of cake! And your cake itself is a chocolate onee! 😉 I love the outline of this story and the characters too! 😃 Rizwan's reply after this was also cutee!
Coming to the main thing this concept that you have included that there has to be one realistaion in each chapter is awesome!! This realization was so far the bestt! 😊 Though I loved other realisations too 😉Ohh they admire each other!! Bari der se relaise kiya sab ne 😛 They should have asked me because I knew it from the first chapter 😆
Jyo, I love for not including Shazia ! For making Surayya such a nice auntyy 😆
You update SO quickly! I mean like just 4 days ago you updated chapter 6 and yest chapter 7! WOW ! Kya speed hai apki 😉 Thanks for the PM too! 😊
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