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Your work is so refreshing Jyo. Like, I am fan of your writings. *bows down*
RESwa...
-------------------------------------Yay! i'm back to my number one spot...so childish...oh well 😳 Hehe, not childish at all! I am glad you are back on your number one stop, hehe 😆this was by far the cutest update ever ever ever! seriously! i could just imagine how ravishing Aaliya would be looking in that outfit! No wonder Zain was awestruck! Ahhh thank you so much aklsncdhiusbvrfg! I kept on rewriting this chapter because it didn't go well with me. I am glad you liked it though. And of courseee Aaliya looked ravishing! Heh!OMG kuch kuch hota hai it is...😉 about time these two realise! 🥱😆I love their choice of movie tho...and oh i love how Aaliya cries when Anjali's leaving...story of my life...no matter how many times i watch that scene i will NEVER not cryyy! KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI BE MY FAV MOVIE BRO! I had to put it in 😳 IKR! Cry every single time in that scene :(Lol, i love the comfort level and the awkwardness at the same time...kuch tu huwa hai, kuch ho gaya hai 😛 Hehe, another song you use from another one of my favourite movies 😆Most relatable scene award goes to that moment when Zain places her hand on his biceps...i can not stress enough on how many times i've had to go through that...obviously in my case its my bros...don't get your expectations up high 😆 but it was totally one of those "typical boys" type of thing...😆 Ohhooo, I got my hopes high ki this was the important detail you had missed out on when we were talking about something/someone 🤣 Dil ke armaan toot gaye yaar :P To be honest, this was a random scene. I have never been through this myself. So I am glad you could relate 😳i'm so happy these two are finally coming to terms with the attraction that they have for eachother...very well written Jyo. as always, waiting for the next update 😳 Shukriya Ammie ji. Makes me super khush that you liked it :) updating later tonight.
hey jyo...sorry gotta go out now...will put up detailed comment later
as usual..its a beautiful chapter..bye😊---------------------------------------------------------------------WOW...WOW...this is sooo cute...yes cute...just like ZaYa...beautifully written piece... iss excitement mein pata nahi kya kya likhoongi... i mean type karoongi...let be not write anything anywhere... i'll go in order! Awwhhh, this is so sweet 😳 This made me smile like an idiot when I read it for the first time and still does, hehe! Thank youuu <331st of all Zain's invite...awwwieee that was chooo cutie cutie types... kaash kuch saal baad (not now... bahut acchi bacchi hu main😉) koi mujhe itna hi sweet tarikhe se invite kare Don't we all wish ki koi hume bhi aisa invite bheje? ;) Ah I think I'd die the day that happens 😆"Aur kabhi to ladkiyon ki tarah behave kara karo"toh itne din woh ladke ki tahah reheke hi Zain ko pataya😆waise uski toh poori hosh udgayi hogi aaliya ko aise dekhne ke baad...he was just covering up by being all that besharam!😳😆 Alright let me clear somethings out for you, hehe! I myself am a bit of a tom-boy, but I dress like a girl still. Not too girly if you know what I mean? And till now, Zain's seen her as a friend. He thinks she is pretty, but theek hai, dost hai. Now his perspective is changing, if you know what I mean? :)kuch kuch hota hai toh dekhna hi tha... akhir little bit of modifications ke baad their story is the same na...take the modification as wellKKHH-tina +fahad -anjali(Jr.) +nafisa = "ZaYa ke Realisations"😉 Haha, I didn't even think of it this way yaar! Nice way to put it out there! :Dthen the beanbag n sit on bed part...Aliya cries srsly?😕 par woh toh ladkiyon ki tahah nahi hai na😛 So a person cannot be emotional just because she doesn't behave like a girl? :P I cry all the time in that scene dude!aur yeh sab padne ke baad... hame bhi KKHH😳 Mission successful, kisi ko to kuch kuch hua 🤣p.s:thanks for the wonderfull SS and the PMThank you for the wonderful comment 🤗
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