Realisations - ZaYa SS || Ch10 (Last) - Page 40

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r e a l i s a t i o n s


Hey guys. So I was sitting in my room a few days ago and this idea came to me. I decided to pen it down :) The storyline is absolutely different from that of the show. I hope you all like it 😳


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INDEX (All the links are clickable)

Chapter 1 - Missing You
Chapter 2 - Hurting You
Chapter 3 - Ignoring You
Chapter 4 - Fixing You
Chapter 5 - Being There For You
Chapter 6 - Feelings? For You?
Chapter 7 - Admiring You
Chapter 8 - Spying On You
Chapter 9 - Embarrassing You
Chapter 10 - Happiness Is You

LINK TO OTHER WORK


Peaceful - ZaYa TS
Broken Promises - ZaYa OS
Stupidity - ZaYa OS
Unsaid - ZaYa Drabble

Betrayal - ZaYa OS
Emotions - ZaYa Drabble

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Chapter 1 - Missing You

She sits in the living room of a stranger. Actually, they are new family friends. As her mom and dad continue to engage in a conversation with Mr and Mrs Usmaan Abdullah, she is left to die of boredom. Nafisa appi still hasn't returned from university. She has been out with the older son of the house, Fahad Usmaan Abdullah, who is showing her around the city and her new university. She looks around the lavishly set up living room and sees the photos on the wall. She recognises Fahad, and she takes a guess that the other one is the younger son. They are photos from their childhood. He used to make a cute little boy.
"Aaliya beta, paani?" Surraiya aunty asks her and she politely refuses. She really isn't in a good mood. Mumbai isn't giving her a reason to be happy. "Zain!" Aunty calls out. "Neeche aao beta, ghar pe mehmaan aaye hai." She hears footsteps the next minute and looks up to see him descending the stairs. Jet black hair, chocolate brown eyes and tall with a fair complexion; but he is extremely skinny. "Kuch khata nahi hai kya?" She thinks to herself.
"Assalamu alaykum!" He greets us all, and we greet him back. He then makes his way to go upstairs again.
"Zain beta, Aaliya ko apne saath le jao. Wo humare beech bore ho rahi hai!" Usmaan uncle chuckles and he smiles at her. He raises his eyebrow and tilts his head towards the staircase, indicating her to join him, and she does.
She is horrified. The room is a mess. There is no place to put her feet down. She turns back to look at him smiling at her sheepishly. "Sorry, mujhse safai nahi hoti. Fahad Bhai ke room mein chale? It's much cleaner."
"Um, sure." She replies and follows him into another room down the corridor. The room is indeed much cleaner.
"So, let me introduce myself. I am Zain Usmaan Abdullah. And you are?"
"Aaliya Ghulam Haider!" She shakes his hand and smiles. "What a dazzling smile!" He thinks.
"Well Aaliya Ghulam Haider, can I just call you Aaliya?" he jokes.
She giggles. "Of course you can!"
They sit down and start talking. He is two years older than her and is in his final year of schooling. They talk about everything - technology being the most talked about. They are geeks. An hour later, they join the others for dinner, and their conversation does not stop. They bid goodbye and hope to see each other soon.
oOo
She quickly ties her hair in a ponytail and rushes out of her room, only to bump into him. "Oh hi!" Aaliya smiles at him.
"Hey, tumse hi milne aa raha tha. Kahan gayab thi itni der se?" He questions her. He has been sitting in the lounge area for the last 10 minutes.
"Sorry, bas homework finish kar rahi thi. Tum baitho, main sabse milke aati hoon." She sprints downstairs, greets everyone with a salaam and is back upstairs in the next 5 minutes. She walks in to see him reading something on her laptop and her eyes widen in fear. "Zain!" She screeches.
He looks up with a cheesy smile on his face. "Tum likhti ho? Wo bhi romance? Wah yaar, for a 16 year old, you are quite talented." He watches the colour creep up her cheeks and is all smiles. She is very sweet.
Their chitchat begins again for the night. They argue over a number of things, friendly arguments that it. His family takes their leave at midnight. "Bye kit-kit!" He winks at her, as she looks at him, furious.
"Bye maachis ki teeli!" She pokes her tongue out at him as everyone around them bursts into laughter. She thinks he still makes a cute boy.
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It's been two years since she has moved to Mumbai with her family. Zain and her lost contact after he had finished school. She has seen him around a few times, but he doesn't attend any family gatherings anymore. Fahad bhai always worries about him.
Two years from the day she first met him, today she sits in the same lounge room, except he isn't there. He hasn't come down to greet anyone. He isn't spoken of. Shabana asks them about him and the atmosphere changes. Surraiya aunty looks upset and tensed, Usmaan uncle looks angry. Ghulam quickly changes the topic. The rest of the night goes by in a jiffy. She is bored, and she has no company. She realises... she misses him.
oOo

So that's chapter one. Please do leave your feedback and let me know how it is :)
Edited by Jyo. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice. PM me when u update!
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New SS! hells yesss!
RES!
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Jyo, i've read this for the second time already! and its still as intriguing and beautiful as it was the first time i read it!

i love how you have built on their story with small intervals in between...we get an insight into their lives. You've written it so well! its really subtle and flows with perfection.

i like the connection between Zain and Aaliya...however i'm left wondering where Zain is?! why was osman angry and surraiya unhappy when they mentioned his name! really gripping i must say!
Aaliya tu miss kergi hi ussay main bhi miss ker rahi hoon ussay!😆

can't wait to read the next chapter! you better update soonish...i'm dying to read more of this perfection!🤗

i must say the concept is really gripping and unique! i'm left waiting for more 😳

oh and do i even need to say that you are one hell of a writer? its more of an established fact now! i adore your writing! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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first part is really mindblowing.Zain and Aliya really cute.they get along in a short time.now where is Zain?why he didn't come to meet Aliya?
can't wait to read more.update soon.
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Jyo.🤗 I don't usually read SS/ FF/OSs, but thank you for PMing this one to me.😆 Yeah, to my surprise, it kept me scrolling down, for more.
I loved the intro ! Aaliya & Zain seem to be sweet, dignified & practical in here. Zain hawww ! How sweet & so typically boyish. Can't keep his room clean!😆 Their initial bonding was quite cute and respectful.Curious to know, what you've done to Zain, towards the end.
Will be waiting to read on how the story progresses. So PM me, when u update next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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eeeks! res res imma be back soon xD
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awesome
very nice concept
very curious about Zain...
what happened???
Awww AL-Ya misses him,,,,
pls continue soon...
pls pm me the next updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RESERVED! Will read after getting back from work!
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