||*Flames Of The Mist*||*FF Collab* *Part 1 Pg15* *IMP NOTE PG 25* - Page 16

Originally posted by: ZaYaFan1

A PM for me too please 😉 Wonderful !! Eagerly waiting to read more 😊

Originally posted by: VildanaROSID

Awesome

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

Your most welcome 😃

And you don't need to thank me for reading it, am actually lucky to read such an awesome story by Kiret and you 😳

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Wow part one was amazing just like the beginning of a movie Aliyah's upset and I felt her pain and when she bumped into person and they argue lol typical and when they meet again before exiting the airport their arguments are so funny because it's an intellectual argument with big words which is always more entertaining... Well then she asks are you zain so how does she know him?? Confused and now I can only wait till the next Uodate! I really hope it's soon lol thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
poor aaliya... Felt bad for her dad
loved her pov
continue soon
thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: Jannat94

loved their first meeting and Aliya's POV

waiting for zain side

thanx 4 the PM

waiting for next

Originally posted by: -Hinaloveasya-

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Awesome update guys

I must say u guys are amazing the dialogues , description and expressions are described beautifully

Ghulam suffering from a disease don't know the name of the disease

Btw why Aliya is going there n what she' s gonna do there

Last but not the least i really liked the intro of Zain

Haye my Harshad is so handsome and attractive 😳

Thanks for the pm n update soon

Cant wait

Originally posted by: vinu127

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 This was such a great start! loved the way aliya's relation with both her father and friend was established in thne 1st chapter.👍🏼...

though i'm 99.9% sure that guy is Zain, i will still wait for it to become 100%...

loved Zaya's convos...

waiting desperately for the next part...

n yes thanq for the pm...

Originally posted by: taahir004

just awesome , Aaliya is so sad

and is this Zain by any chance ... it be must