CLASSY ! CLASSY! CLASSY!
One Bloody Hot Tarzan and Jane!
I cannot believe you put in the words as a matter of fact ----
whole scenario looked too filmy and cliche he wasn't going to let Zoya freeze to death in the sleeveless kurti that she was wearing !
Oh Yes but for such a flimy scene I did totally buy this book!!!!
Why didn't they sleep in the car, Oh right yes! Bonfire and Kiss wonderful concoction and then the chill winds...
Ok just one line didn't sit right with me --- Why would they regret the kiss again... I mean you would kiss once and go OH NO! I was under the Tarzan and Jane Spell but they bloody hell kissed and kissed and kissed and explored and rubbed the hub - Dubb - Dubb!
Seriously they will regret now.
Yeah yeah Rashid missing and Zoya Dad's I did send him to a gay BDMS club as a stripper.
On a serious note -
You are very stringent with the size of your updates.
And I would have liked to read what her screams said... Was it just incoherent yells or did it have words that didn't make sense.
Loved how you described the kiss.
I went into wild expressions of my mind when I read
" Carnal And Divine!" " Peak Experience"
"All consuming!" " Need and Passion"
Asad straddling! ☺️
Gosh so much described and so little done! I wanted a dry hump🤣
Ok I am JK! I can't ask you for smut ! Or maybe I can 😉
Love! Love! Love!
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