Ok so I have completed half of the update but the other half will take some time as I need it to be perfect, i need it to not sound too rushed or too slow or anything so I'll need some time! till then a shorty short promo!
"Asad and Zoya slept on either side of the bonfire, the ground wasn't comfortable enough but it had to do, it was better than the stuffy car where they couldn't even stretch a limb. Asad was too tired and was slowly beginning to drift off into the deepest level of sleep when Zoya's loud screams brought him out of it. His eyes sprung open in shock and when he registered a shivering Zoya writhing and screaming in her sleep while simultaneously thrashing her hands as if wanting to grope something to bring her out of her nightmare, he sprang up and ran towards her!"
And it continues further! this is actually the part where i have stopped i need to write more after this so your views and comments on it are welcome! any predictions on what is to happen after this and any suggestions on what you want after this is also welcome I'll see if I can add ur suggestions into the part!
@SimplySmile - You said the track of a jungle main mungle seems too cliche, I agree this track has been used and abused by a number of writers already and I'm not sorry for going the cliche way because this scene has a purpose which you will get to know in the coming update! Moreover I had this story set long before I posted the first Chapter (which i know was eons back π ) so I can't change the track I've set as it will abrupt the flow. I do take in demands or suggestions which I can add in the story but I don't change the track. Hope you understand now!
Edited by --starstruck-- - 10 years ago
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