Ariya SS :Nadaan Dil ki qurbaani -prt 6 pg 35 FINAL

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part 2    page  4
part 3.   page 12
part 4    page 15
part 5    page  24
PART6  PAGE  35
 
she came to office early today.no one was in the office so she sat at the conference table and started updated her diary. she was so engrossed in her work that she dint noticed her friends chotu and shree came, sat beside her and were reading her diary.

chotu: hailla ri yej akhru ke baare mei kiya likha tunne

riya jumped shouting at chotus voice which made the duo smile.

riya: kiya yar chotu hadh karte ho, daara diya mere ko

shree: waise ri tu bahit busy kiya likh rahi thi sys ke baare mei

riya blushed n said fumbly: woh. .. kuch nnnahii...

chotu: kuch to chuth raha hai shree

shree: ha chotu jalfi pata karna parega dammit

laughing they gave hi 5 to each other.

riya: kiya tum dono bacho ki tarha behave kar rahe ho.

shree was about to say something tabhi riya ki fone rang huwa.riya answered
hello
voice...
riya: hi kaha hai tu kitna deri say interzar karwaya tunne
voice...
riya: ha ha hum office mei hai. shree aur chotu bhi
voice...
riya: kiya par. ...
voice...
riya: ok love you too tkcr n see u soon

shree and chotu raised there eye brows

riya blushed : wow aj der mei ayega

shree: hai yeh pyar

tabhi rathod enter karta hai.
trio: gud morning sir

rathod: gud morning team. waise karan aur arjun kaha hai.

shree: woh dono nahi ae sir

rathod: yeh dono ki toh. . aur ayesha aur sakshi

riya: woh bhi late sir

rathod them now its urgent.

finally after half an hour karan arjun ayesha and sakshi reached etf.

they joined team and after meeting they sat chatting

karan tumahara shadi ka shopping hogaya kiya

karan looked at his fiancee and nodded no

rathod: what! doo din mei shadi hai aur tum logo ne shopping nahi ki. chal ajj hum sab chalte hai mall aur in dono. dulha aur dulhan ke liye shopping karte hai.

all shouted yipee except arjun who sat rudely.

karan : bhai aap bhi chalo nah

aejun looked at riya and said. no u go karan waise bhi mere jaane se kiya hoga. pasand toh tere ko ana chaheye nah.

shree chotu looked at riya sadly while riya trying very hard to stop the tears.

suddendly sakshi said to arjin : kiya arjun b a sport, tere bhai ka shadi hai aur tu nahi jaayega shopping ko.

rathod: ha hum sab jaa raahe hai bas

karan smiled and looked at riya : chal tu bhi khush nah. lets go n rock the mall

riya smiled and nodded.
ayesha : ha ri tu aur sakshi liza ko bhi kol karle sab saath mei maza ayega

all got up and went to shopping mall in etf suv. karan was going in arjuns car as dulhan was here but shree said : kiya karan abhi toh hamare saath chalo baad mei toh dulhan ke aage piche he ghumna hai.

listening to this everyone start laughing while two people kept silent.

karan,shree,ayesha went with rathod while sakshi, chotu n riya n liza went with arjun.

during the travelling in rathods car everyone were teasing karan while in arjuns car everyone were teasing the dulhan..sakshi infront with arjun said: liza ri kiya socha hai shadi mei pahenne ko. mei saari le loo...chotu said : haa aur mei shewani.riya smiled n said: chal dekhte hai while liza said yah mee too.

arjunz eyes were full tym on at the back seat.

finally they reached the mall and got off and went inside. they shopped and shopped. girls bought heavy suits and boys all same colored sherwani. dulha dhulhan ki bhi shopping ho gayi.assistant came with two suots and gave each to riya n sakshi to try there sizes.they went in trying room.
riya was trying inside but couldnt close her zip. she was thinking ab kisse bulao tabhi she looked outside n saw him there.she signalled him to enter her room.udhar rathod n arjun too came to fitting room to try there sherwanis.they entered the door tabhi light chali gayi.

tabhi arjun heard her meloudious voice : app aa gaye. lagta hai light chali gayi.woh mera top ka zip aap band kardenge

arjun pulled her towards him and started slowly caressly her back upwards towards her zip.
riya closed her eyes feeling his hands on her body shivering woth pleasure.
he slowly moved her hair side n kissed her back n riya moaned and moved his lips towards her bare shoulder then her nech n then her cheeks.
riya moaned turned and pulled him and they started kissing so passionately. tasting each other hungrily
her top fell down and arjun hungrily started biting her giving her his love marks.riya moaned his name.

suddenly lights came back. they both came to there sense n embarssed stood looking other side. suddenly arjun: woh i am sorry. saying this he moved out leaving riya in tears..as arjun came out from the fitting room, karan came to him. " bhai hogaya kaam. kaisa tha " he said while they moved towards the counter. tabhi karan turned back and so riya coming out from same room as arjun. at first he was so shocked. he looke at her n then arjun. quietly riya came with sakshi and stood beside them.

karan: ri how do u like ta suit

riya looked at arjun and then her suit. karan dint miss the look.
riya: its beautoful karan she said smiling

sakshi: mera wala bhi bahut khubsurath hau karan. chal ab chal ke jaldi se pay karde.arjun aoo nah

arjun turned looked at karan n riya nad went with sakshi

they paid for the clothes and moved out tabhi rathod saw them n called the to the suv " kiya yar yeh dulha aur dulhan kitne der lagate hai. aur arjun tu bhi.

jaise he woh jaane waalw thee tabhi kuch log aakar larkiyo ko cherne lage.etf boys came with bang and fought with them.
gunday mei se ek riya ke paas jakar usko zabarjasti karta hai piche se karan dekhta hai gusse mei unki taraf jaane wala hota hai tabhi arjun aakar uski khub pitai karta hai. arjun kicking him" meri roya ko chuwe ga.itni himaath.

riya: sir stop it woh mar jayega sir. . pliz ap ko meri kasam

tabhi he stops and looks at riya aur uski face haath mei lekar " riya tu thik hai nah. tujhe kuch huwa toh nahi nah.

riya: m fine sir

arjun : thank god saying this he kissed riyaas forhead.karan ke toh payero taale haise zameen he nikal gaya. he was shocked. bhai aur riya. this thought was roaming in his head again n again.tabhi he heard rathod calling him

" karan kiya huwa sab thik hai nah aur riya aur raute kaha hai "

karan moved towards ariya with all the rest team member.
karan hugging riya : tum thik ho nah

riya smiled n hugged him : ha app fikar mat kijiye mei thi hu woh arjun sor ne us gunday ko. ...

rathod : kaun hai yeh log.shree pata lagao kis group ke hai yeh

sakshi: thank god sab thik hai aur riya bhi warna shadi ka kiya hota

all laughed.

ayesha: ha chalo ab karan aur riya ki shadi ka preparation bhi karna hai...

karan: ha lets go and he lift riya in his arms and took her to the suv while rest ofvthe team hooted at the love birds except choree and arjun. riya looked sadly at choree n arjun. .




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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
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Originally posted by: khemanisarita

awesome start
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thanks sarita dir 😊
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wow dear...
awesome start.
just loved it.
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Wow
Awesome start
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Omg ye kya tha...just awesome yaar


I mean this is so perfect sad love story of ariya...poor th2m

Ariya in love but riya is, , married to karan...


Haye dono kitane majboor hai...

Arjun khud ko riya se dur nahi rakh pa raha hai..lekin kuch nahi kar sakata...


Feel so sad...


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Awesome
Ariya love each other
par Riya ki shadi Karan se ho rahi hai
Poor Ariya
waiting for the next part
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interesting situation... 
Ariya love eachother...even Choree knws it but Ri is getting married to Karan...why???
Karan too have doubt abt Ariya...Interesting very interesting...
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Wow quite different n interesting concept dr...!!!!!
OMG Karan n Riya going to marry soon but it's quite clear that Arjun n Riya love each other thn wht is all this happening...!!!!!! Awww even Choree know about that were teasing her thn why she is getting married to his bro...??????? Don't they both cheat her...?????
Let's see how the story unfolds...!!!!!
Loved it...!!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!
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Superb and emotional start.
Loved it a lot.
Uff...
Main toh confusiyai gayi hu...
Continue sooonish..
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