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Amina

@-Ammie-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

ooo! 😆☺️

damn this Os was romantic!

Sruu! this was so fabolous! loved it! you have written it down so well!

and the ending...wat can i say, i've fallen in gutter 🤣

lol on a serious note tho it was beautiful! you have penned down the emotions so well, speechless! one of my favs on ZaYa so far!

looking forward to reading more from you 🤗

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Gawd!! I wish this would be aired :P

You actually sent me off to dreamland!! This was so romantic!!

AAh!! Bliss...Write more please :D

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

20

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow super romantic one.keep writing

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Hajra

@-Haju-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Amazing

Such a sweet and romantic os

Too good

Really like the concept

Ending was awesome

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Amira.

@..Amira..

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Flawless deariii <3
M on mobile so chota comment sorry

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dmgomg

@dmgomg

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This was so beautifully written. Please me to your PM list to notify me of future stories :)

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Anaya Ali

@khisher

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

wanted more of it but from beginning to end it was amazingg

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

That was beautiful 😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Apologies, for reading this late.

Well then, let me tell you, it was a treat to read it. Loved the way you expressed Zain and Aliya.

Love.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Sorry, double post. 😆

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 10 years ago

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