ArIya OS: Sententious Surprises

Enjoyed it to the fullest...!!!!! Mehvish was super cute...!!!!!

Loved how she wished her daddy dearest...!!!!! 

OMG super express barged in to her parents room n saw thm in such a compromising condition...!!!!

Riya's surprise in the end was adorable...wish that I could read Arjun's reaction on that...!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Wonderful ending...!!!!!

Naughty Ariya 😆😆

Beautiful 

Thanks for the PM 😊

did you just post here?

*thus* *dead*

unres 

oh em gee what shock you gave me girl. cant you just send me a advance PM? your very first work and i could not get a chance to res first🤢 HUh so not fair.

ok ok coming back to the OS, i didnt read AsYa version so cant comment, but this ArIya version was super cute ! the name, Mehvish, is a unique name, and her antics were just so cute ! you are a brilliant writer as i had said earlier, you perfectly wrote her actions, the small points like how she observe her drawing, or talking to Boo😆 SHOOO SWEET, i want to pull her cheek and yours too😆

i was thinking she might be trying to surprise her daddy by her drawing, but didnt think it will be daddy's Bday gift. so cute and so pure at heart. i am in love with her, Raz, truly. she is so adorable girl.

why cant AsYa or ArIya just close the goddamn door during their ...ehm ehm...work?😡 the poor girl disturbed them, i am more concerned about her, what if she had seen something, ehm ehm, what she should not see at her age?😡😆🤣 it would have scarred her for life😆😆😡 Idiots next time atleast put a do not disturb board outside😆 

the last bit was dhamaka. ahaan so my recent Fav cutie pie gonna be a Big SIS. i bet her lil sis will be the most pampered lil sis on earth, she will get a amazing big sis.

loved the OS, Raz, please do post more on ArIya if you can. and 

UPDATE SILK RIBBONS !!!!!!😡😡

With love

Me😆

Such a sweet OS..Loved it!!

it was awesome and beautiful os.

just loved it