FF - Bas Haq Hai Mera... Updated on PG 13

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#3333ff">πŸ˜›As per latest promo... I thought of writting a new FF and though I'm not new here but this is my first writing here...😳😳
<font color="#3399ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">INDEX</font>
<font color="#3399ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Part 1 - see below</font>
<font color="#3399ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Part 2 - pg 5</font>
<font color="#3399ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Part 3 - pg 8</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Part1</font>



<font size="5" color="#ff33cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Jallu seeing jodha with Sujamal and is shocked seeing her hugging some other man... Uske baad se...</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#6633cc">Jodha- bhai sa yeh aap kya bta rahe hai Shensha ki Jaan ko khatraa hai... JAldi btaiye na kiss se khatra hai... Hum unhe kuch hote Nahi dekh sakte kyunki... Kyunki... Hum ...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Sujamal- hum kya jodha ruk kyu gayi...</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jallu(thinking)- jAldi btaiye na kya keh rahi hai aap kahi aap humse mohabbat... Nahi Nahi jalal tum yeh kya soch rahe ho abhi tho jodha begam tumhe apne dost hi samajh to hai and thinking thinking... Suddenly interrupting jalal's thoughts...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">jodha said- kyunki hum prem karte hai Shensha se Bahut prem hum unke bina Jee Nahi sakte bhai sa Jee Nahi sakte aur agar unpar koi Sankat aane se pehle humse ghuzarna hoga...</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jalal(thinking)- jodha begam humse mohabbat karti hai... Iss ka matlab sirf hum unse prem Nahi karte voh bhi humse mohabbat karti hai... Ya khuda Hum aapke shukr ghuzar hai ki Hume jodha begam mili Jo humse itna prem Jo karti hai...
</font><font color="#ff33ff">Sujamal- jodha tum Shensha se itna prem kab se Karne lagi...</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jo- pta Nahi bhaisa kabse unse prem Karne lagi parantu hum unse prem karte hai bus itna jaante hai...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jalal- ( thinking) accha Hume abhi unke samne jaana chahiye varna jodha begam Jo baat unke bhai ke Saath Nahi Karna chahiye voh kar rahi hai... Aur badi ammi yeh kya kar rahi hai voh humare aur jodha begam ke beech daral daal na chahti hai aur hum bhi dekhte hai ki badi ammi humse jodha begam ko dur Karne ke liye kis hadd tak jaa sakti hai... Hume shama kar dijiye jodha begam Hume aapke Saath yeh sab Karna pad raha hai...</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Maham(thinking)- yeh jalal ko pyar karti hai yeh sab kya hai aur abhi kyu batayi pta Nahi jalal ab kya karenge... Tensed...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jalal walking 2wards jodha begam and Sujamal... And caught hold of jodha's hand and pulled her 2wards him and jodha landed with a bang on jala's chest...</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jalal(whispered)- jodha begam hum abhi aapke Saath Jo kar rahe hai usse dil se mat lijieye ga... 😭😭Jodha confuseπŸ˜•πŸ˜• and started to say something and jalal shouted-😑😑 bas ghustak aapki himmat kaise hui kisi gher mard ko chune ki usse gale lagane ki aur yeh kaun hai... Aap aaj tak Hume Nahi aapnaye Iska Karan kya hai hum samajh Gaye aap iss se prem karti hai na aur aap iske liye Hume Shensha-e-hind ko thukratii hai Hume... Chaliye humare Saath...
Maham(thinking)-iss ka matlab jalal par humari baton ka Asar pada aaj hum Bahut khush hai aaj Akhir kar Hume jodha begam se chutkara miljayega... Maham over confidently decided to go from there and went... Jalal saw that...<img src="http://www.freesmileys.org/emoticons/emoticon-cartoon-013.gif" alt="" /></font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jodha- Shensha yeh aap kya keh rahe hai aur aap jis gher mard ke baare Mai baat kar rahe hai woh hamare bhai hai...😭😭😭</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jalal- hum jaante hai jodha begam humne aap Dono ki baate Sunli hai aur Hume aap pe pura vishwaas hai..</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jo- tho phir aap ne humse yeh sab baate kyu kaha... Pta hai aapke yeh baton se humare dil ko Kitna thes paunchi hai... Sobbing...😭😭😭</font><font color="#0033ff"> Sujamal understood tht this is the right time to escape and gone from there with satisfaction tht jalal didn't misunderstood jodha... <img src="http://www.freesmileys.org/emoticons/emoticon-anime-010.gif" alt="" /></font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jalal- kneeled down with jodha and said- jodha begam hum jaante hai isi liye humare muh se yeh sab sunke aap ki kya halat ho rahi hai lekin Humare halat ko bhi samjhiye hum yeh sab Nahi Karna chahte hai lekin Karna pad raha hai badi ammi ki vajah se vo hum Dono ko ek dusre se alag Karna chahti hai aur unhone na jaane kya kuch kaha hai aapke baare mai aur hame vishwaas Nahi ho rahi hai ki humari badi ammi Hume aapse dur Karne ke liye iss hadd tak jaa sakti hai aur humne yeh sab isi liye kiya hai kyunki hum dekhna chahte hai ki voh kis hadd tak jaa sakti hai hamare nazaroon Mai aapko neecha dikhane... Hume ho sake tho muaf kar dijiye aur kya aap Humara Saath dengi iss Jung Mai...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jo- not believing wat jalal just said and thought I should support him right now and thought this is the time when maham's khulasa is to be done and wiped her tears and said ha Shensha hum aapke Saath denge iss Jung Mai and hugged him very tightly and said tht Shensha pls never ever do this to me again as I will not be able to live if u said this words again...😭</font>
<font color="#6633cc">Jalal- surprised with this gesture of jodha and said to her softly jodha begam hum aapse Bahut mohabbat karte hai and he promised tht he will never say to her like this...</font>
<font color="#ff33ff">Jodha- shocked with his sudden approach blushed and hugged him even more tightly... And all this while both the couple were on cloud9 and they were finally feeling home... Sweet home and they understood that they complete and other and finally felt whole and sat there for 10mins( u can add as much time as u want) ☺️...<img src="http://www.freesmileys.org/emoticons/emoticon-char-040.gif" alt="" /></font>
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Precap- jalal addressing jodha in DEK and jodha lost her harem and it's overtaken by rukks...
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<font size="5" color="#cc0000">Guys I know this is utter crap and very ugly story but pls do like and cmnt... 😊 and may I continue...πŸ˜•</font>
<font color="#3399ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">sorry if u feel maine kuch jyada hi emcons laga diπŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜›</font>





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it is awesome,different,do continue soon.
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Wow amazing start πŸ‘
If this with only happen in the show I with be so happy but I can only dream of this happening in the show .
Plz plz continue soon 
Tanx for the pm 
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Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Wow amazing startπŸ‘

If this with only happen in the show I with be so happy but I can only dream of this happening in the show .
Plz plz continue soon
Tanx for the pm

thnx for ur cmnt and it means a lot for me... 😊
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

it is awesome,different,do continue soon.

thnx I will surely continue... 😊
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fabulous start
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

fabulous start

please continue

thank u and I surely continue... 😊
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kya aisa ho saktha hai

pta Nahi as it's totally my imagination 😊
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Lovely sweety , kash aisa hota β€οΈπŸ˜›πŸ˜³ Do continue soon my reddy reddy nikky sweety πŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—
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Lovely sweety , kash aisa hotaβ€οΈπŸ˜›πŸ˜³Do continue soon my reddy reddy nikky sweetyπŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—

thnx for ur cmnt and will surely continue and my original name is Ramya and u can call me Amy too as many of the members can't pronounce my name or remember it then tanhi suggested it and u can also call of u wish...πŸ€—