~Remember Me - Zaya SS~ Chapter 2 Updated. - Page 4

Originally posted by: catty2000

^^Hi Sani !

Thanks a lot for the PM ! Mention not... :)

I liked your way of writing !

Quiet good ... and kind of fresh to the feel ! Thanks 😃

Nice start to a story ... Leaves the reader with a lot of questions !

All packed up with mystery and a set out background for the story ...

I love the change of characters here ...

Aliya ... a doctor, huh ? 😉 I imagined her in a doctor's uniform. She looks cute in my imagination.😆

BTW what's up with Zain ?

Is he like gonna undergo a memory loss ... ? You will come to know as the story proceeds.😉

As for your title suggestion,

I don't know where you are exactly heading with the story ...

But from what I gather ... I struck on two three names like ...

Winter Blossom (well, it is always associated with remembering someone because blossoms in winter is rare ... 😆)

Till Eternity (As in remember me till eternity)

You and Me ... Forever

Crappy ? Yeah, but that's all that struck me at the moment ... 😉 I will think about them after i complete 2 chps.😊

Waiting for the next part *eagerly* updating the Character sketch today or tomorrow.😛

Do update soon ...

And add me to your PM list !

P.S. : Sorry to bother you with long comments .. they get even longer with lengthy chapters ... 😆 I looovvveee long comments.

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Originally posted by: zola007

Hey Coco !

Sound interesting !

Loved the prologue ! 😉

So here Zain is sick and Aliyah is a doctor !

And Our Asya too is here ! 😆

Eager to read more ! 😛

Continue soon !

Thanks for the pm ! 🤗

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

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Originally posted by: -SB-

Peary...🤗

Havent talked to you in a while.

Thanks btw. Asya was pinny's gift but he didnt like it.😭