Hiie munz 🤗
It was a nice read I enjoyed it. You changed certain aspects of Zaya, yet managed to make it easy for us readers to relate :)
Zain was a workaholic with quite a temper and it was lovely to see Suraiyyah speak for Aliya, that was a nice touch. Osman doesn't seem to be doing well, and the family's concern was heart-warming.
Coming to Zaya, I loved the charm of a newly wedded couple, as Zain continued in his ways failing to realize the new aspect in his life, a big one indeed. Not that he didn't respect her, but in his anger he had lost control and just blurted those words with no understanding of her dilemma. What was beautiful was that the moment Aliya tells him the reason she couldn't be there, he softens and apologizes :)
Thanks for the lovely read. Do write more :)
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