Karna-Arjun SS : A Lonely Evening (last Part-Page-29) - Page 6

Another lovely update.. I was touched by its simplicity .. it was a simple yet heart touching update.. who could have thought these two sworn in enemies can be engrossed in such child like play.. It was more like two brothers playing their childhood fav game and as you mentioned their parents watching in pride..😊

beautiful and serene writing.
do continue.
it would be great if i can be tipped via PM for the updates.
thanks.
enjoyed it.

What a beautifully written update, Aru di.

Thanks for the lovely update Aru...❤️ you for this take on Karna -Arjun..😛

@riti thank you for another long comment, another analyzing one yes i wanna show for sometimes they went back to their childhood where everything was simple

@lumos thanks for reading and commenting on my story and giving such nice comment i have added u as buddy will send pm of the update

@kalyani thanks for the complement i always try to be descriptive in everything that helps the readers

@archu thanks for ur love and such a lovely comment yes i wanted to show that for a while karna forgot all his jealousy and bitterness arjun too forgot the deadly rivalry all because of the childish play due to mother nature

@bhas for the first time you commented on my story thanks for that will update soon

@prateti thanks

TY for lovely writing i really enjoyed reading pls update soon and if possible pm i happen to stumble on this enjoyed it

taruna thanks for reading my story and commenting i have added u on buddy list will send pm

btw thanks to shiningstar, diala and sabhyata for commenting on earlier update.

@shiningstar thanks for such nice comment i am happy that u liked my writing

@diala yes with ur suggession m updating fast now whr r u

@sabhyata yes they r anyway rocking whether as blood thirsty enemy or as brother

@Rosefairy...
WOW...mindblowing update👏...


u made the simple story into a worthwhile one...such a excellent thought.👏😉.
Kaju relishing the pebble game jointly unknowing of the fact they r in opposite side...u brilliantly brought out the childish nature of two great archers that was hidden inside them...they badly missed this moment in their childhood days as the fate seperated them..the most favourite scene of mine was thier parents proudly n happily watching that scene with full of joy filling their hearts😳...

aww Karna's baby brother 😉 loved dis nature lover arjun always lost in his own world less caring about the real world and so finaaly arjun got a companion to play dis tadpole game on the river.. nd yess loved dat prakriti narayan in his krishna avatar indra dev and surya dev are too engrossed in this divine scene where dese 2 arch enemies unknown of their brotherly relation is playing d tadpole game haha even I used to try dis game wid my brother..btw update soon!!

wow it was an awesome story & magical ending