Karna-Arjun SS : A Lonely Evening (last Part-Page-29) - Page 5

Lovely And Shundor Update !! Bechaare Dono !

seems like Karna not even followed his warrior moved but his casual moves too bare bhaiya ne sahi pehchana chote ko!! nice description of nature btw beautiful update waiting for d next 😊

@kalyani thanks yes Karna is like us doesn't find beauty in small things
@prateti dhanyabaad
@sohini kya comment hai thank you huh brothers han akhir bhai hi to tha and remember karna was jealous abt arjun so he tend to notice his moves

@Rose fairy...
Such a fabulous update👏...
Very beautifully narrated the Karna n Arjun's feelings...really awesome..each n every sentence had a deep meaning in it...thank u so much for this😊..
n i am expecting u to write more like this...

btw,thanks for the pm..

Aru.. lovely update again.. Sorry I read it very late.. I wish you increase the pace a little please 😊

just went through the latest update how rocking are these brother's together.Please do write more

Arjun was so engrossed in natural beauty that he forgot about even himself along with his surroundings, he forgot that he is the celebrated archer, warrior prince Arjun, women's desired lion among the men and he is now in Hastinapur which is ruled by the people hates him, he already had forget about Karna being present there. the eternal explorer, inquisitive,innocent, mischievous child in him overpowered his all other identities.
The Sun started setting and half of the round figure had been disappeared behind water of Ganges but the reflection of other half in the river still was making the Sun god looking like full still , the water of river was calm as the breeze blowing was very gentle it didn't create any wave in mother Ganges, looking at that suddenly a mischievous idea occurred in Arjun's humorous brain.
He picks up a pebble and threw into the river in such twist of fingers that the pebble started diving in river just like a tadpole and after diving 10 times it dipped in middle of Ganges such a force was in Arjun's throw. this tadpole dance had been a favorite game of him and Krishna whenever Madhav and his Parth were together on a riverside they used to play this game and used to have competition whose pebble goes more far and after how many dives and maximum times Madhav used to win the game. But still Arjun never gets satisfaction in playing this game with anyone else other than his sakha. he tried to play with his brothers too but none had this skill , Brother bheem used to throw pebbles with such might that those stones used to burst into dust on other side of river bank, brother Yudhisthir's pebbles never had dives, Nakul-Sahadev could manage to dive pebbles a bit but not anywhere near tadpole dance, so Arjun gave up trying to play the game with anyone else. After so many days he felt like playing this game alone.
Arjun's pebble created a stir inside the river and waves after waves got created, that spread the colours of western sky that reflected in river all over the the river to the far eyes could see creating another soothing sight for eyes.
With this adding beauty in the sight Arjun's excitement increased and he continued his tadpole dance . He started throwing pebble after pebble creating high leveled wave in Ganges. Every time pebbles went further and even small fishes started dancing on the edge of the wave. The sight turned magical with Arjun's skill now.

Karna had just started enjoying the beauty of nature. Everything started seeming new to him, last rays of the sun , colorful western sky , chirping of the returning birds, gentle breeze , as if he never did see this before. the beauty of mother nature started having own magic over him , wiping away the heaviness of his heart that is his companion since childhood. A feeling of joy was taking its place in his heart.
And then Arjun started with that tadpole dance, with amusement in his eyes Karna kept witnessing the childish act of his arch rival. He smiled but this time it was not a smile of sarcasm. The calmness of nature had evoked the long lost simplicity in his heart, so his smile was a truly pleased one. As if he was not watching his arch nemesis but an innocent child playing in front of him. He started enjoying this magical tadpole dance forgetting that it was Arjuna who was playing this.
The waves created by Arjun's pebble started getting higher and at last the water splashed upon Karna as the rock he was sitting on was nearer to the river and that made him conscious about the surroundings. He realized he was enjoying the magical game played by Arjun, means he was till now appreciating the skill of him that too as silent spectator. Doesn't that means Arjun will think he can even make his arch rival speechless with such magic?
A thought occurred in Karna's mind, why not giving a try by himself?Let's see how unique Arjun's magic is. He took a pebble and with twist of finger threw it in river. the pebble reached where the reflection of the setting sun was there after diving atleast 20 times creating a big wave with diving of colorful fishes.

now this was turn of Arjun to be amused , at last he became aware again that he was not alone here, and in next thought he was almost spellbound to see karna's skill of the game he thought he mastered, but his amazement was momentary a childish wish of having a competition again got irresistible from his side upon realizing after madhav there exists another suitable competitor of him, his arch rival himself. He again took pebble and continued the tadpole dance.
Karna too upon realizing that he too possesed the same skill became interested in the very game and picked pebble again.

two arch enemy got engrossed to a game that more suit two brothers,being unaware of they really were.

Even the sun god forgot to set , a big cloud near him forgot to cover him , both fathers Suryadev and Indradev came to witness this rarest moment of their sons which will be never seen again.

The divine lord Narayan smiled in his earthly avataar Krishna, Nature, Prakriti is none other his sister Devi Parvati, as playful as her brother, today she is finding happiness in the magical play of her two sons who supposed to be thirsty for each others blood, his bua kunti can abandon one but for his sister prakriti both are same, she nourished both with same affection, if after getting hurt by own children everyday today she is finding slight happiness by playing with these two delicate sons of her that happiness should be prolonged and uninterrupted.

none will disturb these two brothers in this evening muttered Leeladhar.

wow two best archers showing "dil to bachcha h ji"
nice update aru

oh my.. such a lovely update, unique and highly original thought, superb, vivid narration. 👏⭐️

@srishti thanks we all have a child inside us then why not them?

@cots thanks dear for complement u didn't read my earlier update plz have a look