Karna-Arjun SS : A Lonely Evening (last Part-Page-29) - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ! The End Was So Soothing !! Loved Har-Gauri's Convo. And The Last Line !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
its over...god i cant believe it...its over ...
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Feel so sad this OS had to end. only destruction lies after this. Such a happy ending, if only the India had a better fate. why did the brothers had to be destined against each other? I feel like crying. so much to know, so much to share and everything had to be lost in mere hatred.
The ending was lovely Aru di. See, it has made me so emotional. Kunti's conversation with Draupadi was beautiful, specially Panchali's description. Sometimes we wish things would have gone the other way. Often we regret our wrong decisions. But what is done is done. You can not change he past. "Time and tide wait for none."
I can imagine the innocence of Arjun, the aura of Suryaputra while offering his play. I can feel the dilemma in Mata Parvati's heart.
But of everything, I can never forget the last look they cast on each other, a link to their hidden relationship.
It was a beautiful ending Aru di. I wish we could have more but more of a good thing would have spoiled the story. Yet I am eager to read upcoming stories and updates from you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am feeling sad not only for the two brothers whose fates parted them but also because this wonderful story is ending.And you wrote it in such a touching way.Loved how you showed Mata Parvati feeling sad for her unfortunate sons.Also loved the silent bond that developed between the brothers unknowingly.Only if their destinies had been different...😭
Now can we hope for an updatevof the ArSu FF?😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aah the way destiny made their way as u mentioned in ur FF 😭 my KaJu😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant! Written so luvly
Edited by asu129 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear it was another wonderful part of your story πŸ‘
awwe sometimes innocence brings down ego so easily(no offence to both KaJu fansπŸ˜†)
just like the sundri's mischief hm.. i liked the nameπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
this is what i like about kaju their emotional connection which they could never figure out😭
i love your story
please continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wah,arudi...very emotional part this was...
now,i really hate the destiny...KaJu...i miss ur union so much in real epic...so sad...but u made it,di...i am very happy for that.😳..
thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow i read all parts at one go. i loved how arjun unknowingly taught karna to appreciate the small things in life.
you wrote it so well. arjun's attachment with krishna remembering him every moment. karna's jealousy of arjun getting so much of time with krishna.
i loved how u blended shiv parvati into it.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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