New story : Untitled... Chapter 1 Page 8

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Okay you could beat me all for starting again a story and not uploading the old ones🤢! But this story is on a special demand of some one very very special and close to me. 😉

No relation with show or ETF! I will use just characters of the show. It will be all about friendship, love, breakups, bitrayals, heartbreaks.

I really dont know what to put the title . All thanks to you know who😡.. ( i really cant put what you have suggested gal🤣. Am seriously scared of beatings😒 .)

okay simply the CS is


Arjun Rawte
(Devdas+hates daaru+but not a bramhachari)

Riya Mukharjee
(Kickass girl+do lots of EA)

Aisha Kapoor
(Lady Dabbang+scared of she knows what)

Sameer Rathod
(secret crush of lady dabbang+ Mr. Know Nothing)

SakShi Anand
(bewafaa sanam+ ex bff)


NOTE

ANY WRONG CHOICE OR ANY WRONG DESECION WONT MAKE THE CHARACTER BAD OR NEGATIVE. SO READ THIS NOTE BEFORE THINKING ANYONE NEGATIVE.

*caps for only getting attention on those wrods. No intention of Virtual shouting*



I will post the prologue soon.
Hope you will like it all ( gal😆)!



~'o'~'o'~'o'~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A story needs a title...but life dont need any title.

I am serious. Let this be untitled always. 😳 if anyone will get any suggestion about the title after prologue. Most welome ⭐️


Prologue

"No ! You cant do this at all ! I dont believe in this''

'' errr..sadly thats the truth''

''great... Just great''!!


25th December
2008

Aisha POV



''OMG! Its christmas day and I am so so much excited'', I typed through my not so better phone but with good kepy pad. "Thats great! So what will you do"? Her reply came. '' Nothing much! I will go to college.. Guess its our reunion party too.. And old friends..will do masti, and fun i was so excited for the reunion in college. ''Go enjoy''. She again replied. '' Yep.. But I am gonna miss you ..haha I typed back. You will come soon na Baby she joked. errr... Not that word Damn itt!! I groaned and typedAarghh. Some 9-10 cry+smiley emos came as her reaction and I shut that app.

5 hours later

"Hey
anyone here"?
I typed again.
"You back?? This soon?😲?: she was a little surprised.
"Yeah..i am ", I replied.
"How was the reunion party?: she was so excited to know about it. And as usual I, never hide anything to her.

it was..errr.. Nothing: i was not okay at that time. Anyone wont even could be okay after getting so much shocks in one day.

"There is something.. You are telling me or not Aish.. She terribly wanted to know what is it. But I didnt know if i was ready to open up with that! But i Spilled.. Come on I cant hide anything form this lady.

Err.. Rii! Actually.." and I started what have happened in this not so lucky christmas day.

After some time of the chat!
"I will kill her damn it''she replied😲🤢.

"dont ever try.. You will be charged with a murder case..". I replied to her and some more 10-15 cry/laugh smiley emos came.


Chaper one
[just a gilmpse]


"thhuddd"... Aaahhh..this is really hurting woman.
"Then take one more'', the girl plasterd her another five fingers marks on the other side of his cheeks.

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"Damn it Arjun? Tum Riya ka picha kyun kar rahe the? Barked Aisha. 😡

"ye tumhe , mujhe do thappad khilane se pehele sochna chahiye tha Aisha🤢...kam se kam tumhari dost se thappad toh nahi padte.. He said look err glaring at riya who glared at him even more with deadly eyes😳



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Okay so done with the prologue.
No idea how it was. But it was for real😆hahahahaha

hope you wll you too like this (you know who?🤗)
and you all!
Thanks for reading😃
do share your views.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow queenie 
interesting cs 👏 
plz pm me when u update 
and plz plz plz update LE JAYE JAHAN ZINDEGI 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting cs
waiting for prologue
plz pm me 
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#5
Interesting concept
loved it
continue soon
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Awesome concept...

Waiting for prologue...
 
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gumnaam hai koi..badnaam hain koi :P😆
Kya bolu main, contd soon vampuuu <3
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Updated the prologue. Hope you will all like it.😆!
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Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome concept...


Waiting for prologue...


Continue soon...


thanks sneha dear!

Originally posted by: skrafty

Interesting concept
loved it
continue soon


thanks

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

interesting cs
waiting for prologue
plz pm me


Thanks dear!
Updated. Please check!

Originally posted by: sdutta

wow queenie

interesting cs 👏
plz pm me when u update
and plz plz plz update LE JAYE JAHAN ZINDEGI


aww..I like the name. ❤️
thank you!
Yep i wll update. But just need some time.

Thanks sarita.
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Originally posted by: SilentSilver

gumnaam hai koi..badnaam hain koi :P😆

Kya bolu main, contd soon vampuuu <3


alle mai bhuli gayi thi this song😉
thank you! Silent priii🤗