The Zaya Chronicles 87 pg56 05.09.14 - Page 29

Hannah

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Jyo.

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Sorry for not commenting frequently. But this chronicle, number 62, is sheer brilliance! I am in love with the way you write. It's very VERY poetic <3 Just the way you portray their emotions and everything that the characters go through, I feel like I am living their lives? I don't know how to explain it. I'll be looking forward to the next chronicle. Keep up the amazing work! :)

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javeria

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Wow I love it when you write an update in poetry form.

Brilliantly written

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mridula

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cute part and poety.i can imagen that on zaya.

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Loquacious_Aash

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I know this chronicle was about ZAYA... but one line stood out for me.. "if we ask Daddy..." A childs innocence and blind trust on its parents that they can do anything ❤️ One of the purest emotions in teh world👏

"if Dadi says sorry to Chachi then we can change her character to someone nicer."

So easy for kids na? Say sorry and move pn.. we adults shud learn some lessons provided that sorry is genuine n meant form heart

EDWARD 🤣 and yesterdays epi showed him ready to do some blood sucking😆

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Loquacious_Aash

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😭

life is so unfair... i am out and u give out invitaions😭

do i get one freeebie😆???

Coming to 50...

u sure showed all fifty shades ...of love😆

sure was a shocker😆

Loved ur defination of LOVE 😳

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Loquacious_Aash

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Beautiful and poignant <3

it had so many little little caring gestures that even tho it was supposed to be a sad scene it made me smile in that awww manner :)))

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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

how can a woman who doesnt want to see her nanga punga hubby be pregnant 🤣

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Loquacious_Aash

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another masterpiece. the way u wring the maximum emotions in minimum words.. its a talent !!👏

i had a friend in GEET forum... u remind me so much of her. writing style i mean 😳

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Hannah

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Nivriti

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So what is it about they are fighting now?

And yes, Zain is Like that princess! :)

Amazing..

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