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after reading 50, i thought can emotional drabbles get better? u proved-Yes they can...with ch.51!
it was lovely as ususal!
lemme tell u what i loved...
1. u never mentioned in the drabble what the revelation was... yet we all understood that he was not Zain ABDULLA...isn't that the beauty of ur writing👏
2.the way aliya gave him his space unlike hindi dailysoap leads who wan't to be their ML's tail!😡
3."I wouldn't judge you if you wanted to." she said quietly was that not what Zain actually want..he did not wan't his YaYa to feel he was week..so sensitively potrayed..take a bow my friend!👏
4. YaYa exactly noes how she can make her KitKit smile whatsoever the situation may be!😊
as always... u proved that u r the BEST in writing emotional drabbles..
this was about 51 and about 52 i will post in the seperate thread...
so waiting for 53...
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