The Zaya Chronicles 87 pg56 05.09.14 - Page 24

After reading first five parts, I fell in love with your brilliant writing style and story telling format. I am hook to them and read all updates in one go.

These chronicles are stupendous, cute and adorable. You are a very talented writer.

The best thing I like it that you show Aliya an independent girl.

My most favorite chronicle is the very sweet and innocent conversation between Aru and sana. That part was hilarious and I like the fairy tale characters assigned to everyone in their family. The girls are so damn cute and truly the princess of their chacha whereas said is very possessive for his dearest chachi. I love it when said hugged Aliya and warned his chaho to never dared to trouble his chachi, junior Abdullah is very brave and have some guts.

There is one part which brought tears in my eyes when Aliya lost her family and Zain wasn't around to help her out from the grief but later he make up for his stupid mistake and took Aliya out from the shell. That was very emotional and was written superbly.

I love little moments Aliya and Zain shared in peace and comfort in each other. Their journey to discover love for each other and zain accepting it.

In all, I love and enjoyed a lot reading every update.

Waiting eagerly to read next chronicle.

P. S. Congratulations on 1K+ viewers and for completing fifty chronicles.

Poor zain he was devastated and broken on hearing the new revelation and truth of his life. He is very lucky to have Aliya to share his grief at every step.

The end of second Drabble was hilarious. 'Mission Aaliya isn't pregnant.' LOLZ 🤣

Zain , his Aliya and their cute and funny mission names 😆. I like your take on the current promo.

Anyway

Loved both the shots. As said read 2nd one already but its always good to read your writing again. 1st was so heart breaking, poor Zain getting to know now that all throughout what was his ultimate truth was nothing more than an illusion. His parents are not his parents and his identity looking with a question mark in front of him. Amazingly projected Zain's shock and hurt and Aaliya supporting him. As I always say that it takes paras for people to explain one scene especially emotional quotient but you put it beautifully in just few words and with ver real approach of characters like here how Aaliya didn't nudge him understanding his need to be left alone and when joined by him again then didn't raise topic but just soothe him with her care and concern.

Next was hilarious and I can totally imagine ZaYa doing this in show 🤣 considering the kind of mood Aaliya is in always leaving Zain atloss of words with her actions... Thoroughly enjoyable