congratulations!!!!
50 chronicles...woah!!!!! this time its a line to line review!
but wait! is tragedy ur fav by any chance? coz the way u write emotional/tragic chronicles just leaves me spellbound!!!
now for the 50th one!
in pink-my instantaneous reactions
in brown-my review
50. Shove Love cool title!
Precisely four minutes early, a sixteen year old Zain entered his English Literature class.He took a seat on his favourite spot which was the weathered wooden stool, situated next to the large floor to ceiling window.teenage love!oh god thats exciting!!!!!but is he a nerd..precise timing???hope not!
super detailing...could imagine the place thoroughly!misleading beginning though!
Rocking back and forth on the stool, he watched his fellow cohorts begin to pour into the room. His best buddy Rizwaan took a seat next to him and immediately started talking. "Guess what bro?" he said in his pubescent voice which had recently broken- the Adams apple protruding on his throat stood as testament to this. "What?" asked Zain in a bored voice. "That idiot teacher Raja is absent today.heheheheh...something we all wait for!! This piece of news caught Zains attention, "No way! Free period!" he said with a grin and began to get up.ufff*sigh of relieve* he's not a nerd..he's lyk me😉 "Sit back down dude" said Rizwaan, tugging at Zains plaid jumper. "Don't get too excited, we have substitute" "urgh, great" said Zain and slumped back down onto his rickety seat..wait zain mia...aliya will come na..drool over her!![i was sooo wrong u see! ] "Dude, apparently she's really hot, I heard one of the boys speaking in the corridor." "Yeah right chugalkhor chachi🤣, last time you said that, your fat sister Nafisa ended up being the sub."nafisa is fat!!thats a revelation in this one!!u n ur twists!😆😆😆 "That was a huge misunderstanding" said Rizwaan, turning a little red, "Yeah, huge" said Zain, chuckling at his own pun. "Anyway, rumour has it she's good-looking." "I'll have to see it to believe it" said Zain.right!!! how can some one believe just lyk that?now where is YaYa???😡😡😡
this was soo typical over school guys!not surprising coz hav seen my frenz do that too😉
Zain had no expectations, she was probably going to be a frumpy old woman🤢. He was about to stick the peppermint chewing gum that was in his mouth, under the desk when their substitute teacher swayed into the classroom. The buzz in the class calmed down and all the boys had their eyes fixed onto the brunette beauty. She gave them all a smirk, picked up the small trashcan and walked over to Zain. "Please don't pollute the undersides of the desks" 🤣🤣🤣she said warmly, as she shoved the metal paper bin in his face. Ignoring all of his peers he chucked the chewing gum into the bin. "Thanks" she said with a sunny grin.awww...such a sweet teacher and such a cute zain..no insti reaction here...was busy cursing u coz yaya had not come yet!
The boys all remained silent as she tucked the dustbin into its usual place. "Wow, this is the first time I've walked into a room and no man has wolf whistled" she said chirpily, "either I don't look hot enough, or you are all very mature men." she said with a wink. ahaaan...pretty high in ur mind??? Zain couldn't help but laugh, she was a right character, his peers too his cue and they all began laughing.😆
"Okay, that's enough" said the pretty young women dressed in faded blue jeans, a white tee-shirt and white Converses. She took a seat on the teachers table and looked at them all. She began speaking, "Hi boys, my name is..."Zain was in awe, he didn't know what is was but he really her, but he knew that he was way out her league. It was Rizwaans nudge that pulled him out of his trance. if u had completed the incomplete sentence in red wid aliya!i swear i would hav abandoned ur chronicles!but that doubt was still therein me u noe!
"Right, according to Mr Rajas syllabus plan, you guys are on Act 3, Scene 1 of Romeo and Juliet. A collective groan spread through the room.now where is this going???? "No, now, lets not sigh" she said with a chuckle. "I have an idea, no books today, we will have a class discussion, oh but your homework will be to read up the Spark Notes version of the scene."how typical of subs! The boys nodded happily😆😆.
Zain had actually enjoyed the class and was a little upset when he saw the time; it was nearly time for lesson to end.y would he not? "Last thing boys" said the substitute teacher "how many of you here have ever been in love?"now whats this for?to remind they shld do romeo juliet?😡The class went silent, none of them answeredas expected! "What about you, chewing gum boy?" she asked, "have you ever been in love? ok *sits up all excited* will zain take YaYa's name????." Love?" he asked, puzzled. "Yes you know that ineffable, intangible pesky little thing that once it bites you no about of medicine or lotion can make it disappear. Sometimes it pretends to go away and when it does it lulls you into a false sense of security, making you think it has finally left you, only the truth it that it jumps right back at you when you least expect it."ok..so is that love😕 An overwhelmed Zain shuddered and replied "Woah! That sounds like torture, I'm so glad I've never been in love." The teacher chuckled "you are a lucky lad chewing gum boy".phusss...is this ZaYa chronicle or Zain's private one???😡
now that teacher is one young chirpy cutie soul ha! how she scared zain with that definition!😆😆😆
Standing in the rain in the cold not to mention miserable night, Zain was remembering this specific English lesson from eight years ago. Oh how he wished to go back. Back to being that sixteen year old boy who was ignorant to the notion of love.is he waiting for Aliyah to come and replaying flashback??😕
Love? He laughed coldlycold???that means a Tragedy?. Love was all consuming, it was corrupting, it was draining and it was a f**king disease, he hated it. He hated that it made him so powerless when it came to her. The truth was he didn't hate love, for that in turn meant hating Aaliya and he didn't hate her he hated the weakness that love brought with it.😭
Why had she said no? Why had she said she didn't love him back😲?😲😲
Running his fingers through his drenched hair, he choked, he didn't even realise when the tears had begun to fall from his eyes.😭 😭😭
now there lies the beauty! total turn around of emotions! love u for that👏
now let me tell u why i did all this nuisance! i wanted to let u noe WHY i love ur drabble!let u what a rollercoster ride of emotions it takes me through...i get this involved
so thats what i wanted to do on the HALF CENTURY CELEBRATIONS...
hope i did not test ur patience...
wishing we get ur drabbles as long a s beintehaa is on air and even after that...
waiting for 51
-ur reader!
Edited by vinu127 - 10 years ago
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