The Zaya Chronicles 87 pg56 05.09.14 - Page 20

ava23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

I am in love with your drabbles.. It just seems so real to me, your story telling is fab.. You've earned an admirer :-)

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hilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

BANG ON !

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Loved it how you penned it down on the issue surrounding Barkat. This is what I think will happen and would love to see this on- screen, where instead Zain plays along with Barkat and both Z&A try to find out why is Barkat fishy.

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I've wondering along the same lines too... how easily did Mir gave Barkat right over to the Abdullah's and here I was thinking- he'll hold up a huge commotion. What gave it away were those creepy, hollow, stares Mir gave the Abdullah's while the Police was taking him away and Barkat was hugging him. I knew it right from his confession itself. I'm wondering if the real Barkat is alive- I really hope she is.

Let's see what lies ahead.

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vinu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

this was one of the best chronicle for me!

sorry i had not commented on the previous one .so here's a joint one.

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loved Zain's concern for his YaYa ... his gesture and 'guilt' made the entire drabble superb for me... and the last part was just so ZaYa types

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one of ur best acc to me. the second part proving how much aliya's feeling meant to Zain. and his rationality in thoughts was super admirable though he accused her, he was not blind!

loved both of them!

waiting for the next...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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note: I have no idea what Zains nephews name is... also no time to spell check

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vinu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

chalo 1st time ever i'm the first to comment😃

Originally posted by: nondescript
note: I have no idea what Zains nephews name is... also no spell check?!

i think its SAIF if i'm not wrong..

about the chronicle,

and this was a super cute one..it was heartwarming to see aryan/saif bond so well wid aliya

hope we get to see such scenes in BI too...

thank u again for these n waiting for tomorrow

p.s.- looks lyk ur posts r sandwiched between mine😆

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Hannah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: vinu127
chalo 1st time ever i'm the first to comment😃

i think its SAIF if i'm not wrong..
about the chronicle,
and this was a super cute one..it was heartwarming to see aryan/saif bond so well wid aliya
hope we get to see such scenes in BI too...
thank u again for these n waiting for tomorrow
p.s.- looks lyk ur posts r sandwiched between mine😆

And here is a reply sandwiched between the two haha!
Ahhh Saif! I shall keep that in mind ;-)

thanks a bunch.

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mridula

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

so cute update.everytime i read u'r update i want to read more.can i get other update plz.

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Sorry for not commenting.. i have been off mood lately :/

and i dont leaving a 'fab update' comment on ur thread :(

P.s the names are SAIF Sanaa n Aroob... for future referevce..

and i absoloytely loved Aryan kicking my hoity toity in this one

The previous one is hands down my fav!!

Emotional qoutient was bang on along with time taken to cool off n get ur brain in gear!! I liked teh fact that Zain at least acknowledged that Aaliyas words may have some semblance of truth :)

Ignore my typos..

i read my comments on ur thread n the amount if typos i make makes me want to take a dip in teh neares 'chullu;🥱🥱🥱

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Thank u for the fab updates :)) they brighten up my day :) evn when i dont comment on them :)

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Hannah

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Posted: 10 years ago

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