when i 1st saw you - Page 4

Rabdi jalebi...yummm..now I am hungry. .. 😉
so nice update. ..
madhubala was teacher and that toofew years ago...omg.. 😲

Superbbb update dear..loved it sooo muchhh...Rishbala moment's Outstanding...

thanxx for the pm dear superbbb going i also loved parantha n jalebi so if u r tempting us with pics so its okay we will survive on pics only😆 i love TM n TS mystery Rk is getting curious to knw good sign though u gave pics of yellow top n tight jeans for madhu n fr Rk that was realy good i m imaginig them in those outfits do continue soon love Rk madhu bond n last pic of rishbala wth umbrella was cherry on cake so beauutifull n gorgeous jodi ❤️ cool dad n son cowo he made cook Mk fr his madhu impressing haan aww father ho to aisa all n all lovely updatee

u r awasome writter

hey guys i hope u guys like this part its a bit confusing but will clear the thing soon hope u like it plzzz do like and comment


part 6

rk reached home he parked his car he went in jumping and whistling ... maha g ( rk's servant an old age lady ) was just staring at him

mg: rishu baba u look so happy today what happened..
rk started dancing with her maha g was shocked ...
rk: MG u don't know how happy I m today m ...
mg: but why baba ...
rk left her and stood in the center of the room and shouted with joy...
rk: CAUSE M IN LOVE ... M IN LOVE MAHA G M IN LOVE ... I LOVE HER ...
mg(surprised): wow baba that's amazing ...GOD BLESS YOU ...
rk went to his room quickly opened his cupboard and took out his guitar and sat in his balcony he was trying to play the guitar but couldn't suddenly he got an idea he took a notepad and pen and started writing when he was done he tried playing the guitar

but something was going wrong...
rk: man something is missing ... but what ...ya I got it ...
he took out his laptop put it in front of him connected it to the projector and open the folder name ( MY Destiny) ... He put it on slide show and madhu's pic's started flashing ... on the wall and rk started singing
( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h6fq7sbxwBg plzzz play this song before u read)

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Thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

Hmm... thodi-thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..

uske honthon pe muskurayein
Haaye duniya meri
Ho.. chakhna bhi chaahun
Rakhna bhi chaahun
Sabse chhupake usey..
haaye
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan
Woh hu wo...

rk put his guitar on the side and went near the wall and touched madhu's pic


Yaaron main kaise kahoon, kya hua?
Hosh hai ab kahin hai kahin yeh hawaa
Phirta hoon khud ko bhulaaye huve
Yaad meri mujhe toh dila do zaraa




rk smiled and sang again...


Bematlab sa, jeeta raha tha
Ab mill gayi hai wajah.. haay


Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan

By the time rk finished and he turned back he saw his dad and all the servants standing there awestruck staring at him...

Mk had tears in his eyes ...since rk's mum died he stopped singing ...
mk went near rk and hugged him...
rk(smiling): what happened dad didn't u liked the song ... I sang that bad
Mk backed of from the hug and looked at rk's face

Mk: no its just that its been so long I hear u sing ...
all the servants went away ... suddenly mk noticed madhu's pic's slide show going on ... He turned to face rk and rk arched his eye brow in a did-you -like her look...
Mk: she is beautiful son ... just like a fairy made for my son...
rk smiled and hugged mk...
latter siki called rk and asked him that there is a party at XYZ... hotel so he have to come ...
rk got ready and went to his car ... He was driving when he saw a black BMW following him...
but he didn't pay any heed to it ...
he reached the place and went in where all his college friends were gathered

siki: hey bro what's up... Where r u missing no calls no message ...
ohhh actually don't answer I know ... After the kung fu girl isn't it
rk just smiled ...
rk: what ever ... ok lets go
rk and friends all were dancing ... When rk went to the bar to sit down for a while ...
rk(to the bar tender): 1 cold apple juice.
the bar tender passed him big glass of beer...
rk: I asked for apple juice man...
bar t: sir that sir(pointing at the person next to rk) asked to give u ..
rk (to the guy): excuse me I don't drink ...
guy: ohh come on man people come in night club to do what ...
rk: not all come to drink ...
guy: ok never mind ...
the guy walked away rk was just looked at him bar tender gave him his juice and he started drinking ...
when suddenly a girl came and touched his shoulder ...
girl: hi handsome ... Care to dance...
rk(smiled): no sorry mam but I don't dance with strangers ...
girl(coming closer): the lets know each other...
rk(smiled): no I mean don't dance with stranger girls I already have someone...
girl:ohhh come on I don't see any girl with u here ... Even if u have a girl she won't know that u are dancing with me right...
rk: well actually she is around ( rk pointed towards his heart) and even if she is not m loyal with her...
girl (smiled): u r wired ... well bye ...
rk: bye ...
after some time rk left from there he was coming out when he felt someone following him... he turned but no one around ...
he was driving back home when he saw the same bmw again he became suspicious ...


note : sorry for the late update guys m very busy now will try to update soon

Read all the parts in a go..very interesting..seems like Madhu has a terrible past and it's gonna bother their present..

Nice update dear, y don't u shift to MB forum, and also sorry for late reply, the link u pmed didn;t work, just now got the correct link and read the story.

Like not working , read the update now link was not working ,
oh see something is comming
awesome update

Originally posted by: uma88

Nice update dear, y don't u shift to MB forum, and also sorry for late reply, the link u pmed didn;t work, just now got the correct link and read the story.

how to shift to mb forums

Hey pls update..It's been very long...have you completed 'can it be real'