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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4
rk madhu reached the kinder garden(school) the kids were playing
around rk saw suddenly the madhu who was quite and lost all the way was now laughing ... rk took his camera and took madhu's pic...

madhu turned shocked ...

rk: hey you laugh also...
ma(confused): so everyone laugh right

rk: well for me it was ur 1st laugh till now . so I think its not because of me ...so u like kids ...

ma: ya ... I love working with kids I was 13 when I started working with kids last 4 years I stayed in Malaysia ... there also I was teaching in a school...

rk: woah ...teacher and all ...
ma: hmmm...lets go...

The rest of the day passed taking pictures and

videos of kids rk in between took few pics of

madhu when she wasn't looking





... he fell

in love with this new madhu all over again...

it was lunch time now rk thought of asking

madhu he went... to her...but before he

could ask...

ma: hey ... Want to have lunch..

rk(glad): ya was just going to ask u m

starving...lets go...

ma(confused): lets go where ?

rk: I thought we are going to have lunch...

ma: well ya but we are just going to have it

here . I brought food from home for me and

you as well

rk: wow home food... but why did u bring for

me...

ma: well I have a problem I cannot eat food alone...

rk thought ya its true he never saw her having

lunch at college
...she only have ice-cream or

juice...

rk: ohhh is it?

ma: hey I hope u don't mind Punjabi food

...I mean u r so American..

rk: what are u kidding me m a huge Punjabi

food fan..

ma: really how?

rk( sad): my mum was a pujnabi...

ma: ohhh m sorry ...

rk: its ok now can we eat... by the way what's

in food ...

ma: aloo gobi and pratha...



rk(big smile): that's my faourite...

madhu and rk had there lunch...

rk was observing madhu while eating she was

just concentrating on her food... she was

nothing like other girls who eat all salads and

stuff just to be lean...

rk(himself): she seems a foodie just like

me...

after the lunch rk madhu got back to work it

was almost time to go back now rk just went to

thank the owner of the place ...

when he came back

he got shocked for the 1st time he saw madhu's

hairs open she got dark brown wavy hairs she

looked damn beautiful...

there were few baby girl who were putting

flower's in her hairs...



madhu was pretending to be there model and

the girls were the hair stylists ...

rk just felt like going there and pulling madhu's

cheek she was looking damn cute and

beautiful...

he quickly took out his camera and took her

pic's with all different expressions...

rk(himself): man I love this girl...

rk madhu said bye to the girls and left...rk

madhu sat in the car...


madhu took out the flowers from her hairs and

was going to tie her hairs up again...

rk(staring): let it be open ...ur hairs look

beautiful like that...

ma(confused): sorry what...

rk(coming to his sense): ohhh I was saying u

have nice long hairs..

ma(blushing): thnxx

rk: so where should I drop u ...

ma: ohhh just near the college my car's there

rk madhu's reached at the college...rk

madhu came out there was only one car there ...
rk: ok ...where's ur car .

ma: here in front of you...

rk: r u serious ... you drive a ( suv) ...



ma(confused): ya is there a problem ... I like suv's
rk(smiling): man u are so difficult to

understand mean usually other girls like ...

cute small car's and u like suv's

ma: well m not other girl ...

rk: hmmm ...u r not just and another girl

ma: okk then see u tomorrow ... kinder

garden is done now have to shoot slightly older

kids there is a primary school about an hour

drive we can go there...

rk: ohhh ok...that would be great ...

ma: I'll pick u up from here than ... is it fine

with u...

rk: hey...that is supposed to be my line isn't

it... from the college I would like a ride in

suv...

ma(smiling): ok see u then bye...

rk: bye

madhu sat in the car and drove off

after that rk went home...

his dad Mr.Mohan Kundra was sitting in the

hall...



mohan kundra



rk came in smiling and whistling ...he

straightly went jumped on the couch and put

his head on his dad's lap...

mohan was taken back a bit... Its been a

while rk have been smiling whole hearted...

since his mum died he and mohan have been

very close...rk share each and everything

with him...

mk: hey... Buddy...what's up u looks super

happy today...

rk sat up and looked at mk

rk:dad..dad...dad...

mk: come on I know I am ur dad now say name

of the girl...

rk(shocked): how did u...

mk: know that it's a girl... come on son m

ur dad and I know my son very well... and

this 100 watt smile of ur's say's it all...now

tell me the name... and the pics...

rk: dad how do u... ok the name is madhubala

...and that's all for now the rest I'll tell u

later...

mk: okkk... want dinner ...

rk: what would u like to eat...

mk: it's ur turn...

rk: no it's ur's ... but m in a mood to cook..

mk(laughing): wow ... now I really want to

know this girl ...

rk: what ever dad...

rk went to the kitchen...

mk: w8 m coming let's cook togather...

rk and mk both cooked biryani ( special rice)...

they both had there dinner and rk told mohan

all about madhu... they both laughed on how

madhu had beaten up mukund and gang then went to


sleep...

precap:

rk madhu enjoying the rain... someone

stalking rk...


note:

sorry guy's for the delay i was busy with my

office stuff... plzzz don't mind about the

food actually i myself am a big foodie

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
nice update..
keep it up zaroo...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Read all 4 parts in a go, previously i got ur pm,and checked on the forum, i doesn't know that you are writing it in fanfiction page, thats why not able to follow you, coming to the story, very nice one, loving this different madhu, a ninja beauty, and this mad RK and his father, waiting to know the truth about madhu, her reason for being sad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Superbbb update dear...loved Rishbala moments sooo muchhh nd pic's r Awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awsum update...I am really enjoying it a lot...and DD's pics were awsum... cnt soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
nice update dear
i liked the pics and moreover i liked the bond b/w mk and rk...its so cute😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nyc update dear plz pm me next time m sending u buddy reqst accept it plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
note
hey guys plzzz don't kill me for adding punjabi food every where ... actually m a typical punjabi must have food every where πŸ˜†

Part 5


next morning madhu reached the college she was wearing blue skin tight jeans with bright yellow kurta hairs tied in a pony tail ...




looking elegant she sood leaning on her car ... after 5 min rk came there he was wearing a white t shirt with black jeans...



he parked his car in the parking
rk(smiling): g morning ... u r looking beautiful...
ma: thank u
both rk and madhu were quite ... Madhu was driving ... and rk was stealing glances at her
rk( thinking): the old madhu is back the smiling girl I saw yesterday vanished again ...
after sometime rk thought to break the silence and start the conversation ...
rk: so... how do u like US .
ma(lost): its ok like all the other places I have been to new and scary ...
rk(confused): scary why...
madhu came out of her thought a realized what she just said...
ma: ohhh nothing ...
rk felt something is fishy about madhu's behavior ... But thought of not bringing it up...
rk: did u had ur breakfast already...
ma: no... why?
rk: because I brought breakfast for us...
ma(smiling): oh really... (giggling)what did u bring sandwich ... Or jam bread
rk(smiled): hahahahah v.funny well if u don't want it's f9 but I brought chicken pratha...
madhu looked at rk...
ma: well I didn't say I won't eat...
rk smiled opened his bag and took out his lunch box and gave the rolled pratha to madhu...



ma: thank u...

she took a bite...

ma: its yummy who cooked ... or did u bought it... its super nice thanks...
madhu was driving and eating at the same time ...like a small kid...

rk flashback... (morning 6:00 )

rk entered mohan's room... mk was sleeping... rk went there and got on the bed...
rk(whisper): dad...
mk: ...
rk: dad...
mk:...
rk(shook mk a bit): dad...

mk turned the other side and slept again...
rk( loud): DADDD

Mk shocked wakes up ... turn on the light's ...

mk: rishi... what happened... r u ok...
rk: ya dad m absolutely f9...
mk( half sleeping): then why r disturbing me ...
rk: dad ... plzzz can u do me a favour ...
mk:hmmm ...
rk: plzzz cook me breakfast...
mk suddenly shocked and opened his eyes...
usually when rk miss his mum then only he will ask mk to cook ...
mk(worried): rishi ... r u ok...
rk: with a big smile m ok dad plzzz na get up or I'll get late...

rk dragged a sleepy mohan to the kitchen...
mk: ok what to u want ... sandwich ok milkshake...
rk: arghhh dad if I need a sandwich or a milkshake i would have asked munna or patel...
mk: then what do u want ur highness...
rk: well chicken pratha mom style...
mk: rishi r u mad u woke me up 6:00 am to cook pratha
rk: come on dad plzzz man ... Madhu also like Punjabi food for her...
rk( put the hand on his mouth): beta rk u spilled the beans...

mk(smirking) : ohhh so my son woke me up to cook food just to impress a girl...
rk(puppy look): come on dad...patel prepared every thing u just have to cook...
mk: ok ok now don't give me that
look... go get ready...

rk jumped and hugged .. mohan
rk: love u ... u r the best buddie...

flash back end

soon they reached the place it was big school ...
rk and madhu went in they took all the pics they needed and interviewed some kids...
it was almost 2 pm ... they finished the work and were now packing up..
rk: it was such a hectic day...
ma: yes it was..
rk madhu were about to leave when some called from the behind...
voice: hi TM what are u doing here ...
rk and madhu truned. There was a Chinese boy standing there...

(sorry didn't find a nice chinese boys pic)



ma(surprised): hey sam wow u here...
sam: ya TM now m studying in the high school here...
ma: wow nice so what r u studying...
sam: well after my getting taught by u in Malaysia how can I study something else m doing creative arts...
ma: well nice that's good...
rk was just staring at them like what r they talking...
madhu suddenly realized that rk was there ...
ma: ohh sorry I forgot to introduce u ...sam this is rk my classmate and rk this is sam my ex-student...
sam: hi sir ...
rk: hi ... Call me rk sir sounds old..
sam: hey TM now that u r here I want to show u my gallery plzzz come na plzzz
madhu looked at rk for approval he smiled they both followed sam to a big room filled with amazing paintings
madhu went forward and was checking each and every painting keenly ... Rk and sam were standing near the door ...when something clicked rk...
rk: hey sam ...
sam:yes si... I mean rk ..
rk: how do u know madhu... and why do u call her TM
sam: ohhh that... actually I use to stay in Malaysia few years back and she was my art teacher there ... Such an amazing artist and a more amazing person ... and TM actually for Malaysians teacher madhubala will be a bit difficult to call so we call her TM ...
rk: ohhh like that...
there was silence after some time sam continued ...
sam: she was not only a teacher she looks very strict outside but she is very kind and nice inside ...
rk(smiling): well I know that ...
madhu came to them ...
ma: what r u guy's talking about...
sam:nothing rk was just...
rk: nothing ...
ma: well sam I must say u did a great job ...
sam: well who's the teacher...
madhu smiled ...
rk: ok now lets have pic...
they all clicked a pic
ma: sorry sam have to go now but will come to see u again ...
sam: yes sure TM... I really miss TS also ...he was super fun ... I still remember how he used to annoy u and then make u laugh again...
madhu smiled on that
rk(thinking): now who is this TS...
rk and madhu reached the car...
rk: madhu if u don't mind can I drive plzzz...
ma: ya sure why not...
madhu and rk sat n the car suddenly it started raining...
ma(shouted happily ): its raining ...
rk shocked with the sudden reaction ...
rk: well ya we don't live in a desert u know...
ma(puppy face): but its raining and I love rain...
rk smiled at the sudden change ...
rk:so what should we do now ...
ma: hmmm eat jalebi...
rk: what?? Eat jalebi...

Ma: ya jalebi u don't know its Punjabi sweet...
rk: off course I know what it is but were will we get jalebi here ...
ma: well I know where ...
rk :where
ma:near our college there's the big red building just beside that is a small Punjabi shop there...
rk: ok ...
madhu was staring outside the window and enjoying the rain... rk was driving and simultaneously looking at madhu and smiling

Rk(thinking): this girl is so wired so difficult to understand every day I see a new side of her ... but I love difficult things and if I get to know a new girl everyday life will be super adventurous ...

Soon rk and madhu reached the place ... madhu and rk got down the car...they went in and sat no a table near the window... The waiter came...
ma: two plate jalebi and two rabri...
rk: but ...
ma: that's all ...
wa: ok mam u order will be here in 10 min...
ma:ok
the waiter left...
rk: why did u order for me ...
ma: well u know why...
rk: how will i...( flash back ma: I cannot eat alone) ohh yeah I remember ... but I don't like sweets ...
ma(shockingly) : r u kidding me ... then u have to try this ...trust me u will love it
rk( smiling): ok ...
while w8ing madhu was looking outside the window... her face got few rain drops rk took her pic


after sometime the waiter came with the food
madhu had a big smile on her face rk smiled looking at her ... rk picked up a fork and knife to eat the jalebi
ma: r u serious u r going to kill the jalebi...
rk: what ?? well eventually it gona die we gona eat it right...
ma: come on who eat jalebi with fork and knife ...
rk: then tell me mam how should I eat it...
ma: waiter...
wa: yes mam
ma:can I have two glasses ...
the waiter came back with the glasses ... madhu poured some rabri in the glass then punt few jalebies in it and poured rabri on top again ...

ma: ok done now eat ...
rk was just staring at her face with a are-u-serious look...
ma: come on u will like it... plzzz eat...
rk took a spoon and took bite...
suddenly his expression from worried to changed into amazed ...
rk: man its delicious ...
ma: see told u ...
rk madhu were eating and enjoying ... after sometime they finished... They came out of the shop it was still raining ...
rk: ok time to go back ...
ma: ya
rk: hey u go I'll just walk to my car ... otherwise u have to take the turn again...
ma: hmm ok...
rk was a bit sad hearing the ok...
rk started walking his cloth's become a little wet suddenly he heard a someone calling him...he turned back and saw madhu was standing there with the umbrella ... She walked towards her
he walked towards her and held the umbrella they both were in an eyelock...


precap:

1: rk wrote a song and singing
2: someone stalking rk...


Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice update, waiting to know further about madhu
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HEY INTERESTING STORY DEAR.
THANKS FOR THE PM.
PLZ PM ME FURTHER ALSO.πŸ˜ƒ
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