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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superbbb update like always dear...loved it sooo muchhh ...
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Awesome update 👏
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Count me in
interesting starting. ..
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awesomeee updatee 👏 i loved the ninja beauty n wanna be superman rk for madhu😆 madhu go girl show the beast u r the lady version of our RK😉 dnt get disheartened dear we jst saw this in writers index its reallyy good👍🏼 i loved the images u use accordinly to the scene seeing for the first time 😃 like this n u can can ask fr the advice u wanted we r here hun so cheer up n update the next part soon

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Nice story. Pl. pm me whenever u update.
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part 3
ok its once and for all final that m going to talk to her today... come on dude it's too much I mean there is not a single girl in the college who never notice or talk to rk... She might be going to the church m going to talk to her no matter what...and m curious to know what she go and do at church at this hour when there are no prayers going on and no one around...
class finished madhu left the class rk quietly followed her ... she just quietly entered the church ... rk stood at the gate he was confused from last 7 years since his mum died he never entered the church ... but still he wanted to see what madhu do when she come here ... he went in and stood behind the pillar ...
he looked around for madhu but no sign suddenly he heard piano sound he saw her on the stage ...
her eyes were closed and she was playing the piano



...and she started singing...



You look around, staring back at you
Another wave of doubt, will it pull you under?
You wonder
What if I'm overtaken? What if I never make it?
What if no one's there? Will You hear my prayer?

rk was mesmerized by her voice it seemed like she is not singing from her lips but her heart


When you take that first step into the unknown
You know that He won't let you go

So what are you waiting for? What do you have to lose?
Your insecurities, they try to alter you
But you know you're made for more, so don't be afraid to move
Your faith is all it takes, and you can walk on the water, too

rk was in a trance and he started walking towards her ...
he went near and saw that tears were flowing out of her eyes...


So get out, and let your fear fall to the ground
No time to waste, don't wait, and don't you turn around and miss out
Everything you were made for, I know you're not sure
So you play it safe, you try to run away

If you take that first step into the unknown
He won't let you go

So what are you waiting for? What do you have to lose?
Your insecurities, they try to halt you
But you know you're made for more, so don't be afraid to move
Your faith is all it takes, and you can walk on the water, too

Step out, even when it's storming
Step out, even when you're broken
Step out, even when your heart is telling you
Telling you to give up
rk was listening to each and every word it seems
like she is trying to describe herself with this song...

Step out, when your hope is stolen
Step out, you can't see where you're going
You don't have to be afraid
So what are you waiting, what are you waiting for?

So what are you waiting for? What do you have to lose?
Your insecurities try to alter you
You know you're made for more, so don't be afraid to move
Your faith is all it takes, and you can walk on the water
Walk on the water,


when the song ended rk opened his eyes he saw madhu's her eyes were still closed...
rk quickly moved behind the pillar ...
ma( herself loud): come on madhu u can do it ... until GOD is with you nobody can harm u ...
rk was hiding and looking at her... she wiped her tears said a quite prayer and left...

at night rk was again and again listening the recording( when madhuwas singing he recorded her vedio)...
rk: she seems so calm but why is there so much pain in her voice ...
each word of the song ... She was trying to make herself believe that she don't have any fears in her life ... But in real she have fears in life ... which give her pain...
rk stood up from the bed and went near the window
rk(himself): I don't know madhu who u r from where u came but one thing is sure you are meant to be Mine...
u will always see me standing by ur side in times of fear in times of happiness and in times of sadness ...

next day at college ... mrs brown enter the class ...
mb: ok class as u all know that soon ur term in gona be over ... So you have to work in pairs for ur documentary ...
now m going to tell u the pairs and their topics

Dave & annie : glamour
mukund & jane: music
siki & steve: dance
dipali & ralley: animals( everyone burst out laughing )
mrs brown : ok now the last name is
madhubala & rishab : children...
mb: ok everyone now as u all know u will have 1 week to finish ur project that time u are not supposed to attend the college ...

mrs brown left the class rk was on cloud nine his heart was doing bhangra ( Punjabi dance ) ...siki saw that and came to rk
siki: congratulation dude ...
rk: ??? for
sik: come on man last 1 week u are stalking that girl and now for 1 week alone with her ... U got the jackpot ...
just then madhu came there...
ma: excuse me ... r..k.
rk was going to faint with the shock ...madhu is talking to him...
siki punched rk on his arm to bring him out of thoughts ...
rk: oh...yeh...ohhh...h..i
ma: hi m madhubala... ur partner...for documentary
rk(himself): madhubala...ahhan for documentary ... U are my partner for life.
rk: ohhh yeah ... so whats the plan...
ma: ohh yeah m just thinking that there is a kinder garden near by so we can just go there and take the videos
rk: ohh that's great ...
ma: ok so we can meet up at college gate 2moro .at 8:00am
rk:ok...
and madhu left...
sik: what the hell is wrong with u she was in front of u and u talked like just for the sake of the project...u cloud have tried to know her more

rk: idiot... I have one week to know her ...and for ur information I haven't forgotten how she beaten mukund ... I don't want the lovely girl becoming the wild cat...

next day
rk was driving his white Audi r8 to its full speed...


rk(himself): man m late she told me to come at 8:00 and its 8:30 already
and as far as I know girls they get ... bash u for coming late
rk: now she also gona do the same. Why u r late? m w8ing for last half hour? Do u have a watch? Do u think I m that free to w8 for u ?
rk drove fast and reached at the college where she asked him to w8... And there she is ...



rk(himself): man how does she manage to look beautiful without any effort


madhu's look...

ma: hey
rk: hey... m really sorry m late I just woke up late...
ma(calmly): mmm its ok...
rk(shocked): its ok...
ma(confused): hmm ya...
rk: ok... I mean u sure .
ma: ya why shouldn't I be .
rk: i mean m late ... HALF HOUR ...r u not angry..
ma: you said sorry and you told me the truth that u woke up late ... should I be angry...
rk was hell shocked he have seen girls breaking up with there boyfriends
just because they were 10 min late and here this girl is wired ... rk admired madhu that she understood him a complete stranger for her..
ma: so can we leave now
rk: ohh ya lets go...
through out the ride madhu was on her silent mode and rk was just admiring her taking side glance ...

precap :

rk getting to know madhu ...
rk seeing a new madhu totally different...

Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
so now they are partners
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superbbb update...loved it ...nd pic is Awesome dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
really nice dear
i liked it when rk said she is gonna be his life-partner also
what is madhu's past...i know its little sad...but what is it?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome story...
just caught up with the last two chapter and i really am enjoying it!!
i like this Madhu...hehe
Update soon

P.S. thanks for the scrap :)
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