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Hamlet53 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

Hi hammie lion🤗 helloo twinks baaby good to see you
aweee such an awesome update dear.❤️..Enjoyed it sooo much...Ganpat ki nautanki .🤣.dutta badly affected by Damodar's matter...errr Kala😡...she is sweetly giving more pain to Dutta...😡She know how to deal with Dutta...But he doesn't suspect her ..😲.why???
he thinks his family loves him..
...She is his guru???😡...At least naku taking care of Dutta baby❤️...loved her care & concern...Naku too advising Dutta in Damodar matter...👍🏼.Kala & naku trying to manipulate Dutta in different ways..Naku in good way & kala in Bad way...Poor Dutta in the middle....Loved your POV dear.🤗..Thanks soo much for your lovely update🤗 sooo sweeet of you..🤗.eagerly waiting for the next update dear..sorry for the delay😳...just now finished my FA homework😳..twinky baby becoming too lazy .😳...Big hug from bad baby Twinky🤗
oh super shots , good job baby👏 of all key characters.



PS :- Ahem ahem is clearing throat wala sound na..😳..please read that phrase with the next line..Tasha's eyelock...😉...You hate it & Baby loved it soo much na.😛..thats why that ahem ahem...& wink wink.🤗
ohhh ok ahem ahem means thrills does it??😆 haaa hooo.. velly velly phunny! much love thanks for a brill comment.. hammie.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hammie
Damodar ke saat saat dard, dhoka, dil kuch bhi toh dutta se sambhala nahi jata.. he has a weak heart for a don. Agree with you n always felt naku was too unreal to be true. Why didnt she reveal the truth to dutta if she had an answer for all 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie hi bart good to hear from you.

Damodar ke saat saat dard, dhoka, dil loved this .applies to both D's
kuch bhi toh dutta se sambhala nahi jata.. he has a weak heart for a don. Agree with you n always felt naku was too unreal to be true. Why didnt she reveal the truth to dutta if she had an answer for all 😉 chakas! wot a sixer comment! i give you all my 100's 😆 loved it haaa hoo.. bare aye wise one!
cheers for such a hee haw comment.. hammie

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Posted: 10 years ago

LTL Written Update

Episode ~195

20th October 2010

Dutta's den

Conversation continues between Dutta and Naku. Naku reasons, it's up to us to stop our selves from going into pieces.. can I say something, you won't mind it, asks Naku and he allows it with a smile, and she continues, yesterday you told me , that my father was unjust with me, and you gave me support, which I value, but as for me I continue to respect my father like before.. Saab I suggest that you too stop hating your father, he has apologized to you , what could be bigger than that? forget the past , and forgive him... for your own peace of mind if not for nothing else... and then you'll see you'll never be weak.. you can do it, this much trust I have in you. Dutta turns from her and gives her words a thought..

Baji's room

Baji wakes up and is paid a visit by Babi. He says, how come you here first the in the morning? Babi says, she's restless, had no sleep all night, fed of Ganpat and his crooked ways! she cries. Baji says don't you worry I'll sort him well and proper! Babi says no it's not him I am thinking about! yesterday before all Bhau took Naku by the hand straight up to his room! you know full well that Naku has not revealed her true self before Bhau! hope she doesn't !and Baji says, no don't worry, Naku is very sensible, she has managed to hide the truth for so long.. she will not expose it now so easily.. trust me! Fraught Babi cries my mind doesn't work properly! I had thought if Bhau forgives his father, then he would also forgive Naku too.. Baji's face clouds... and Babi explains , you all saw how much hatred Bhau has for people who betray his trust! surely he will conclude that Naku too cheated him! Baji says sharply hey! mausi if you want then for your sake I shall go and check if things are alright? shall I ? Babi says yes would you do that..

Kala's room

The evil trio congregate.. Kala paces, Leela comments, day by day things are getting worse, Dutta and Naku are getting closer..if this continues, it'll be difficult to keep them apart. Kala says, if their loves gets stronger then it would be more beneficial to hurt them. besides it'll be more fun! as these days Bhau is fuming about his father! how can he get peace anywhere! mocked Kala . She turns to Roops, and what are you doing here? you should be with Baji!.. at the moment , he must be all by himself, so go do as you were told to do... but Roops complains, Tai Baji is such an idiot no matter what I do he is not moved! Kala tells her off, looks like you don't seem to understand what a man wants.. a girl needs to do something special for her man.. like wait for him, lay out his food... make him feel special. You know that Baji is only interested in one thing in life that's Bhau .. Bhau will now be with Nakusha , so that's your chance when he will be missing something in life.. that gap will make your work easier.. got that ..Kala guides Roops and sails away with a smirk.

Dutta's den

Dutta emerges out of the bathroom in a vest and pyjamas, rubbing his hair dry with his red towel. Naku stands behind him holding his ironed marine blue kurta. Dutta is obliged by her gesture and accepts it and puts it on. Naku asks him, if he had given forgiving his father issue, a thought. He is not amused. But Naku pleads, just give him one last chance.. you'll feel a burden lift off yourself too.Dutta rolls his eyes annoyed..and walks away from her penetrating eyes. Naku argues, Saab you took me by the hand and brought me into this room as your prerogative.. why did you do it? for mine own good.. today I am asking something of you for your own good...as my prerogative.. will you listen to me? Dutta turns and looks into her defiant eyes.. and turns away from her and she defies, Saab if you don't listen to me.. then I too will not listen to you, I will not live in this room. Dutta turns to look at her, moves up to her and glares down firmly into her eyes. ..are you challenging me? he asks her, without blinking she returns his stare.Dutta says sternly, no one speaks to me like this, in this house. .. no one.. he reminds her. he comes closer to her and threatens her, do you know the consequence of challenging me? she smiles and admits , I know Saab.. I know you more then you will ever know yourself .. while they enjoy the staring into each other's eyes.. Baji barges in.. but stops immediately seeing them so close..

Bhau I was thinking! Dutta turns from Naku to Baji.. who stands open mouthed. Dutta rolls his eyes.. Baji says, I am sorry ,I'll leave.. but Naku stops him, Baji! and she turns to Dutta, Saab I'll go downstairs and get ready... and Dutta calls after her , why? why are you going downstairs? there's a bathroom here, with everything in it , you can get ready in my room too? she panics and so does Baji then she says, no Saab my clothes are down stairs.. so let me bring them.. and she hurriedly leaves as Dutta watches her go from his room.

Dutta after some thought says to Baji, Baji, I think we'll change the outlook of this room.. Baji ponders, and says what for? and Dutta explains , I mean it's not befitting a woman living here.. Baji thinks.. as he looks at the room and says, fine Bhau it'll be done.. Baji goes yesssh.. and Dutta says impatiently , the go on! do the needful what are you waiting for ? and he adds , one more thing make sure it's something that Naku likes.. and Baji says , but Bhau how should I know Naku's likes and dislikes..? and Dutta says I don't know either.. now look if you don't help me then who will ? Dutta says helplessly and walks off leaving poor Baji to get on with it.. Baji looks around baffled. .. I 'll have to do something he says ,much puzzled to himself.

He wafts down to his room .. Roops notices and creeps into his room and calls out Baji! and he says, oh god !you just turn up anywhere don't you? I do! she says so what? he says, look, whenever you turn up! you bring some sort of trouble shooting with you! don't bother me, Bhau has given me a very complicated job so don't try to divert me! Roops says why is there a problem? tell me then.. and Baji says, look Bhau has told me to decorate his room , Naku's going to live with him in that room.. now how would I know what a girl would like? Baji moans.. Roops smiles, why has a girl never told you..? he says don't talk nonsense! and Roops teases, ok let's say if today you had a girlfriend, she would teach you everything wouldn't she? Baji goes girlfriend? Roops says don't you worry say a friend then.. I'll teach you everything! I'll help you shall I? , and don't pull such a face, don't fret I'll teach you about what girls like.. then you can decorate Bhau's room! and Baji smiles broadly , yes that's great!

Outhouse

Babi prays in her room.. Bappa grant happiness to my daughter. Naku walks by, and says Aye don't you worry all will be well, Saab looks after me a lot. Kala walks by and looks at the mother daughter. Kala says vahini ,you're up so early? Naku replies, Tai I wake up early every morning. Kala says, that was when you lived with your parents.. now you live with Dutta Bhau! as from today neither you will go to bed early nor get up early the following day! she taunts Babi, what's the matter kaki? why do you look so worried? Babi says ,no ts nothing ,it's like I am a daughter's mother, Saab and Naku have not got married with proper rituals.. I don't want that people should point fingers at her.. Kala looks surprised and taunts, really?and whose going to dare raise a finger at her? now she is not a young child kaki! she is the DIL of this house! so don't you worry about what people would say about her..everything will be alright. Aye Sahib over hears the conversation, and comes closer with a smile, Kala is right Babi! now Naku is our responsibility! we have seen how much our son loves you ,I can see it! he'll keep you very happy Naku.. since last night all our doubts have been erased... the whole family is united again!

Dining table

The family sits to eat.. Naku comes in dressed in bright yellow out fit. All watch her especially Kala when Naku comes and sits adjacent to Aye Sahib at the table. Aye Sahib asks where is Dutta and where's your Aye too? Dutta walks in looking very smart in his turquoise kurta and white pyjamas. Dutta tells Aye Sahib, mausi is in her room, Ganpat kaka was was found unconscious outside the house..he had a lot to drink.. Babi comes to the dining area.. Dutta explained mausi has tended to him..

Babi hangs her head in shame so does Naku. Sudarshan mutters to the side ,what's the big deal a guttersnipe will be found in the gutter where else.? Dutta turns to sit and Babi says Aye Sahib, Ganpat is better now.. I apologize for any inconvenience caused to you all due to his behaviour.. Dutta looks at Babi, what pardon mausi? alcohol is such a thing makes you lose it, but you make sure that he treats the women of this house with respect , I expect that as he is older and more experienced than I am that he would be aware of appropriate behahviour..but you don't worry , from today he is my responsibility .. Naku looks at him gratefully and muses, Saab you have forgiven my father, now pardon your own father too.. episode ends. Hamlet53 ~ 28.5.15

Overall a pleasant episode.. when held in comparison with the Damoder/Dutta face off ones.. however it continues to touch on the issue of granting pardon to one who shows remorse.. it is annoying though that Naku sees both her father Ganpat a , woman basher and Damoder, Dutta's father who abandoned him as a child in the same light..

Rather flippantly she challenges Dutta into forgiving his father at the drop of a hat..

In my opinion Dutta shows it clearly that Ganpat's disorderly behaviour is not half as serious as his father Damoder's irresponsible,cruel almost immoral behaviour.

N.B , many thanks for reading the previous wu, fassben, jedy, twinky, bart, tammy,


Edited by Hamlet53 - 10 years ago
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nakku trying to make dutta accepfather baaji kabain haddi kla sweet taunting nakku dutta trying to be good sil
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hamletwonderful ud & observation😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hammie hi
How silly babu,s argument can get, if dutta forgives damodar then he has to forgive naku too. Dont they see he has come to trust her immensely. Why the hell she has to hide the truth in the first place if they think naku is sinning ? Cant believe Baji babi ke saat milke dost ko dhoka de raha hai.
Yes! one of the most talked eyelocks, vividly remember the excitement it had aroused then, but then we had the biggest spoiler in baji arrggh! it was so well hyped n what a stunner dutta looked with his red towel, those killer glares, hmm mindblowing Both dared each other n what couldve been was left to the realm of our imaginations.
look who,s talking of the ills of an addict? bewda son in law will take care of bewda father in law 😃
Kala n her endless antics sic.. gets to one,s nerves, roops now proactive but baji blissfully ignorant

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi hamlet

Thanxs for good wishes & awesome ud😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi hammie lion🤗
awee such a lovely update dear..❤️.Enjoyed it sooo much.❤️..Naku continuing her bashans...Poor Dutta...he totally amused...aweee loved the sweeet Eye lock between Dutta & naku❤️...baaji interruptiing Tasha's sweeet eye lock.😡...errr...but Poor Baaji😆...he have to arrange Dutta's room for Naku😆...Dutta easily gives orders & leaves from there..😆..kala continuing her evil talks with Babi & naku..😡..Ganpat is not as bad as Damodar...comparison between Ganpat& Damodar is totally wrong😲...Ganpat is just a drunkard ..But Damodar is a heartless father.😡..Loved your POV dear🤗..Thanks soo much for your lovely update Hammie lion.🤗.soo sweeet of you.🤗.Eagerly waiting for the next one...Big teddy hugs from bad baby twinky 🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet hi dilse good to see you😊
wonderful ud & observation😊

thanks for reading and commenting ,much love hammie.

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