ariya joint ss: Rehnuma...tujhse roshan mera jahan *complete* pg 37

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hello my dearies shock hogaye ke mein firse kya lekar aa 

gai bt iss baar bhi mein akeli nahi hoon i have a new 

upcoming writer in our forum n that is TITI123.. 


credit of this wonderful thought goes to TITI123


ab hum dono milke app sab ko bohot pakayenge..


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hope to get ur supprt 4 this also.

prologue..


arjun mission to take his revenge bt he is trapped, 


tortured.


will he die before taking his revenge or 


will a ray of hope save him and his revenge??


see the journey of tremendous, love, pain, feelings and 


revenge...

index:

part 1 -pg 1

part2,3- pg 6

part 4 - pg 11

part 5 - pg 16

part 6 - pg 21

part 7,8,9-pg 27

part 10- pg 32

final part - pg 37



part1..

etf office.. time 9 am.. all are busy working and completing their given tasks..bt from some days arjun was heavily busy with something though all try to find out bt got nothing from him..all give him suspicious looks bt his one glare is enough for them to dare question him

rathod mv: yeh rawte itne dino se kar kya raha hai kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aa raha hia.. kahin wooh sikander leke toh kuch plan nahi kar raha hia? Bt agar wooh esa karega wooh mujhe pata chal hi jayega...rawte par nazar rakhni hi hogi..


riya brought coffee for all n tea for arjun..

riya: rathod sir coffee aur sir meine wooh mehta case ke file ready kar di hia aap check kar lijiyega.

Rathod: ok riya..

Riya gve arjun his cup of tea n arjun went to his cabin..

Arjun mv: mujhe joh bhi karna hia bohot sambhalke karna hoga.rathod ko zara sa bhi shakh hua toh wooh mujhe esa kabhi nahi karne dega aur phir mein apne liye sabki jaan khatre mein nahi dal sakta hoon..

He calls some1..

Arjun: arjun bol raha hoon.. apne abhi tak info nahi bheja u promised me..

Person: dekho arjun I m doing my best bt yeh secrets informations hia time lagega n we have to be very very careful ke kisiko pata na chale yeh case waise bhi etf ka nahi so..tum ek unofficial case pe kaam kar rahe hoon

Arjun: I dnt give a damm abt official n unofficial case..mujhe wooh info chahiye suna apne..

Person: mein jald hi kuch karke info nikalta hoon..

Arjun frustrated calls his informers too and assign them their required work..

Riya was passing by the cabin when she heard something bt couldnot understand..

Riya mv: yeh arjun sir kya karne wale hia? Aajjkal bohot zyada busy n stressed rehte hia..kuch badi problem toh nahi hogi..i hppe ab esa kuch nahi ho jisme arjun sir ko koi taklif ho ya arjun sir aur rathod sir ka rishta aur kharab ho.mujhe hi kuch find karna hoga secretly..(she knew abt the friends broken relationshp n tried many times to mend it bt failed miserably getting only scoldings from both)

All got back to their works.. arjun , riya  n rathod still thinking abt each other..

Finally thy called a day off..

Arjun : rahtod mein parso se kuch dino ke liye leave le raha hoon I hve talked to comisioner sir wooh mujhe parso se leave de rahe hia. So joh bhi kaam hia mera kal bata dena..

Rathod: tumhare bina bhi etf ka kaam ho sakta hai rawte.. khud ko inti importance dene ke zarorat nahi..u can go wherever u want..


Rathod mv: matlab sirf kal ka din mere paas yeh patane lagane ke liye ke rawte kar kya raha hia.


Riya mv: kal hi mujhe find out karna hoga ke arjun sir kya kar raeh hia..par kaise ? kuch toh sochna hi hoga..


Arjun mv: bas kal ka din phir mein apne mission pe chala jaunga..


Whole night riya, arjun n rahtod were trying to get their works done.. riya had finally got a way to get from arjun wat he is upto..

Rathod's house..


Rathod mv: kuch bhi pata nahi chal raha hia.. damiit rawte I hope tum khud ko musibat mein nahi dal rahe hoon.. roshni ke baad tumhe nahi khona chahta hoon tumhe...mein gussa meri nafrat sirf isiliye hai ke tum thik raho..par phir bi mujhe tumpe nazar rakhni hogi..


Arjun s rooom..


Arjun : mujhe yeh info kal tak chahiye samaj aya tumhe.. 

jaldi se kaam karo..

 

Next morning..

All in etf office..riya , rathod n arjun with their plans of actions..

Rathod: team purnai kaam kitne pending hia..?

Riya: sir 4 cases ke.

Rathod: 4 cases finish it soon...

Riya served coffee to all n tea to arjun. Bt from some days her smile was missing.. she always use to smile and give arjun his tea bt now it was kind of task for her..



Arjun mv: riya ko itne din se ho kya gaya hia she is behaving odd and just too with me..jabbhi baat karne jata hoon avoid kar deti hia. Thik se jawab bhi nahi deti..wats wrong with her..?


Rathod: rawte esa kya important hia joh tum itne din ke liye leave le rahe ho?


Arjun: rathod kuch important hai aur mere paas comisioner sir ke permission bhi hia..so mujhse sawal mat karo..


Rathod: mein yahan ka chief hoon and u all are my responsibility


Arjun: toh meri responsibility lena chod do..


And he left for his cabin..


Rathod mv: iska matlab rawte zaror kuch plan kar raha hia bada..


Riya mv: I think joh mein kal raat soch rahe the wooh sahi tha mujhe pata lagana hi hoga aur shayad mujhe wahi trick use karni hogi..


Riya was also secretly planning something..


Shree: hey ri chalna thodi dair ke liye bahar chalte hia..


Riya: no shree thoda kaam hia tum aur chotu ho ao..waise shree tumhare paas ek extra transmitter hia kya?

Shree: kyon tujhe kyon chahiye?

Riya: nahi mujhe nahi chahiye wooh mera ek dost hia joh ki officer hia usko janna tha transmitter ke barein mein kuch toh..

Shree: wooh ek mere pass hia mere bag mein hai par wooh bohot hi high tech chip hia bohot hi choti par bohot hi sharp bhi..

Riya: shree mujhe thode dino ke liye wooh chip chahiye..

Shree: ok.. le lena meri bag mein se..

Riya took the chip and connected it to her lapi..

 

It was almost 5 pm when arjun called riya in his cabin.

Riya: yes sir..

Arjun: riya ek cup chai bana dogi..

Arjun looked at her. it was hving a stern face with no expressions..

Riya: sir mein busy hoo mein apke chai wale ko phone kar deti hoon.

Arjun (slowly muttered):akhri bar pila do...shyad phir kabhie mauka na mile

Riya: kya kaha apne .. akhri baar,?

Arjun: nahi mer matlab hia I m gng on leave so ...

Riya went out of his cabin...

In arjun's cabin..

Arjun mv: riya agar mein wapas aya toh shayad tumse yeh keh paunga ke mujhe maaf kardo..par tumpe gussa karna, tumhe inefficient batana yeh sab kuch sirf iss liye ke mein apne dil ke wooh baat chupa saku joh mera dil kabse kehna chahta hai..meine kabhi socha tha ke mein roshni zyada kisi aur ke bareim mein soch paunga fikar kar paunga ya jee paunga par tummein tum mein meri anewale zindagi ki khushi dekhi..par shayad mien iss kabil nahi hoon ke tumhe paa saku..agar iss baar meri wajahse tumhe chot poochi toh mein khudko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga..i love u riya I really do. Par shayad tumse kabhi nahi keh paunga yeh baat..

 

Riya mv: ab mere haath ke chai pene hia toh kitna achche se behave kar rahe hai aur uss din bina wajah mujhe kitna kuch suna diya..

Flashback..of riya...

He opend his office drawer which is always locked..and took out a wonderful pic from it.it was his n roshni's pic..

Arjun mv: roshni ab bas thode din aur phir tumhare maut ka zimmedar hamare alag hone ka zimmedar sikander usse nahi chodunga mein..ussee saza dilvaunga.. usko maut dekar tumhara badla lungi.. I promise u roshni..i love u..

He ws lost in his thoughts n moments when riya entered with a file which required his signatures. Bt due to her sudden calling n opening the door the pic slipped from arjun's hand and feel on the floor and glass of the frame got shattered..this led to raise arjun's frustration n anger more..and he blasted riya

Arjun : tum kab responsibility se kaam karoge? Tum kuch samaj ata hai ya nahi? Mein patthar se sar fod raha hoon.. why dnt u leave etf n go if u want to make such blunders..

Ria: sir mein toh file..

Arjun mv: get out of my cabin..

Riya: sir yeh file apki sign..mein kaanch..

Ajrun: dnt u dare touch roshni's pic jst leave riya..

Riya kept the file on the table n left the cabin..


flashback over.. 


present,

 

Riya comes out of her flashback n started making tea for him..

Riya mv: bt I think yahi moka ke mein apna kaam kar sakte hoon.. yeh chai hi mera kaam karegi ab..

Riya made the tea and kept on arjun's table bt while going she was feeling dizzy..

Riya: sirr mujhee chakkar..

Arjun: riya...

Arjun held her in his arms.. and  made her sit on his chair..he threw water drops on her face to bring her back in senses.

Arjun: riya thik toh hooo..?

Riya: ha sir bas achanak chakkar a gaya tha..

Arjun: riya riya kiya karo its good for ur health..

Riya: jee sir.. mein chalti hoon..

She existed his cabin...

Riya mv: hogaya kaam...

And smiled at her victory..

She took out her cell n called her friends.

Riya: hello abhi I need ur help..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hmmm.. interesting start.. love rirathod n arjun mv.. arjun loves ria but is afraid.. rian rathod trying to figure out arjun's sudden change behavior.. arjun secretly doing something.. ria doubts.. riya smartly does her work.. kya acting hai ria ki manna padega.. love it.. thanks for pm.. continue soon.. awesome..
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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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awesome start
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wow nice👏👏
chalo arjun ko realise ho gaya hai..so jyada time nahi lagega
good job riya ..acp ke annkh me dhul😆
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Wow !!!bilkul hat k start !!!!👍🏼
the trio r planning 4m their own own sides
Plz continue soon
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awesome update
omg arjun going to find sik alone😲
hope all etf will stop him
omg riya is so clever good job
wow arjun love riya poor ariya😭
plz continue
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intresting very intresting...lol

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Superb and amazing start... Loved it a lot. Unique concept and nice banner,as well...
The trio are planning differently from their sides... Arjun admits that he loves Riya but is afraid of losing her... Nicely written... Continue sooonish and thanks for the pm... :)