Tears - Of Happiness and Pain:IshRa OS

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Hey guys...after a long time I have tried dialouges in hindi...so pls bear.

Tears- Of Happiness and Pain


It was a breezy spring evening in Delhi. Making way through the nasty traffic Raman stopped his car at the traffic signal. He along with Ishita and Ruhi, had been to the latter's school to attend the annual day function. While Ruhi peacefully stared out at the spring bloom, Ishita touched Raman's forehead with the back of her hand. Raman felt uneasy at the touch of her satin skin.

"Pls Ishita I am fine...stop irritating me...and pls ye doctor wala look clinic mein chod ke aya karo"

"I can't believe it...ekto dhyaan rakho aur taane bhi suno...how can someone be so rude" Ishita shook her head in exasperation.

"Mumma-papa...u promised...no fighting" Ruhi interrupted before Ishita and Raman could lock horns again. Hearing Ruhi's sweet voice, Ishita looked back at her and smiled tenderly.

"Uth gaya mera bacha"

"nahinnn aap dono ki fighting ne mujhe darra diya" Ruhi pouted.

"Aww mumma is very sorry baby...ab aap ache so jao...darne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai" Ishita said sweetly as Raman looked upon the mother daughter duo.

Over a month had passed since Ishita became Raman's lawfully wedded wife and though it seemed a big lie to say that they were coping well in the new setting, but it wasn't as bad as Raman had thought initially. Ishita was a mature and caring girl who took care of his family and his daughter with all the love and respect. And he never expected anything more from this particular marital alliance.

After a few passing seconds, Raman was tapping his fingers on the steering wheel when he suddenly stole a glance at Ishita, who stared out of the window with a childlike excitement in her eyes. He bent over to see what she looked at. It was a golgappa stall. A quick smirk touched Raman's lips seeing his wife' innocence. Ishita was still looking on when the signal turned green but instead of taking a left Raman took u-turn and stopped the car in front of the stall.

"Arre apne yahan gadi kyun rok di" Ishita asked taken aback by Raman's sudden  gesture.

"Ruhi  aapko ice-cream chahiye tha na?" Raman asked Ruhi looking into the rear view mirror.

"Yesss papa"  Ruhi shouted in excitement.

"come on then...jaldi se bahaar aa jao"

Closing the door behind him Raman took ruhi in his arms and went towards the ice-cream counter. He looked back to check if Ishita was following or not.

Ishita opened her side of the door and walked out of the car still lost in bewilderment."Ye Mr mogambo ki tabeyiat to theek hai? Kahin phir se bukhar to nahin aa gaya. Inhe kya hua hai aaj"?she thought to herself.

"Ishita tum kaunsi ice-cream logi?"

"Ice-cream...urmm...Nahin mujhe zyaada  meetha pasand nahin hai...aap dono khaiye"

"Kyun tumhein teekha pasand hai...waise I wont be surprised if yes"

Raman smirked.

"What do you mean hun?"

"Nothing bas yehi ki tum sari aurton ko bas teekha hi to pasand hota hai...isiliye shayad tumhari zuban bhi waisi hi ho jati hai..."

"hun excuse me!"

"excused!"

"And please hun! Aap mardon ko agar teekha khane nahin ata to usmein humari kya galti...aap logon ko bas ye bachon wali candies and ice-creams hi pasand aa sakti hai"

"Please hun ek  punjabi se to teekhe khane ka competition karne ka sochna bhi nahin chahiye tumhein...abhi tumne mummyjee ke haath ki kadhi nahin khayi...agar ek bite mein tumhari aankhon mein aunsun na aa jayein to mera naam Raman nahin"

"Acha to phir kya naya naam rakhenge aap...mogambo?"

"shut up Ishita" raman ground his teeth.

Ruhi giggled seeing her mom and dad fight like tom and jerry...she loved how they fought still cared so much for each other.

"acha agar aisi baat hai to chaliye karte hain na" Ishita challenged Raman.

"what?"

"competition"

"kya! golgappe khane ka competition...pls ishita u r not a school girl...so ye stupid bets khelna band karo"

"kyun darr gaye"

"ha! In your dreams Mrs Bhalla"

It was a very sudden gesture that Raman acknowledged Ishita as Mrs Bhalla...though different but it did sound good...really good...for a few passing  seconds the two of them shared an eyelock when Ruhi's giggle brought them to reality.๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Urmm...so are you ready for the challenge?"

"Bring it on!"

"ok then...bhaiyaa do plate paani puri dena...teekha thoda zyaada"

Raman gave a tough look to Ishita as she stifled a giggle.

"Yesss go papa go...go mummma...mumma you have to win" Ruhi began to cheer them as they took in the first golgappa.

At the first piece only Raman choked at the extra spiciness. He had eaten golgappe after ages. Ishita giggled seeing his state.

As the two of them went on eating more, Raman's eyes grew from its usual pink shade to dark crimson red. He huffed and puffed due to the extra spicy water.
"Go mumma papa ko harado" ruhi hooted for Ishita, who too had watery eyes now. But she didn't give up.

Finally as they reached 18, Raman backed off.

"huhhhfff ..ceee...shittt" Raman wheezed emptying a whole bottle of mineral water in his stomach. "achu...huhhh... this is crazy Ishita maine aaj tak itne golgappe kabhi nahin khaye tum pagal to nahin ho"

Ishita and ruhi giggled seeing his haphazard state.

"Papa mumma ne aapko kitne araam se hara diya...my mumma is the best"  ruhi and Ishita hi-5ed and made fun of Raman. Ruhi's innocent smile finally brought happiness to Raman's face. It was a picture perfect family moment  as Ishita and ruhi made fun of him and he flushed in embarrassment. Raman could still feel the inner side of his mouth burning with the spiciness of the water but what burnt even more than that was someone's heart. Someone who was silently witnessing the happiness of Bhallas from a distance.

Shagun had come to the mall for buying some sarees as Ashok was out of the town since weeks now and she was getting bored at home. E ven Aditya had refused to visit her in his vacations. Sitting all by herself in Ashok's huge mansion made her feel claustrophobic. But much to her shock even in the open sky and the cool march breeze she felt nauseatic and stuffy.

Ishita Raman and Ruhi were lost in their own world of of bliss when suddenly Ruhi saw Shagun approaching them. Scared, she hid behind Ishita. Shagun was staring daggers at Raman and Ishita. She didn't know why but she felt a gruesome pain gripping her chest. She hated the smiles on Raman and Ishita's lips.

"mumma ghar chalo na" ruhi held Ishita by her dupatta.

Shagun felt sick in the stomach seeing her daughter acknowledge someone else as her mother.

"hiee shagun" Ishita stammered confused what to say.

"woh actually hum ruhi ke annual function se aa rahe the to Raman ne kaha ki...woh paani puri...waise do u like it..."

Shagun felt irritated seeing Ishita's sweetness...she had never felt so embarrassed and estranged in front of Raman. Today for the first time he didn't look like her ex-husband to Shagun but someone else's life-partner. And it certainly did sting her ego to bits.

"Shagun tumhein zaroor try karna chahiye...its nice..bhaiya ek aur plate deejiye na" Ishita offered the panipuri to shagun and tried to be courteous but before shagun could throw Ishita amidst another round of insult, Raman picked Ruhi in his arms.

"let it be Ishita...is tarah sadak par pani puri khana kuch logon ke class ko suit nahin karta...ye itne teekhepan ko hazam nahin kar payengi..."

Raman's bitter words transported Shagun to a bleak memory of the day when  Raman had bought a new two-wheeler and he wished to celebrate the occasion by eating roadside panipuri and chaat. She remembered how she had insulted him of being a typical middle class mentality man and being unhygienic. And how she had left the mall with some of her rich friend for a party leaving Raman to ride back home all alone.

*bang* the sound of her slamming the car door and leaving behind a hurt Raman, reverberated in her ears...but alas! This time it was she at the receiving end. Before she could come to know the Bhallas had left the place elaving her all alone. As Ishita took Ruhi into her lap and slipped into her seat next to Raman's, he lifted her dupatta inside and closed the door carefully. Without caring two hoots about his so called ex-wife, who still stood glued to her place he sank in his seat and turned the ignition on. Shagun fumed in extreme anger as she witnessed Raman's car vanish down the road when suddenly she felt her eyes burning and cheeks moist. She could not believe, she was crying.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very Good one!! Do continue...Loved the picture perfect family moments!! And what is that made u to take the number 18...haha!! Keep writing more!!
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Awesome os.loved it.i felt sorry 4 this shagun..very cute moments of our lubly trio.thanks 4 the weekend treat.btw i got reply 4m shagun aka anita on fb :-) she is very sweet hehe.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow - that was beautiful! The end so apt - it's coming for Shagun; when she won't have anything due to her greediness.
Loved Raman/Ishit'a bickering; Ruhi was very cute with her go Mama.

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Amazing story๐Ÿ‘ hoping to see these kind of scenes in the show๐Ÿ˜Š
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Malika your stories always make me smile...very good as always..loved the.entire thing especially the ending
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was very good...loved it...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Awesome๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.am sure there will be a scene similiar to this in the show at one point of time n then the big twist of shagun will begin frm there.shagun may use aditiya as a weapon against ishra n ruhi.she will create discord in ishra's life.wt will be interesting to watch at the time is hw ishra will handle the situation.
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nice os plz do continue  
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Very much a good one,,,,,, Hope to see the same on screen.