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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishita is taking a walk in a park all alone after another of ego fights with Raman

She is fuming and lost in her own thoughts when she suddenly frozes at shock at sight of person she walks into

That person is subbu

Ishita tries to evade him and walk away

But subbu follows her and stops her

Subbu starts taunting her and talking trash to ishita

Ishita is in tears and tries to wriggle out but subbu does not loosen his grip

But suddenly someone lands a punch on subbu and subbu lands far way

Ishita is shocked when she realises it is Raman

Raman keeps on beating subbu

Ishita tries to stop him but he does not

And subbu when ishita is trying to stop Raman takes advantage and runs away

Subbu before going yells "dekh loonga tumhe "

Raman replies dekh lena

Ishita who is shocked angrily asks "tum pagal ho ye sab Karne ki Kya zaroorat thi "

Raman says "Kya Karo usa dekha to bahut gussa aa Gaya "

Ishita asks "kyu"

Raman replies "ab dekhona woh tumhe chhodhkar nahi jata to tum Ruhi ki life main tang nahi adati aur nahi ye Sab Hota aur nahi mujhe tumse shaadhi karni padti "

Ishita who was already angry gets more angry hearing this and goes away after glaring angrily at Raman and thinking ye Akdu kabhi nahi badlega

Raman smirks at that and goes after her

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Haha, nice story!!
I loved "But suddenly someone lands a punch on subbu and subbu lands far way" just like a filmi hero

I wish it happens in the show
Edited by -ChutkiBajake- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Nice funny. Looks like even we can't let them dissolve their issues soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice story,hope it comes true😉 TFS😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silsha

Its so o o gud,.
Tfs

thank you for feedback
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
LOlz. Nice. Keep writing more! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Nice dear 👍🏼
Plz do write more stories on Ishra 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for feedback will keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want this to happen in the show itself.
Nice story dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thats really awesome 👏 👏
Love the raman beat subbu..very well deserved 👍🏼 👍🏼
You should really continue this 😳
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