Ariya os: tera hi toh mein hissa ho..

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Riya has survived the zora virus incident bt I gave her the biggest curse of her life. Bt arjun never made her felt that something is missing her life..after 2 months of her recovery he married her and their marriage proved to be the biggest for them.arjun's mom and dad came to the wedding and father-son conflict got over for ever..

Riya came to her new house after the wedding..now riya is more loved by arjun's parents and arjun always complains it..everyone thing was perfect..life was perfect wth the best life partner and his family together..

 

Rawte mansion..

Morning 7 am..

Riya came out wearing a salvar-kameez and was drying her hair..bt the noise of the hairdryer woke arjun up..

Arjun: ria curtains band karo aur yeh awaz bhi ..

Riya: arjun uthiye subah hogai hia..7 baj chuke hia phir late hogaya toh mujhse mat kahiyega..

Arjun: aree pyar toh uthao itna daanth raeh hoon subah subah..

Riya goes and sit beside him..caressing his hair..

Riya: arjun uth jayeyena..

Arjun: yeh hue meri riya wale baat..

He woke up and hugged her tight..

Arjun: thank u for everything

Ria: aap har roz mujhe thank u kyon kehte hia..?

Arjun: kyonki aaj sir aur sirf tumhare wajahse mein wooh zindagi je raha jiske sirf meine khwab dekhe the .warna..

Riya: toh mujhe bhi apko thank u chahiye apne mujhe apnaya sach janene ke baad bhi..

This angered  very much and he got up from the bed and moved to the bath room..

Riya: I m sorry..please..aap gussa mat hoyeye..

Arjun : agar tum yeh baat karoge toh mein tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga yaaad rakhna..

Riya hugged him from behind..

Riya: ok baba ab nahi kahungi..

Arjun turned around and hugged her tight..giving soft kisses on her shoulders and neck..

Arjun: u r everything riya..everything..

Riya: ooh arjun dair ho rahe hia..

Arjun: meri morning kiss..

He smirked to her and bend down to take kiss on her lips whn a knock on the door alerted them..riya distanced herself from him..

Ria: kaun?

cook came in ..shyam

Riya: aree shyam bhaiyaa aap boliye?

Shyam: bhabhi wooh naste mein kya banana hia ..?

Riya: mein ate hoon aaj chai chada dijiye..

Shyam: jee.

Ria started to move away..

Arjun: hey kahan ja rahe hoon tum..?

Riya: arjun dair ho rahe hia jane dijiye..

Arjun: aur meri treat..

Riya pecked his lips quickly and ran out of the room..arjun went to get ready..and riya reached the kitchen..

Riya prepared breakfast and arranged the table..

Aai: riya.aaa

Riya: ho aai..

Riya reached the mandir in the house and arjun's dad and arjun too...though arjun was still the same bt he stood there for his family.

Riya: ye lijiye aai puja ke thali..

Riya n arjun's mom did the puja and gave the arti n prasad to their husbands.ria always tuff sweet in arjun's mouth..

Arjun: riya..

Riya: mujhe meetha pasand nahi I know that dear..mere liye..

 

They all settled on dinning table having breakfast whn shyam brought a bundle of books and stationery..

Shyam: riya bhabhi sara saman aa gaya..

Riya: jee..

Arjun'dad: yeh kis chees ka saman hia beta..?

Riya: baba wooh bachcho ke school ka naya year shuru ho raha hiana toh unke books aur baki zarorat ki cheese hia.baba apne rahul ke admission ke liye baat karli haina?

Arjun: thank god tum le aye warna mujhe tme milta nahi sab late ho jata.

Arjun's dad: haa beta meine sab dekh liya hia tum ek baar jake dekh lena.

Ria: jee ..aai baba arjun mein kal ek party dena chahti the ghar mein .

Arjun's dad: bilkul bhai tumhara ghar hai riya joh tum chaho wooh hoga..

Ria: thanks baba..

Arjun's mom: riya party hia kiss batki.?

Riya: aai wooh rahul hia na kal uska bday hia abhi wooh bohot chota hia toh meine socha uske liye hum esa kuch kare toh usee achcha lagega aur baaki baccho ko bhi bula lenge sabko achcha lagega.

Arjun'smom: bohot hi achcha socha tumhe beta..tum bilkul fikar mat karo sarein taiyariyan mein khud karvaungi..

Ria: arjun aap bhi jaldi aa jayeyga wooh apse bohot attachd hai na.

Arjun: ok aa jaunga..

Riya: aur aap office jayeye mein bachcho ka admission ka process karke aa jaungi..

Arjun: haan thik hia mein school chod deta hoon.

Riya: haan aai baba apko jise bhi invite karna hia aap dijiye aur aai aap akele kuch mat kijiye mein bahar ki shopping kar dungi aur caterers se bhi baat kar lungi..

Arjun's mom: thik hia beta mein guest list bana deti hoon..

Riya: jee ..

Ariya started to go..riya again stopped.

Riya: baba apki davai lena mat bhuliyega..

Arjun's dad: nahi bhulunga..

Arjun and riya settled in the suv..

Arjun: riya mujhe bohot achcha laga ke tum bachcho ke liye itna kuch kar rahe hoon.

Riya: arjun yeh bachche hi toh hamare desh ka kal hia yeh padhenge likhenge toh hamare desh ka naam roshan karenge..

And arjun stopped his car at a tea stall..

Chotu a small boy works here part time and ariya pay for his school fees and welfare.he and his little brother are orphans..infact it was riya who gave his younger brother name "rahul"

Chotu: bhaiya bhabhi..chacha 2 special cutting banao..

ARiya went and hugged chotu..

Riya: chotu kaise ho tum?sardi kam hogai na davai se?

Chotu: ha bhabhi ab thik ho mein..

Riya: aaj suno tumhare school ke kitabe aa gai hai aur haan ab hum rahul ka admission bhi karva denge toh uska bhi khayal rakhna thik hia..

Chotu: rahul bhi padeaga mere saath?

Riya: ha par abhi wooh chote class mein hoga par uska khayal rakhna ..

Chotu: thik hia..

Riya: chotu kal uska janamdin hai na?

Chotu: ha bhabhi apko yaad hia?

Riya: bilkul aur mein chahti hoon ke hum uska janamdin manai kya mein esa kar sakti hoon?

Arjun caressed his hair..

Arjun: bolo chotu kya hum esa kar sakte hia?

Chotu: bhaiya bhabhi..

Riya: are yeh kya baat hue tum ro raeh hoon ,,achcha chalo ab thodi dair mein tumhara schol hia na toh apna naya bag aur books nahi loge..

Riya brought his bag and books and gave it to him..

Arjun: toh aaj se naya saal aur bohot mehnat karna.

Chotu: ha aur ek din apse jaise officer banuga..

Arjun:bilkul..yeh rahul kaha hai?

Chotu: wooh khel raha hoga mausi ke paass.

Riya: arjun aap office jayeye mein rahul se milke uska admission ke baat karke office aa jaungi..

Arjun: ok..chalta hoon chotu..

Chotu: haan arjun bhaiyaa..

Riya went to the chawl were chotu and rahul stayed with a widow lady who agreed to took care of them..and took rahul to school for finishing the procedures..and finally led for etf..

Etf office..

Riya was finishing her work and arjun busy in solving clues..

Arjun: riya wooh rahul ka admission hogaya.?kuch problem toh nahi hua na?

Riya: nahi baba ne sab kar diya tha ab kalse rahul bhi school jayega

Rathod: rawte riya tum dono bohot achcha kaam kar raeh hoon

Arjun: bas sam agar hum unki zindagi mein kuch bhi badlav la sake toh isse zyada kya chahiye..

Rathod: haa u are right..

Riya: aur haan aap sab logo ko kal ana hia ghar rahul ke bday party ke liye..

Shree: zaror ri aur hum tere arrangements bhi help kar denge..

Chotu : ha bilkul mein soch raha hoo mickey mouse ban jao aur sabko hasao

Arjun: team yeh sab badme abhi case..

All: yes sirr..

Whole day went in solving cases and planning for rahul bday..

Finally it was rahul bday party ..lots of guests came and rahul was also feeling very nice..he never felt so loved... he was only 4 years old bt he understood a lot life..riya had brought lots of gifts clothes and toys for all the kids..

Finally thy cut the bday cake and all enjoying the party.. riya was busy attending kids and arjun handling all arrangements..

Bt as always some people can never remain happy in other happiness.

Some ladies started to gossip abt ariya, arjun's parents and the kids..

Lady: aree yeh riya bhi na ek anath bachche ko kaise gale lagakar ghum rahe hia..

Lady2: aur yeh sab log bhi dekho toh ese khush ho rahe hia jaise iss parivar ka khoon..iska bday manaya..

Lady3: ab apni kami joh chupani hia toh yeh sahi..par sadak se bachcha uthane ke kya zarorat the kahin achche orphange se latee..

Lady1: aur nahi toh kya suna hia riya kabhi ma nahi ban sakte wooh joh hadsa hua tha na usme yeh hogaya tha uske saath..

Lady2: arjun ne shaadi hi kyon ki ussee ab iss ghar ka wansh kaise agee badhega..?

Lady3: mujhe toh lagta hia ke arjun aur riya ne yeh baat chupake rakhi hogi apne ma baap warna wooh thodi na mante riya ko apne ghar ke bahu banane ke liye...

 

Jee nahi...a loud came shutting everyone's mouth..and it was arjun's mom riya's mother in law..

Hum achchi tarah se jante hia ke riya ma nahi ban sakti..aur mujhe iss baat garv hia ke riya meri bahu hia aur wooh usse zyada iss batt ki khushi ke sabko ek saman pyar karti hia..

 

The party turned into funeral..arjun signalled shree to take the kids outside..

Arjun: aai kya hua? Yeh riya ke barein kya keh rahe the..?

Lady: bas kuch khaas nahi yahi ke ek anaath bache ko apne ghar mien lakar uska bday manana..

Arjun's dad: toh isme galat kya hai?

Arjun: apki problem akhir hia kya? Iss bachche se riya se?

Lady: arjun bura mat manana par tum ne riya se shaadi hi kyonki jab tum yeh jante the ke wooh kabhi ma nahi ban sakti...

Arjun was hell in anger bt riya held his hand and stopped him..she was broken to bits..this was the biggest curse of her life which the virus had given her that she could never give birth to a child..bt arjun always told her that for him nothing matters if she is there and even his parents supported riya alot

Arjun: riya kabhi ma nahi ban  sakti  janti hia kyon?? Kyonki usne aap logo ke aur logo ke bachcho ke jaan bachane ke liye khud ke jaan ke bhi parva nahi ke..agar wooh virus riya ne nahi khaya hota na toh aaj aap aur apke bachche zinda bhi na hote..agar wooh uss waqt apne barein mein sochti na toh aaj app log yahan na hote..aur uske barein ese ghatiya batein na kar rahe hote..

Riya: arjun please..aap ..

Arjun's mom: rehne de arjun yeh nahi samjhengi..ma banene ke liye sirf kaukh nahi mamta bhi chahiye ..wooh meri riya mein bohot sarein hia.. wooh bina kisi shwarth aur bini kisi bhaid bhav se har bachche ko pyar sakti hia..wooh har bachche ko ma ka pyar de sakti hia..joh aap log bhi nahi de sakte..

Riya broke down crying in arjun's arms...

Arjun: riya riya ro mat please tumhe inki batein sunne ke zarorat nahi ria..

Riya: yeh sahi keh rahe hai arjun mein kabhi apko ek bachcha nahi de sakti kabhi iss ghar ka waris nahi de paungi mein..

Arjun: mujhe kuch nahi chahiye riya mere liye tumse badh kar kuch nahi hai..

Arjun's dad: arjun riya ke liye pani le lao..riya kya tumhe esa kabhi bhi laga ke hum khush nahi tumse? Kya kabhi esa laga ke hume ek waris chahiye..?

Riya: nahi baba par mujhe khudse nafrat hoti yeh sochkar ki mein apko wooh khushi dene ke kabil nahi ho..

Arjun's mom: riya yeh kaise baat kar raeh hoon tum beta..sirf arjun ke liye humare liye bhi tumse badhkar kuch nahi hia samjhe tum..aur joh tumne kiya wooh koi aam ladki nahi kar sakti..bina soche ke tumhara kya hoga tum zinda rahoge ya nahi tumne sabki zindagi chuni apni maut ke parva kiya bina tumhe khudpar garv hona chahiye riya..

Arjun : aai pani..

Arjun's mom: lo beta pani piyo aur shaant hojao..ese nahi rote beta..

Arjun's dad: arjun riya ko kamre mein le jao usee aram ke zarorat hia..

His dad gave a glaring look to the ladies which was well enough for them to get embarased and leave the house..

Arjun took riya to their room..riya was still very hurt.suddenly she felt a soft feel on her hands..

She looked up to see rahul standing there with arjun..

Rahul: apko kya hua? Kyon ro rahe hoon?

He rubbed riya's tears with his small fingers..

Rahul: aap rote achche nahi lagte..

Arjun: dekhona rahul kaise ro rahe hia.. tum chup karao mein toh harr gaya..

Rahul pointed towards riya's lap.Riya took rahul in her lap and kissed his forehead..

Rahul: pata hia aaj mujhe school mein sab pooch rahe the mere ma papa kahan hia?meine kuch nahi bola...mujhe nahi pata wooh kahan hia? Arjun bhaiyaa kahan hia wooh?

Arjun: beta yeh jawab mein nahi riya degi..

Rahul: haa mein ek kaam karta hoon mein na aaj se apko ma bolunga..

Ria: par mein tumhare ma nahi hoon rahul..

Rahul: hooo koi baat nahi app mujhse bohot pyar karte hioon na toh apko ma bolunga..bolona aap banoge na ma? Mein bilkul achcha bachcha banke rahunga apko tang nahi karunga..?bolo na meri ma banoge na?

Arjun: dekha riya tum ek bachche ke ro rahe the dekho yeh samne se tumhe ma bula raha hia.

Riya: mein apki ma hi rahul..aur aap mere bachche..

choree also entered and all the kids of orphange entered the room..

Chotu: bhabhi hum apke itne sarein bachhe hia phir bhi aap ro rahe hoon..

One of the kids: aap hume bhul gai..?

Ria:mein apko kaise bhul sakti hoon..mere itne sarien bachche hai..kabhi nahi bhul sakte..

Aa jao..all kids climbed the bed and hugged riya..and riya was now smiling seeing the lve they shower on her..

Arjun and his parents were happy seeing riya and the kids.

Riya: aai baba arjun I m sorry meine aaj apko bhi rula diya..

Arjun's dad: hoon akhri baar maaf kar rahe hia tumhe riya..kabardar aaj ke baad yeh baat apne dimag mein laye hia toh..warna samjhey  ya samjhaun..

Riya laughd at this line and kids alos..

Chotu: yeh toh bhaiya ki line hia..

Arjun's dad: toh chalo bhaiya hi samjhaenge ab hum  chalenge ice cream khane sab chalenge na..

Arjun tum riya ke saath raho hum bachcho ke saath hia..

Arjun: jee baba..

Arjun'smom: aa jao bachcho jaldi aao..

All kids went out now only ariya were there..riya huggd arjun tight..arjun also consolled her..

Arjun: riya I m very angry on u..

Riya: sorry.

Arjun: sorry se kaam nahi chalega..manao mujhe..

Riya: kaise?

Arjun: tumhe nahi pata kaise?

Ria moved closer and placed her lips on arjuns..showering all love,trust,gratitude..after a while they parted and he hugged her tight..

Arjun: I love u riya..

Riya: I love u too arjun..jante hia mujhe hamesha kuch adhora lagta tha apne andar par aaj ke baad kabhi nahi lagega..

Arjun: mein tumhe kabhi adhura feel nahi hone dunga..akhir mein bhi toh hissa ho.mein sirf tumse pura hoon riya..

Riya: aur apse..apka hisaa hoon mein..

they cuddled into each other becoming a inseparable part of each other


the end..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
  Ami senti ho gae pinku 

It is wonderful ,amazing ,jhikass outstanding os

I think yeh words kam hai is os k lea 

U made me speechless 

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Claps 4 bs 

Ariya love toward children me love it kash Aisa sabhi sochay to kaha sai kaha ho jayga e

Love u 4 wonderfully stuff which depict by u perfectly 


Edited by Mishti_k5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os
very hurt touching ...
luv it
Thx 4 pm anku
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful os
Ariya's morning moments were lovely
loved Ariya for their caring n loving gestures towards those kids
they both are really building up the future  of the nation
n Riya taking care of Rahul n all the process
regarding his admission was awesome
the b'day was nice all the kids enjoyed a lot
but those stupid aunties😑😑
hate them from core!!
the way Arjun n his parents stood for her
and gave them a nice sys session was nice
Rahul was really cute
loved Ariya n the kids!!
Ariya were superb!!
fabulous work Pinku
loved it!!!πŸ‘
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*unres*
a very heart touching and emotional story.
Loved it a lot.
Brought tears in my eyes.
Thanks for the pm... :)Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww..dis ws Fabulous! Loved it soo much !!!!!! Sachi..Ariya jaisa koi nahi !!!! Pinku..very nicely written..Amazing!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Wow
Awesome os
Love it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superbbb...lovely...πŸ‘
so arjun and his family are very supportive...😊
that idiot ladies,,,,😑
love the bonding of riya and that all kids...😊
so cute,⭐️,,thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Awsum Pinkuz! Beautiful...lovd it! Lovd ArIya! Thanxx 4 pm...
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superb yar.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..