Hrishikesh Pandey Story Contest Entries (Voting Closed) - Page 3

Debasree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Short Story Contest

Host: binod.abhijeet
Theme:CID team are in a birthday party celebrating the birthday of Sachin in a hotel. Incidentally, a murder took place inside the same hotel. So after a short investigation, the murderer is found and the credit goes to Sachin.
Title: Raaz Khooni Birthday Cake Ka
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Again I'm confused 😆 so sorry 😳 Why the title is - "Raaz...Birthday Cake Ka"...I mean why birthday cake includes while in plot the cake is not mentioned. 😕

Anyway, read all stories & only Story1 justified theme & title both. But I like 3 stories. Wonderfully written. First story - I feel writer wrote it in very short time as there are few typo error otherwise this is best among 3 stories.

All the best to all writers 👍🏼

My Rate
Story 1 - 8/10
Story 2 - 7/10
Story 3 - 7/10

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Its Really Nice to see some Lovely Attempts for Short Story Thread too...👏👍🏼

Story 1: Completely Justified the Theme as well Title, Lovely Funny Convo between Team and SACHIN really did Best to Investigate Proplely and Not Missing any Clue in that Tension...😳👏

Rate: 10/10

Story 2: Story gave a Little Space to SACHIN but its Nice that all really Cared about their Colleague Personal Celebrations, Cop Injured but Caught the Culprit, Really Nice Attempt...😳👏

Rate: 8/10

Story 3: Excillent Idea to Vanish seniors with Some Strong Reason, I really enjoyed SACHIN investigation, His Approach in that Room as well Good Collaboration with FREDDIE Sir , Excillent and Well Written...😳👏

Rate: 9/10

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