ARIYA FF : Mrs. Arjun Rawte PART 10 Pg 31 OCT 02

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for again starting new one.. per kya karu??? varna mar jaaungi.. itne dino se ye story ghum rahi hai mere brain mai...
 
 
 
 
Prologue
 
 
 
 
What happen when  already Heartbroken person his first love... his true frind his soulmate
 
 
 
What happen when happily Chirpily girl  changes into serious person and behave like an older one???
 
 
what haapen when still ur past haunt you???
 
 
What happen when ur past is only thing & reason of ur loving???
 
 
What u think he extend his has hand to her or again fall in love ???
 
 
And she is ready to accept him ????
 
 
 
 
INDEX
 
 
PROLOGUE
 
 
PART 1 - PG 1
 
PART 2 - PG 3
 
PART 3 PG 6/7

PART 4 PAGE 8/9

PART 5
PART 6 PAGE 16

PART 7 PAGE 20 - 21

PART 8 - PAGE 24

PART 9 - PAGE 27

PART 10 - PAGE 31
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1
 
 
 
She is so happy... she look at him , he is calm , she never understands him... she thinks & feels haapy...
 
 
Pandit starts his  Work.. His parents also happy & smiling...
 
 
He  put  Varmala in her neck & she also does same..
 
 
Now Both seat near Holy fire & Pandit  instructs them..
 
 
Suudenly Boy satnd up & llok at his bride " I'm sorry.. mai ... mai ye nhi kar sakta ye sab.. ye dikhava aur nhi hoga mujhse... " and throws Varmala on ground & goes from their
 
 
Hia parnts goes behind him
 
 
And girl just look at Mangaulsutra that lying in Pandit ji hands
 
 
 
 
" Ammm " he wakes up . his wipe his face... he still regeart that mistake he did 7 yrs ago.. he always feel her curses give him this life.. now no love in his life.. his wife also died... he love his wife , his wife also feel sad for that girl... she wants to meet her , but he never gather courage to face her..
 
 
 
 
In other House
 
 
 
She silently look at  their pocture that had takesn before wedding..
 
 
She is shyly smiling & he like as ususal silent & angry young man always.. she never understands  why he dn't like her.. After all drama she  knows from someone that their wedding night he marries another girl.. but she is calm.. she never cry from that dy... when he left her... after 6 yrs she knows through Newspapers that his wife was brutally murderd... She felt bad..
 
 
 
His parnts feel bad for her & curses their son to destroy one beatuful life...
 
 
His father always says" Maine galti ki uska rishta  is ladki se kar kar , shayad koi aur use maaf bhi kar de per mai kabhi nhi... shayad aaj vo kisi ka dil tod ne ki saza paa raha hai... "
 
 
 
She hears all & closes her eyes... his smiling face comes in front of her eyes..
 
 
" Mai tumhe kabhi nhi bhul sakti Arjun..."
 
 
 
" Mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhi kar sakta Riya... kabhi nhi.." with that he hold his head & tears come out from his eyes.. He immeadtly get up & open his lappy.. & sees one smiling girl pic..
 
 
" Shyad aaj isi baat saza mil rahi hai mujhe Riya , maine ek achhi soul ko hurt kiya.. ek naajuk si Pari ko dukh diya.. dua to roj karta hue ki jandagi ke kisi mod per hum na mile..."
 
 
 
She sees his photo & caressing frame
 
 
 
" Shyad kisi mod per hum  phir mile Arjun , shayd ab tumhe ehsaas dila du apne pyar ka..."
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic concept dr n such a superb start...!!!!
OMG Arjun left Riya in the middle of their marriage...!!!!
Wht the...he married somebody else on the same day...!!!!
Awww that memory is still haunting him...!!! 
Let's see how the story unfolds...!!!
Thanx for pm dr...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awwh... such a cute person one is waiting arjun feeling guilty waiting for next
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Super awsum !!!
i really really luv it !!!!
plz nxt part jaldi jaldi ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept and part 1 is also nice
waiting how they both will meet again
update soon and send pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Mannu superb start...
Arjun ditched Riya just before marriage...
Riya didnt forgive him but still hoping to make him realise her love towards him...aww
So Riya stays with Arjun's parents...
update soon

Mannu Dokha ya ... update plz... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Waiting for other parts
Dnt make Ariya separate
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept...
awesome start...

update soon and thanks for the PM
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Awesome start...
 
Will be Waiting for their reunion...
 
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Sorry but I feel like to beat you black & blue...bcoz u don't update regularly...😑😑😑 πŸ˜‘😑😑 πŸ˜‘😑😑 πŸ˜‘😑😑