Etf ki prem kahaani

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this is my first post 

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Character Sketch

ACP Arjun Rawte: Same as show but no tiff's b/w him and sameer

ACP Sameer Rathor: Same as show and best buddy of Arjun

Senior inspector Riya Mukherjee: Research specialist and best cadet of her  batch

Senior Inspector Ayesha Kapoor: Same as show

Roshni rawte: Arjun's wife and rathore's sister. Killed by Sikendar to take revenge from the two ACP's 

Rest Chotu, Shree, Liza and Charvi

 

Prolouge:

Story unfolds how each member of etf fight for their love...

 

Chapter 1

 

It has been 3 years since ETF has been formed. All etf members are like family to each other. 

Five years ago after death of Roshni, their only family(Arjun's and Sameer's family had died in an plane accident on a business trip. More details of their family will be disclosed later.) both buddies supported each other to move forward in their lives and now they have started living their lives again. Arjun had developed feelings for Riya and has proposed her six months before but rest have still not proposed their lady love.

 

Since Etf has been formed they had been the best and today in mumbai criminal activities have reduced to minimal due to their terror and in this process they have developed many rivals who want to finish this team.

 

In some part of dubai:

man1: Bhai is etf ka toh kuch karna hi padega. Ab maamla hath se nikal raha hai, mujhe lagta hai hum sabko aapsi dushmani bhulake inn etf waloon se nipatna chahiye.

man2(to whom man 1 was speaking): Tum sahi keh rahe ho, ab toh hamein kuch karna padega. Tum iss sunday tak sabko logon ko yahan bulao mujhe baat karni hai.

man1: theek hai bhai

 

Mumbai (ETF Office)

 Morning 9:00 am

Arjun and riya are sitting in conference room sitting hand in hand and suddenly samesha(sameer and aisha) enters.

sam: gud morng jeeju(ariya are nt married, sam just teases them)

arjun: gud mrng saale jeeju  kab banega

(sam treats riya as her younger sister while arjun treats aisha as her younger sister. sam and aisha love each other but have nt confessed yet).

On hearing this aisha turns red

sam: saale subah subah shuru ho gaya aur chote meri pari ka hath(sam calls riya pari).

On hearing riya blushes.

arju: saale banaane ke liye propose karna padega aur rahi baat haath pakadne ki toh mein meri riyu ka haath kabhi bhi pakad sakta hun, tu kyon nahi meri ayu ka hath thaam leta.

Aisha blushes 

Ayu(Aisha): bas karo bhai (turning to riya) chal ri in dono ko ladne de(turning to arju)waise bhai aaj subah jab mein aapka nashta leke aapke flat mein aai toh aap kahan the????aur ri tab tu bhi ghar par nahi thi(winks at them)phir mujhe iss sadu ke sath nashta karna pada(looking at sam)

sam: mein sadu????😲

ayu: haan... tum nahi toh aur kaun!!!!!

sam: tumhare bhai...

ayu: mera bhai ke bare nein kuch mat bolna he is so sweet and u akdu

sam: what???

arju(in riya's ear): ye dono phir shuru hogaye, hum chalte hain iss se pehle yeh humein subah ke liye pakde.

riya(whispering): haan chalo

sam and ayu are still fighting while the two love birds try to escape but they are caught by shree

to be cont...

plz give ur comments

no precap today 

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super start
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Awsum starting !!!

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awesome start yar...
everyone already in a relationship cool...
love how they were teasing each other...
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Awesome start
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tHANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS 
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amazing
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Superb start dr...!!!!
Wow Ariya n Samsha r already in relationship...!!!!
Who is that man...???? Is it Sik...????
Loved the way thy all teased eachother...!!!!
Awww Ariya tried to escape but Shree caught thm...!!!
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Chapter 2
shree: jiju kahaan ja rahe ho bachkar 
arjun: vooo...vooo mujhe mere informer ko phne krna tha toh vohi karne jaa raha hoon
shree(teasing): jab pakde gaye toh bhagne ko bahana?????
arjun: what bahana shree??(smirking) I am ur boss so u can't ques me!!!
While arjun and shree were talking rii thought of escaping but before she could chotu came and caught her.
chotu: kya hua bhabhi jii... kahan jaa rahe ho???(arju treats chotu and shree as his yonger brothers)
riya: vooo voh kya hena chotu mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai toh socha canteen mein jake kuch bana loon tumhare liye bhi banaun kya????(riya asked chotu innocently)
chotu: chal ri mujhe bhi bahut bhok lag rahi hai
Chotu was getting into riya's trap.
By this time samesha's fight also got over and they were listning to their convo.
sam: pari(sam calls riya pari) yeh toh batate jao ki savere tum aur tumhare darling arju kahan the.
shree: sir aapko pata hai kal raat ko jab mein kal raat toh do baje ke kareeb utha tha tab meine kuch bahut ajeeb dekha!!!!! yeh dekhiye uski photo(shree took out his tab to show a pic to sam)
After seeing the pic sam showed the pic to everyone except ariya and now all etf members were giving them angry looks.
(I forgot to tell u that all etf members live in a same building which was given to etf last year as reward when they stopped a big terrorist attack in the whole country.There is a seperate flat for each member and has all the facilities like garden,swimming pool etc.)
arjun(getting close to riya): hume ese kyon dekh rahe ho jaise ki hum koi criminals hai.
sam(faking anger): woh toh tum ho hee...
riya(tensed): bhai esa kya kiya humne?????
sam: kya kiya!!!!! pari meine tujhse toh ye expect hi nahi kiya tha. Arju tu bhi sharm kar
shree(faking anger): haan ri tu bhi esa kar sakti hai
chotu(faking anger): ri yeh tune kya kiya
Riya was now on the verge of crying as she didn't knew what big crime she and arjun had created for which they were so angry.
Arjun got angry as his jaan was going to cry and he hated her tears.
arjun(shouting): ab batao bhi kya kiya humne tum riyu ko kyon rula rahe ho
sam: toh yeh kya hai(showing him the pic in tab) 
arjun: shree... i am nt gona leave u. Ab mein tera bhi secret sabko bata dunga.
(The pic was of yesterday's night. At n8 aftr evry1 whnt to sleep ariya met in garden and riya was sitting in arjun's lap and their hands entwingled. Their faces were very close to each other. For this pic evry1 was teasing them.)
shree(wishpering in arjun's ear): sir dikhaeye na sab ko photo!!!! voh kya hain na ki kuch din pehle jab aapne mujhe aapka cell update karne ke liye diya tha tab meine mere aur liz(liza) ke photos wali voh file hack karke delete kar di aur rahi baat aapke sabhi pc's ki toh vahan se toh mein kabki hac karke voh files delete kar chuka hoon.
After saying this shree immediately ran behind sam.
arjun: shree ke bacche tujhe toh mein dekh lunga
During all this riya had turned red after seeing the pic.
sam: pari iss pagal ko toh sharam nahi hai(pointing toward arjun) but tu, tu bhi iske saath sabke samne romance karne lagi hai😲 hadh hoti hai
Now ri cried as all her frenz and specialy his bhai was upset wth her. Ayesha who was silently watching this now spoke up.
ayesha: hadh hoti sam aapke mazak mein meri hone wali bhabhi ko rula dia(hugging ria sideways) sam ab aur koi kuch nahi bolega
sam(goes towards riya and hugs her): are pagli mein toh bas mazak kar raha tha toh ro kyun rahi hai. Tujhe pata hai na mein teri aankhon mein aansun nahi dekh sakta.
They part from hug, sam cups her face in his hands and kisses her forehead.
riya: bhai aapko pata hai na ki mein kuch bhi jhel sakti hun aap sabki narazgi ke alawa. Mein toh kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi soch sakti aap sabko hurt karne ka. Aap logon ke alawa mera hai hi kaun iss duniya mein. Mere parivar ne toh mujhe akela chod diya tha aur mere bhai bhai ne toh mere saath... 
But she could nt continue more and starte crying hugging sam.
(Riya's family was a very conservative family. After her schooling they decided to marry her but she wanted to becme a police officer and so whn she got stubborn on her decision then her family broke all their relations with her and evn therw her out of their house. After that she came to mumbai where she completed her police training and she joined ETF. Six months after she joined ETF once her brother came to mumbai and she went to the same hotel he was staying for some enquiry of a case. There her brother tried to rape her but at right time sam came and saved her. After that incident she was totally shocked and broken so sam shifted her to his home and evn promised her tht he vl always take care of her as his elder brother. Her brother was arrested by sam. After two weeks she got back to normal and one day told sam about her family and how they treated her bcoz she was a girl and how they threw her out of house and she came to mumbai. Sam was shocked to hear that the bulbly and cherpy girl like her was so alone and had suffered so much. After that he promised her tht nw she was nt alone and she has a big brother who was always there to take care of her and she even had a family like ETF. He resolved to punish her family for their deeds bt she told him tht she wanted to start afresh and tht she didn't wnt to do any complain and she evn took the case on his brother back bt sam warned her brother that if he finds any of her family members trying to hurt he then he would nt leave them)     
sam: pari tumne mujhe promise kiya tha ki tum unko yaad karke kabhi nahi rougi aur apne aap ko kabhi akela nahi mehsoos karogi. mein hu na tumhare saath 
arjun(trying to lighten the situation): haan haan tumhara toh sirf yeh bhai hi hai... mein toh tumhara kuch lagta hi nahi hun kyon??????(faking anger he went near the window and stood facig outside)
Riya runs to him and back hug him and turn him to face her and hug him tightly. He too hug her back tightly and carsses her hair. The whole team smile looking at them. Till this time liz and charvi also came and witnessed the love b/w bro-sis. 
{IT IS TRULY SAID THAT "DIL KE RISHTE KHOON KE RISHTON SE ZYADA GEHRE HOTE HAIN"} 
It has been five minutes since ariya were hugging each other and the team was very happy for both arjun and riya and were witnessing their love for each other. Ariya were in their own world hugging each other. Their romance was broken by sam's mobile. Riya came out of their dream land and felt embaressed and broke their hug and tried to distance from arjun but arjun caught her hand and didn't allow her to move. Sam moved out of the conference room to receive the call.
After talking to commissioner on phone sam came in conference room to see every on elost in their own dream world. Shreliz(shree and liza) lost in each others eyes, chotu charvi lost in a dream world, ariya lost in their own world holding hands and HER AIYU(AYESHA) smiling to herself lost somewhere. He lost himself seeing her smiling and remembered the time whn aisha joined ETF. That time she was called the dabbang lady of ETF. She was very hard from outside and emotionless from outside but no one knew tht she was very childish from inside. At the time of death of her father she was just 16 and her mother had to face a lot from the people. Man were always commenting that it was nt possible to take care of a young girl and a small boy by herself and she should surrender to them and they could help. Due to all this she hid the child in her in one corner of her heart and became hard and emotionless to support her mom to fight the society. Three months after the death of her father they shifted to mumbai where she did her police training to fulfill the dreams of her father to make her a police officer.Two years before joining Etf she lost her mother and brother in a train accident. After joining Etf whn sam came to know about her past he wth help of arjun tried to get her out of her hard shell which she had built around her in those years. Arjun felt tht in aisha he found a sister whom he could take care of and he started loving and protecting her like her own sister and sam found his soulmate in her. Finally after 2 years she completely broke her shell and let the cute child inside her come out. He nw just loved to see her behave as a small child who fought wth him for evry pity reason and who would take her bro's protection aftr teasing him or any one in eft.He loved her cute attites. She was no more the lady dabbang for etf but a cute chirpy girl. He silently prayed to god to keep his family i.e. the etf family happy and safe.
His chain of thoughts was broken by the vibration in his phone. He smiled to himself seeing himself lost in thoughts of a girl. He cleared his throught to grab the attention but they were so lost that they did not pay heed to it. So he shook shreliz who were standing most close to him to bring them back to reality.
Shree and liza together: Yes Sir😳
This broke the trance of all the couples and they came to reality then sam spoke.
sam: team come out of your romance and i hane an important announcement to make.
arjun(bit irritated by hi teasing): kahin tu ayu ko propose toh nahi kar raha.
Aisha was like what he said just now?????😲
sam: tujhe hhar wakt romance ya meri tang kheechne ke alawa kuch sujhta hai bt khair chor (turning towards the whole team) team star packing your bags and do the necessary shopping we have to go
arjun: kahan?????
sam: guyz commissioner sir, home minister and chief minister were very impressed by our dedication and the great decrease in crime rate in mumbai that they have decided to give us a few days off o relax and so they have planned to send us for a week's outing to any place you wish and the arrangements will be made by them. We will be going after 15 days. So decice the place where u want 2 go and let me know by tomorrow.Nw u complete your pending paper work quickly so that i can call the day off aftr u finish ur work. (Turning towards arjun) Arju 2morrow we have 2 go to commissioners office in morning to discuss about the trip.(smirking) Arju nw plz leave pari's hand and let her work.
Ariya had not left each others hand till yet and it was nt unnoticed by sam. Riya blused and arjun smirked.
to be cont...
precap:
about suspecious people in dubai and etf shopping and enjoying

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read both the parts.
its awesome.
riya has suffered so much.
please pm me whenb you update