awesome + emotional 👏 honestly if i said I love flashback scenes , its lovely how sneha n daddy abhay n mom piyaspend lovely moment in past - happy abhay n pia is together , the person who murdered sneha rot in hell what he/she done with cute little sneha thanks for pm n continue soon
two scenes wre my most fav in this update- one when pia remembered her b'day with abhay and sneha and second when abhay wished her for the first time in 2 years...that was too touching. glad to see pia really happy but who is the one behind all of this??what is it that he wants from pia only.hoping this time they would be able to counter him and will be safe.
Lovely update and loved the way you described every characters emotions perfectly and waiting to know what storm is waiting to come back to Abhiya's life after 2 years
cute update in the start n suspense in the end...really liked the abhay n Sneha wishing pia happy bday part...sneha was sooo cute...gosh seems like someone doesn't want abhiya to be together...dats why he killed sneha first and then now is after abhay,knowing dat the two r happy again
Emotional chapter didu , amazing portrayal of PIAs feeling , and then ABHAYs too , now who is this idiot 😡 di cant u leave them in peace for more than 2 days 😡🤣 it is annoying . but i want pia not to repeat her mistake , this time she should fill abhay about this 🤔 .
Amazing PM...just wow...hats off to you...but please I have only one request since you have started this again so now don't stop it or put it on hold on any circumstances...I understand that in Asli duniya you might have work but then as a writer also you have duties..I know as readers even we should be patient and understand your problems but we have been very patient..can't be more patient than this..I can atleast say this about myself... And if you are so sure that you will be updating regularly then do continue otherwise I would suggest that first complete the whole of the story in your laptop and then start updating once a week or twice a week whenever you feel..
P.S I know I am sounding very rude. But I just said what is in my heart.. If you felt bad then I'm really very Sorry.. 😔
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