FF: Fate CH 15, 16, epilogue PG 20 *7 DEC* - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Peehu, yes it defo didπŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

@Peehu, yes it defo didπŸ˜†


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Posted: 10 years ago
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sorry for being late. it was a wonderful update. beautiful like always. i loved the flashback and it made me sad too poor sneha..
and Abhay's surprise was lovely. its great to see Pia happy afterall and specially every great effort Abhay is making. its just wonderful.
but last part..omg what was that.. does that mean the killing was always planned? is it some old enemy of Abhay who is doing it.. omg i hope now nothing happens and they find out whose it..
Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a lovely update peehu! A mixture of joy and sorrow both splendidly depicted. The scene where pia recalls-having sneha was very heart touching. It made me sad. :(
wish there had been sum way to bring sneha back bt we all knw that wasnt possible. hope pia gets her happiness back.
Looks like sumone dsnt want pia to be happy. I really hope pia could stop it be4 that man can do any harm to abhay or her.
Though i have a feeling dis is again going to bring a storm in their life.

waiting to knw what happns...
And yes that was a real fast update peehu. πŸ˜‰ keep it up!πŸ€—
p.s. thanks for pm. :) n really sorry for unresing the previous comment so late. Hope u will forgive.
Edited by Bleak_House - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are yr who d hell is dis nw? And it means sneha ki death planned thi? 😲 i hope pia abhay ko bta de. Thax fr pm and early update. Ab next update bhi jaldi dena.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U feeling ok Peehu? nahi actually I am not used to such jaldi jaldi updating from your end. :P


and coming to the update, OMG. I really hope nothing happen to AbhIya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Peehu sorry for commenting late πŸ˜† but well I can also say u updated early πŸ˜› But hey I am not complaining πŸ˜ƒ I am super duper happy to read back to back updates πŸ€— Thank u so much for continuing this πŸ€— U know this is one of my fav fic here

What the hell were u saying when u said I will feel the difference? 😳 Nope there is no difference atleast for me, be it in standard or way of writing. Its as good as it was before n before u say I am being nice 😑, I MEAN EVERY SINGLE WORD!
Abhiya found each other back but the dark clouds still continue to loom over their heads threatening to crash their paradise I loved their light moments, esp the pole dance 🀣 Totally cracked me up 🀣 Damn I was in office while I read that n I was trying hard to suppress my laughter n worst part my desk is right at the entrance πŸ˜› Loved their teasing n fighting 😳
There has been a long gap of 2 yrs n its really hard to fill it up Sometimes the distance created by few days can seem to cause a rift n 2 yrs? 😭 Pia's reaction was absolutely normal n perfectly penned down. She cannot expect Abhay to jump around wishing her coz for 2 yrs he went abt ignoring her existance. Its a different matter that Abhay is pampering her to no end but she also realises that it takes time for things to fall into place but still in a tiny corner of her heart she wishes Abhay to wish her 😊 This part was beautifully written n the flashback literally made me cry 😭 One of the best parts in the whole FF ⭐️ Loved it n I so hate that monster who ruined their happy paradise 😑 Poor Sneha 😭
I liked the way Abhay tried to make her day special n I loved the manner in which he wished her ❀️ It must have been difficult for him too to bring himself to wish her. I am sure in those 2 yrs though he pretended to cold shoulder her, he was dying every moment for ignoring her n making her feel so terrible I can understand how Arnab feels n I wont blame him at all for that. Its much easier for Pia to forgive Abhay as she loves him but Arnab had accepted Abhay into his life coz of Pia n when he saw how his daughter suffered for two years coz of him how can he forgive him though Abhay is trying his best to set things right?
Everything was going fine but now what is this? 😲 I thought the person kidnapped Sneha for ransom n killed her in cold blood. But looking at the note, after almost 2 years if he has come back to harm Abhay, then I am sure the culprit is someone close to them 😑 Or someone they know n I donno y but I have my doubts on Pia's friend. Please update soon n I hope everything gets all right again
Peehu I dont feel even for once I missed Anji's updates(though I miss Anji a lot 😭) coz ur updates more than makes up for it. I am so thankful to u that ur continuing it πŸ€— Fabulous updates n still cant thank u enough πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
P.S - I will update my comments sooner from now on coz even I am more eager for updates Tongue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are wah ek aur updateπŸ˜ƒ Maza aa gaya!!!! lovely update...flashback was amazing...😳 so sneha's murder was already planned...who the hell is this person???? I think he/she wants to seperate abhiya and is obssesed with Piya...waiting for more...
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