FF: Fate CH 15, 16, epilogue PG 20 *7 DEC* - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
All d updates where beautiful. Ending was awsm. Thank u so much fr updating al d parts together. And thax fr pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww Lovely End...Love itπŸ€—I just imagine all sceen...Aditya remind me Sid...Love the sweet & happy End😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice and happy ending
this was one of my fav story. beautifully written.
loved it
so aditya was the real villain but i also couldn't help feeling little bad for him. he didn't do right but fate was cruel to him also...but no one can blame his own wrong actions on fate.
when piya was shot i thought you will give us sad ending but epilogue was superb.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much for at least ending it at a happy note peehu. i m happy they finally found their happiness
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

that was amazing!! aditya shot piya...😲 so they had a daughter snehal wow nice name😊 and another one on its way...😊 nice ending!! would miss it...


thank u so much 😳




Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

I am in shock Peehu. No it doesn't really look hurried but yes how I wish I could have the pleasure of reading this longer. like i said...i was slipping in writers block again πŸ˜† so i had to wrap this up..and any how...the story was complete...it was no use stretching 😳

Now the updates are beautiful and almost after every para my heart was in my mouth. And when Piya got shot I was thinking "I am so going to kill Peehu if she kills Piya" ROFL but thank you for this beautiful FF and thank you for such a lovely ending. thanks a lot...honestly, i was planning to give it a sad end...Piya was gonna die πŸ˜› πŸ˜† But when i started writing epilogue...somehow i couldnt give a sad end...yes...the sad end would have justified the title...but if u look it at the other way round...one can also say that it was fate that finally got them together for a happy life 😳

Now start updating Shades please...πŸ˜‰ err...i am planning to mostly discontinue that fic sorry

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

every emotion u really described in perfect way , n ending was superb - '' its true abhay n pia played by destiny - it take alomost everything from abhiya n finally returned them with more happiness thank you so much...yes, you said it very right 😳
happy aditya got what he deserved - did inhuman activity but also feel sorry for aditya - '' its not fault also - in this place - i think main culprit was abhay father becuz in first place he did wrong things atleast he ( abhay father )should accept aditya n gave father love if he gave den what condition / suffer aditya not did what he done with abhiya '' yes, what aditya did was wrong..but at the same time his actions werent justified but at the same time, you cant blame only him for this. avinash was equally responsible
in last happy abhay n pia got happiness n one little angel returned in snehal form , she is exact replica of sneha n one more on the way
''destiny play with abhay n pia life - first destiny take almost everything n returned with more intrest to abhiya ,snehal '' if life takes something from you, it also gives you something in return..wel..thats what i believe πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: devilish-grin

wowww
so aditya is out of their life n abhiya r happyπŸ˜ƒ
happy ending...
awesome ff😳
p.s do update shades ff plz😳



thank u so much 😳 i am mostly planning to discontinue shades sorry!!


Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Awesome updates it was just wonderful and loved your writing and the ending was perfect. Thank you so much for this wonderful FF and please do write more



thank you so much 😳 i already have so many ongoing works..will complete them one by one 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: withered

Peehu di u ended it πŸ˜” the updates were not rushed , but atleast thode time gaps par post krte na suspense hi khtam kr diya πŸ€”πŸ˜†. anyways i am so happy for abhiya now πŸ˜ƒ loved the epilogue , 😲 a whole para on FATEπŸ˜† FATE was irrational to them .epilogue is still incomplete yeh toh batao ladka hoga ki ladki πŸ˜† .Liked snehal dad ki chamchi πŸ˜† where are maya and karan ??


yes...i ended it ayu πŸ˜› i thought to post in time gaps...but people are very slow in commenting πŸ˜† sab ke unres karne ka wait karungi..toh update nahi milne wala jaldi...so i thought lets get over with it πŸ˜†

oh well...i wanted to give a long speech on fate..but my knowledge ended right there 🀣 epilogue is complete...ab ladka hai ya ladki...let FATE decide πŸ˜† Maya and karan are having their happily ever after somewhere πŸ˜› πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

beautiful updates ...u hv written so well ... ...I loved reading every part ...

nice ending ...


thank u so much

Originally posted by: forever.alon

😲 u ended it..why so fastπŸ˜’ok now start ur other running ff's πŸ˜†but nice ending..aditya died and finally abhiya are together with sneha and new one coming soon😳awesomely writtenπŸ‘πŸΌ will miss this ff 😭


yes...i guess i did πŸ˜† ya...i will do that soon πŸ˜› thank u so much 😳


Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

All d updates where beautiful. Ending was awsm. Thank u so much fr updating al d parts together. And thax fr pm.


thank you so so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Woww Lovely End...Love itπŸ€—I just imagine all sceen...Aditya remind me Sid...Love the sweet & happy End😊



thank u so much πŸ€—


Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice and happy ending
this was one of my fav story. beautifully written.
loved it
so aditya was the real villain but i also couldn't help feeling little bad for him. he didn't do right but fate was cruel to him also...but no one can blame his own wrong actions on fate.
when piya was shot i thought you will give us sad ending but epilogue was superb.


thanks a lot...

aditya was driven by his circumstances yet his actions couldnt be justified...

well...i was about to give a sad end to it...but while writing epilogue..i couldnt write one...so gave up πŸ˜†


Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Thank you so much for at least ending it at a happy note peehu. i m happy they finally found their happiness


OMG!! everyone are thanking me as i gave it a happy end 🀣 like i said...i wrote the last chapter with the intention of giving it a tragic end πŸ˜› but you na, i am a sucker for happy endings πŸ˜† so i couldnt write an epilogue without Piya...and i changed my mind at last moment πŸ˜›

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