FF: Fate CH 15, 16, epilogue PG 20 *7 DEC* - Page 11

Originally posted by: ..mandy..

Peehu sorry for commenting late 😆 but well I can also say u updated early 😛 But hey I am not complaining 😃 I am super duper happy to read back to back updates 🤗 Thank u so much for continuing this 🤗 U know this is one of my fav fic here its no prob mandy 😛 oh well, i know i updated very early. i think this is why next update is taking time 😆 i am glad its in ur fav list even though i am writing it 😛 😆

What the hell were u saying when u said I will feel the difference? 😳 Nope there is no difference atleast for me, be it in standard or way of writing. Its as good as it was before n before u say I am being nice 😡, I MEAN EVERY SINGLE WORD! i am glad u find that way..but i still cant agree on this part with u 🤣

Abhiya found each other back but the dark clouds still continue to loom over their heads threatening to crash their paradise I loved their light moments, esp the pole dance 🤣 Totally cracked me up 🤣 Damn I was in office while I read that n I was trying hard to suppress my laughter n worst part my desk is right at the entrance 😛 Loved their teasing n fighting 😳 i found pole dance completely out of the picture. i was skeptical while posting that becoz i found that part stupid to post it in this fic. its like the scene didnt fit the actual story. but i had no option. because last update was formed on those lines so i couldnt ignore the pole part

There has been a long gap of 2 yrs n its really hard to fill it up Sometimes the distance created by few days can seem to cause a rift n 2 yrs? 😭 Pia's reaction was absolutely normal n perfectly penned down. She cannot expect Abhay to jump around wishing her coz for 2 yrs he went abt ignoring her existance. Its a different matter that Abhay is pampering her to no end but she also realises that it takes time for things to fall into place but still in a tiny corner of her heart she wishes Abhay to wish her 😊 This part was beautifully written n the flashback literally made me cry 😭 One of the best parts in the whole FF ⭐️ Loved it n I so hate that monster who ruined their happy paradise 😡 Poor Sneha 😭 i am so happy to know that i could do justice with this part. that part was the highlight of the update and one of the main part to this fic. it had to be good. and i am glad i could do it...thank u so so much..

I liked the way Abhay tried to make her day special n I loved the manner in which he wished her ❤️ It must have been difficult for him too to bring himself to wish her. I am sure in those 2 yrs though he pretended to cold shoulder her, he was dying every moment for ignoring her n making her feel so terrible I can understand how Arnab feels n I wont blame him at all for that. Its much easier for Pia to forgive Abhay as she loves him but Arnab had accepted Abhay into his life coz of Pia n when he saw how his daughter suffered for two years coz of him how can he forgive him though Abhay is trying his best to set things right? i am thankful that u understood Arnab here. because i thought no one would. but no, i have atleast one reader who really thought that arnab is right here.

Everything was going fine but now what is this? 😲 I thought the person kidnapped Sneha for ransom n killed her in cold blood. But looking at the note, after almost 2 years if he has come back to harm Abhay, then I am sure the culprit is someone close to them 😡 Or someone they know n I donno y but I have my doubts on Pia's friend. Please update soon n I hope everything gets all right again wait for next update. you will get all ur answers 😛 😆

Peehu I dont feel even for once I missed Anji's updates(though I miss Anji a lot 😭) coz ur updates more than makes up for it. I am so thankful to u that ur continuing it 🤗 Fabulous updates n still cant thank u enough 👏 👏 👏👏 👏👏👏 thank you so so much 🤗

P.S - I will update my comments sooner from now on coz even I am more eager for updates 😛 update coming up soon 😛 also, i am ending this fic in next 2-3 updates...lets see 😳

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Originally posted by: ..juhi..

are wah ek aur update😃 Maza aa gaya!!!! lovely update...flashback was amazing...😳 so sneha's murder was already planned...who the hell is this person???? I think he/she wants to seperate abhiya and is obssesed with Piya...waiting for more...

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Lovely update and loved the way you described every characters emotions perfectly and waiting to know what storm is waiting to come back to Abhiya's life after 2 years

I always had my doubts on Aditya n I was right 😡 Well I can understand from where he comes. But it would be wrong to put all the blame on Avinash either. He never actually cheated his wife whom he loved a lot. His mom tricked him into a one night stand n deliberately had the child out of it just to hang onto him which was very wrong. I wish Avinash had taken Aditya along with him and confessed to his wife about what really happened. I am sure if she loved him truly, she would have forgiven him despite of being angry on him as it wasn't really his fault. Though he may not have got a mother's love he would have atleast got a family. Aditya was not at fault in all this and the worst part is that his own bestie turns out to be his half brother! Not an easy thing to digest and Abhay being a flirt had many girlfriends but unfortunately the one woman Aditya loved was destined to be Abhay's soulmate. Its sad n I wish Aditya had accepted this and stepped back but the bitterness was too much n I cant blame him in this regard. Given the circumstances he has been through its hard for him to learn to forget and move on. Its easy to say when life puts you through a lot of hurdles u learn to live life accepting whatever comes your way. But at times there is also the possibility that you tend to get insecure that if you end up compromising at every step in life you will land with nothing So I guess he wanted Pia back to ensure that Abhay doesn't get to snatch the one most precious thing in his life but he forgot he was trying to restrain a fistful of sand which would anyways slip through his fingers. Be that as it may but killing an innocent child in cold blood is no justification for all the hardships and trauma he has been through 😡 I hope Pia gets to know what kind of a creep she had for a friend 🤢 and is able to save Abhay on time.