FF: ~!!VENGEANCE is SWEET!!~Pg 21 NoTe!

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~!! VENGEANCE is SWEET !!~

 

Tears ran down his face dripping down his chin on to his velvet hot pink shirt. Compressed tightly into the corner of the isolated ETF office was an unleashed animal, with dark intense eyes, a covered up tattoo and a heart full of hatred and pain.

 It was your fault, Riya, your fault! You're the reason why I lost Roshini!'

 
Hey!
 
This is my first ever attempt on writing a FF so please bare with my mistakes and just like my work!πŸ˜†(or the 'Samjhe Ya Samjhau' dialogue is coming right at you)πŸ˜†. Anyway, I've tried to do something different to the Character Sketch part, cause c'mon we all know the ETF crew in and out and we obviously recognise their faces. SO the following is a character diary (I call it!) to give insights on who actually this characters are and how their personality is like.
 
Character Diary:
 
My first chapter will start of introducing Riya to the ETF team therefore the diary entries are wrote accordingly to that event. So carry on...
 
Arjun Rawte: ETF Officer

I am not interested in introducing myself.  Give me the case, I'll solve it. In fact, finding and punishing people who have destroyed another person's life gives me hope that someday I will find my Roshini's murderer.

Riya Mukherjee: Criminal Psychologist and Analyst

I love my job. It gets very boring but it's worth it. And what's even more exciting about my job is that I work with my high school best friend, Sameer, and acquaintance Arjun (his socially awkward, I guess!). Well, an interesting thing is that Sameer says that I have changed a lot, I have become what Arjun was in high school - Cool and Extrovert (and Arjun has become what I was in high school- Reserved and Intro. LOL!). Everything happens for the better...

Sameer Rathore: ETF Officer

I am glad that finally there is someone who I can share my thoughts with. Sorry diary, it's not you but Riya! ETF was getting tight. Arjun. What is with this man? Because of him, Roshini was killed and his acting like a maniac thereafter. I hate it when he solves every case before me. But his victory is ETF's victory therefore my victory. And Ayesha... lets not go there...😳
 
Ayesha Kapoor: ETF Officer
 
I am so tired and frustrated by Rathore Sir's behaviour. I can't tell if his into me or not! Now, that Riya chick is here, I don't stand a chance. I don't think that they are 'Just Friends', c'mon, did you see the way they were hugging each other- like there was no care in the world that would separate them... Well, a weird thing is that Arjun was very irritated when Sameer introduced Riya to the team, weren't they all friends in high school?!
 
Sakshi: Ex-Criminal Journalist
 
I swear, there is something fishy between Sameer, Riya and Arjun. It's interesting to see how, Rathore lightens up when Riya walks into the office and Arjun blank out. However, what saddens me the most is Ayesha's defeated love. Don't say that there is nothing between the two 'just friends' ok. I told Ayesha, I told her so many times to at least ask him out on a date but she is just so committed to her work that she doesn't the potential threats lurking around her! Well, as long as this Riya girl doesn't eye her 'other high schoolmate', I'm cool!
 
Chottu: ETF Officer
 
Food... Food... Protein Shake... MacDonalds. I'm Hungry!
 
Shree: ETF Officer
 
Another love triangle, hai bhagwan! Sabki love life start hogayi sirf meri love ki rekha ki WAT lagi hai. It's fun actually to see the fumes of these girls who were totally carefree and teased me about how Liza bullied me in school- all thanks to Liza's big mouth. Well, now they have 'other' issues to think about. Hey diary, what do you think about Liza, she is cute right?!
Diary: System Error!πŸ˜† You are Screwed!
 
Liza D' cruise: Forensic Specialist
 
Nightmare again. What's wrong with me? When I am in the lab working with real dead people, I am a pro at it. Like whatever kind of rotten, smashed, slammed, burnt body, never scare me. But when I get dreams of dead people, it scares the shit outta me. Hmm, probably because the dead person in my dream is usually Shree. Oh I get it now! Its Shree, he is scarier then the dead people I deal with!πŸ˜†
 
So guys I have done my best to introduce you to my character in stylish and funny way but it is your choice if I should continue with it or not. Your response is my "GO" signal!
 
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Content:
 
Chapter ONE and New Character: Page 3 πŸ˜†
Chapter TWO: Page 6🀣
Chapter THREE: Page 9😳
Chapter FOUR: Page 12πŸ€“
Chapter FIVE: Page 14
Chapter SIX: Page 18😑
 
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devildiva21 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept...!!
and a very hatke cs..!!
loved it..!!
update soon...!!
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Interesting concept Edited by khemanisarita - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

interesting concept...!!

and a very hatke cs..!!
loved it..!!
update soon...!!

 
Aww thank you dear! Cuddles for being the first to commentπŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: MeeraXD

 
Aww thank you dear! Cuddles for being the first to commentπŸ˜†


aww my pleasure yar..!!
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Wow this nice...I like the intro part...awesome...


As if everyone is standing front of me and giving intro...
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I am in my dream world right now!!! 
Please please please

Update soon!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept.
Continue soon.
P.S.- is it ariya story?
And please pm me when you update
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Interesting concept dr...!!!!
CS was quite different n impressive...!!!
Continue soon.
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Superb CS... continue soon