*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 83

DurgaS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

Wiwy,

Now I know how you felt when you got my pm for my story's last chapter. Feeling sad that I won't receive anymore pms for the broken bed's updates.

About the chapter, that was a naughty one. I liked it very much, though had to glance here and there.

Will be waiting for your next story. Hope you get some free time soon and start spinning another tale. 😊

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: ayesha998
Wow
This one was amazing
Love ya
Come soon wid nw story

Thanks a tonne for you love! Okay will try!😃

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#823

Just finished reading it & I must tell you I LOVED IT!

Starting from their first meet, that to directly in the bed😆 That was a hilarious take really! And an instant attraction to each other they felt! And then the series of incidents which forced them to be together. A Universal conspiracy??? 😉 What all points I liked about the FF -

1. The SR wala bed was put to its perfect use by ArHi in SheeshMahal😳

2. Lavanya & Mamiji were finally knocked some senses in them at the right time which they completely lacked😛

3. Nk & Neha's start of a new relationship. Happy to see NK got his match 😃

4. Snake got the punishment 😡😡😡

And last but not the least, ArHi Forever ❤️

It was an amazing read, thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#824

Read it in one go.

Its Awesome!

It has all the ingredients. Its filmy, Romantic and IPKKND-tic.

Loveed it.

Do pm me when you update =))

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shakrobaaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#825

Last three update were just awesome...
Your Khichadi got lost in the world of their love n passion...
Akash was rewarded by his Payal...👏,
Khushi ki SR bed ne toh maano saara jahan ghoom liya..😉
aur aapne kya scene racha haaye Sheesh Mahal ke private mandir mein Maa ki Laal chunri aur woh ASR ke haatho phir kaun rok sakta tha Pyar ke samundra mai dubna hi tha uss special bed ke sahaare...😉...
shaadi bhi hui aur yeh kya couple log phir se bhaag gaye..😆
Naughty Arnav...😳(well I hope uss bed ki kauno umar ka daakhila ho..😳)
waise Wiwyji hamein toh suna tha jodiya swarg mai banti hai lekin aapne toh kuchh alag hi kar dikhaaya well kyo na ho aakhir yeh Arnav aur Khushi ki Prem Kahani hai...

BROKEN BED NE BANAADI JODI... 😃👏,
I am going to miss this wonderful story aur please aapna jaldi se ek aur nayi kahani ke saath aana hum pratiksha mai hai.

take care.
P.S. Ek epilogue nahi milega kya?

Edited by shakrobaaj - 10 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: rulama
Lovely ending.
You have kept Arnav true to his character. Not really wanting to plunge into matrimony but only does it to keep Khushi by his side.
Even Khushi is true to her character. Not giving up her values completely but ready to compromise whenever necessary.
Lovely story line and enjoyed it very much.

Thank you so much for your appreciation! Means a lot to me!😃

Originally posted by: chahath
wow lovely and cute ending

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: rockingsoni
This was a unique kind of story which started wid bed and ended with bed..
I just loved loved n loved it.. Plz come back soon with a new story...
U ll give us an epilogue na!!

Thankyou for enjoying my story! Epilogue?!!! Okay will write if can!😃

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Horizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#827

Huh... Finally here... Read all in one go... And as I said pleasure was all mine..., feel super guilty for not reading them as and when you wrote but then with my back log it became hard to catch up...

Wiwy, you are an amazing story teller... Your brisk pace... Scene after scene... Yet very much sticking to the characters... It felt as if watching a movie... A whole some entertainer... Which part I loved most.. Hard to say.. But may be he putting that red chunari on her... They were married then and there.. Weren't they!!!

You truly managed to scare and emotional with that vulnerability of ASR over the phone from London... Loved how the later part revolved around sheesh mahal..

Truly a fantastic ride Wiwy...you are a chupa rustum indeed with all these narrative skills ...

I am still guilty at not being able to read it till now...but can't deny the pleasure of reading in one go..

Thank you much for the wonderful treat... Look forward to more...

Lots of love...

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: arhi-raizada
awesome

Thanks a tonne😃

Originally posted by: sheemaparveen
Di I am amazed with the ending but very sad as it ended plzz plzz plzz writw a new story di will be eagerly waiting for it and pm me will miss this story for sure I love this story a lot

Was thinking of writing an epilogue since everyone was keen but meeting Barun made my life go haywire!😃 Thanks for your love!

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