*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 61

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thankyou😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarun21

wow simply amazing update...

loved it...
finally they confessed their feelings...
waiting for the next update eagerly...
he gave his maa's chunari wow awesome...
thanks for the pm...


I am glad you liked the part with maa's chunri😃 thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Absolutely brilliant update:D

Loved every bit of it<3
OMG these two are so dumb. One couldn't get that he has feelings for the other and the other one cannot understand the hints, I mean the great ASR had came to rescue her and still she had doubts?! Crazy people.


I am glad that people around then have some brains. I loved NK, he is so sweet. I want to hug him tight and tell him that dude, u rock..!!

Aww the scene between Arnav and Khushi's parents was heart warming. It was beautifully written:)

The last part was amazing. I loved it. These two were so desperate, I never knew that LOL It was awesome. Jadu hai nasha hai, madhoshiyaan, tujhko bhula ke ab jaau kahan☺️

Epic..!! Waiting to read the next part. I know the next part is the last one. I respect your decision but i want you to come up with another story:)

Happy Diwali<3



Jadu hai nasha hai...👏 Thanks Cheesy! Thanks for liking the Arnav and Khushi parents part. It is my fav.
Arshi were not despo, i was to make them one!😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smrikta992

Lovd it sooo much..
I just cnt describe how i m feeling..
Oh my god! Oh my god!
Arnav cnfess..
Wow! wow!
Amazing , wondrful, superb update..
Cntinue soon..
Thnks for pm..


I am so overwhelmed by your comment. Thrilled you liked it so much😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarozz

Wow wow wow!!!
Amazing update...
Loved it...finally he confessed his feelings for her..
And...they did it..hehe
Update soon pls...can't wait to read...


He he! Yes they did it! Yay! Thanks for liking😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shafqee80

thank u so much for d pm ...its nyc to see dat even qrnav has realised his feelings for ihushi ...and now wen dey hv become one ...its no single sided love ..


Yesvyou are right. It is no longer a one sided love. Never was actually😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

HAPPY DIWALI...
sorry i m 1 day late..


first when i read title in pm i was like ..
i knew it kuch na kuch hone wala hai..

aww i loved arnav rxn when khushi talked to nk...arnav can be adorable sometime.
oh this chap told us that nk has brain has he got the idea that khushi didnt want to marry him ,
thankgod anjali's husband is in army...indian army zindabad..for keeping separate diwali party..otherwise...


i was glad khushi was ready to take the risk...it was not a risk...she knew that arnav has fallen for her..it was just matter of time ,he wud confess.
the chunri scene .it was beautiful...it was like he accepted her...may be in form of his wife.

last part was so amazingthey finally used their SR BED u wrote it beautifully keeping the essence of arnav khushi...and the cherry on the cake was his declaration...

no u cant end this.
p.s-how sr bed reached luckhnow??it shud have been in shantivan na??
p.s2-if u really want to end..give an epilogue to showing how their kid now messing with their dear bed..🤣


Thanks a tonne shruti for your wonderful understanding of the update.⭐️
Love your P.S. 1 and 2. I will give you the answer to first one in my update, se cond one 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will be late...please bear with me! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy

I will be late...please bear with me! 🤗

depends how much will be u late?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Why one more chapter
It was beautiful loved how Arnav confessed
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