*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 46

indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

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wiwy,

read last two chapters together... loved the action and the dimaag. and khushi rushing across the length of the room to crash into him... my heart pounded when he said he;d give shyam twice the amount for khushi's release today. i have often thought of godfather while watching asr... your plot made him sound like that. lovely.

now nk is here to accept khushi's consent... ah i wait to see the fun.

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Andi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: wiwy

Thankyou for enjoying so much!😃 Makes me happy.
Achha baba will try to stretch the story.😃

yipee🥳

now we will start bashing this nk instead of shyam🤣

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun
Ufff! What a climax with dishum dishum and dialog baazi, and the lovely lass clinging to our handsome hero...👏
And then the anticlimax with NK blurting out about Khushi wanting to marry him, shattering our Hero's dreams
Ab tho airport wala scene and an emotional confession tho pakka hai... hai na... tells tells👏

Great job WIWY!

Thankyou for your appreciation! A confession is on the cards , yes, but...😉

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: khareshelley
superb update...!!!!!!!!!
loved ASR plan..!!!!!1dhisum dhisum..!!!!!!
itna kuch karne ke baad to arnav realie karo ki u r in love with khuhsi..!!!!!!
he now know she agreed to marry nk..!!!!!!!!!1

Thanks for the exclamations! Love them!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow what an update just loved it

Thankyou very very much!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: taj2012
Nice update

thanks a tonne!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: suji5
wow what a timing NK 🤣

He he! Thanks for enjoying!😃

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nmaharaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Awww man cliff hanger. Please update soon

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shafqee80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#459

just started reading ur story ...and relaxed only after completing whole parts ...it is tooo cute ...ijust loveeeddd ittt

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: cheesemad
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First of all, I know you would say don't apologize but I will😛
I am really sorry for being so late, my life is kinda hell right now but after reading this absolutely amazing update, I am feeling better. Thank you so much for writing a brilliant update.

I won't be able to write much, as I need to get back to my work😔
I loved the update. I loved the way Arnav tackled with each and every thing. I am impressed, Cheeni Khush hui😎
Zara dil ko thaam lo, naam lo, keh bhi do hai kaun, aa gaya aa gaya laut ke, dekho DON (Our ASR)😳

Is Shyam an engineer? Maal, abey gadhe LOL we kinda use these words😆 If yes, then its a kalank on engineering students because he is brainless😆 I don't understand why did he even think of messing with ASR and his girl? I wonder if he doesn't want to live? Poor guy..!!

Aww I loved the way Khushi hugged him and never left his side. But alas NK ruined every thing😡
Chalo koi nai, I know yo won't let them stay apart. Are we going to get dhansoo ending at the airport? 😳

When they hugged each other, the only song that played in my mind was, Kismat se tum humko mile ho, kaise chhodenge, ye hanth hum na chhodenge..!!

Thanks Cheesy! ASR the DON! i really like that!

Dhansoo ending at the airport!? Lets see...ye haanth hum na chhodenge!

Thankyou once again for coming up with such groovy songs!🤗

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