*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome story... Read all 24 chapters in one go

Loving it...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: chahath
amazing update
loved it all except nk's entry

Ha ha! Apologies from NK! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Chandu2000
Nice update. ...loved it...wonder what will happen to Nk - Khushi rishta.?

Thanks for reading! Nk khushi , what the rishta?😡😆🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sheemaparveen
Wow what an amazing update dear loved it but a little bit sad that ua going to finish this story sooon will be waiting for ua update *smile*

Hey thanks and dont be sad. I will be around. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am observing from the last update, the story is proceeding in a hurried manner. So, a few chapters more, aww. Will miss it surely, but was enjoying it a lot. But good job Wiwy, you started it as an OS and managed to stretch it successfully for so many chapters. And also, earned so many fans. 👏 Very happy and proud of you. 😃

Ok, coming to the story. Nice idea to extract info out of Billu. Arnav and his nakli accident plans. Rana is his Jija! 😆 The armyman is right, Arnav is a ruthless man. He turned his own respectable Jija into a mawali gunda. 😆 Loved the filmy dishum dishum complete with the police arriving at the end. And everyone gets to bash Shyam! Wow! 😆 And what an NK tadka at the end. Arnav bitwa feeling the punch, but why? Khushi doesn't deserve you and you are going away to London, right?

Looking forward to how you take it from here. One request, don't hurry it. Let it be as beautiful as it can be. If necessary, take one or two chapters extra. Your story deserves it. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI
awesome di👏
kya halat hui hai shyam ki-not only arnav bit buaji,anjali evryone whole gang wow i loved it di it was superb aur punch padne the uss kamine ko mujhe bhi 1-2 lagana tha but*sigh*🤣
ok last part whn nk come well it is a cliffhanger nd i hate it but this time i loved it arnav omg abb kya karega woh🤣

1 or 2 only left plus epi too na plz😃

Thankyou for enjoying so much!😃 Makes me happy.

Achha baba will try to stretch the story.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: anabiya1
Js read all parts in one go n must say I Luvd it ...
Plzzz pm me tooo...

Awww! Thanks for reading all parts in one go! 😃 And loving it!😃

Will PM. Thanks again!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: jakhushi
Anjali getting everyone there to beat up Shyam 😆
And ohhh NK... Wrong timing dude!!!! 😡

Ha ha! I wanted everyone to have a field day beating up Shyam. Yes anjali took the lead😆

Poor NK! I think everyone will bash him up now!😆

Thankyou so much for your comments😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarozz
I'm sure arnav is gonna explode...I'm damn sure.. and wow NK u have explicit timings Haha...waiting for fireworks and explosions and reactions 😉 😆

Okay some explosions in the next update coming up😃

Thanks a tonne for your comments!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Meerah14
That was a serious action scene...

Awaiting for arnav reaction upon the marriage of nk and khushi

Hey thanks for liking the action scene. I put all my hate for snakewa into it!

Arnav's reaction...😃

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