*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 44

arshi_1982

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome update.

ASR really knows how to get things done. I m sure the muscle, torturing billu, must be cursing the brain of ASR to have arrived late n made thm tired.

So kool his jiju is in army. Amazing fight sequence. Loved s hyam getting kicked by all.

Aawww khushi ran into his arms n never left him.

Why the hell did NK show up n why did he have to discuss mrrg then n there. It was like throwing chilled water on ASR bringing him back to reality. Stupid NK.

Its really sad to know tht u wld end this soon.

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: pooja102
lovedit

Thanks for loving it😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: shakrobaaj
Wiwyji,
ekdum filmy update,
haaye macho man Arnav is on mission to rescue "his" Khushi,
waah waah what a plan hmm?
aur Billu ki ek line "Shyam babu kya cheez hai itna sab kuchh ke liye toh mai apni maa ko bhi bech sakta hoon." hamaar dhaansu jawaan ko gussa toh aayega na maa da laadala tha woh...shaayad mann mai yeh baat aayi bhi hogi..mere paas sab kuchh hai bas nahi hai toh ek Maa.

Anjali and Nani's little sweet conversation at temple.
the call from Aman,the worry for her chhote..jo kafi bade ho chuke hai...pata chal gaya Bedwa inhone hi toda tha..lekin galat reason soch rahi hai shaayad😆😳..but loved this part also.

abhi tak jo na hua woh ho gaya Heroin daud ke Hero ke gale lipat gayi..👏 aur Darling warling ko kissi bhi mil gayi..😳...aur phir aag dehki aur jaisa ki ham sab ne aapko bola tha bilkul ussi tarah se Shyam ki dhulaai hui aur unka rang nikhar aaya ek purane white cloth pe jaise Aachar ke daag lage ho..upar se ASR's Fauji jijaji ka tagda haath bhi Shyam ke upar pada..ki mooh mooh nahi balki rangoli lag rahaaho..😆

aur abhitak jo maidane jang lag raha tha woh achanak rishtedarose bhar gaya...police bhi aayi..hero heroin hase bhi..
par phir se ASR pe waar hua not physically but shabdo se NK ke words se...

NK ek sahi jawaab doh,
Tum toh last mai ayye, pehle toh ASR ne hi Khushi ko uss Shyam ke chungal se chhudaaya,uski wajah se usne Shyam ko pita bhi, hug kisko mila pehle ? ASR ko saari mehnat ASR ki aur phir yeh Shadi ki baat tum puchh kaise sakte ho haan..?

loved and enjoyed this update very much.

Wiwyji why do you want to end this beautiful story?
hamaara heart aise break mat karo please..
1 ya 2 nahi 5 ya 7 update dedo,
jaise aaj ki update mai aapne hamein Payal ke darshan karvaayein ussi tarah Akash ke bhi ho jaate..Payal ka ghar bas jaata..aur abhi tak toh Pyar ka izhaar bhi nahi hua...

thanks for the pm,
take care.
your KHICHADI bahot saare pyar ke saath.

Awww! Khichadi! 🤗

Thankyou so so much for your detailed comments! I was🤣 all through. Thanks for enjoying the update so much. I will introduce Akash dont worry. Get him interested in Payal also. Phir to mujhe chhod dogi?!!😉 I am dying to bring Arshi together and once they are one, the story will end with a happily ever after!😃 Yehi theek hai! But if I write anything again will PM.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

wow wow

di loved it

aaj aap full filmy mood right

i liked banner

and also full planning

i think you too love police and detective flims like me

enjoyed it thansk a lot for pm

eager to ko what will now happen to my poor nk

i guess

wohi joh manjuran arnav hoga😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: jyothim78
Wow...that was A FANTABULOUS update...
NK... God...real KABAB me haddi...

Waiting for the big MU to be cleared regarding Khushi wanting to marry NK...

Thanks! will try to get the haddi out of the kabab!😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: sanamsky
awesome

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: wiwy

Awww! Khichadi! 🤗
Thankyou so so much for your detailed comments! I was🤣 all through. Thanks for enjoying the update so much. I will introduce Akash dont worry. Get him interested in Payal also. Phir to mujhe chhod dogi?!!😉 I am dying to bring Arshi together and once they are one, the story will end with a happily ever after!😃 Yehi theek hai! But if I write anything again will PM.😃

Dil ki tamnna yahi hai ki Arshi bandh jaaye gathbandhan mai...
kahani khatam honi hi hai ek din..😭..but do write more SS on Arshi...I would like to read ...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Are we going to get an update? :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ambi08
Wow such an damaakedar chap
awesome felt like viewing a scene from sme movie
expressed d scenes very well
don't end diz story so soon plz

Thanks a lot for watching the movie😃 I am elated. But I like Barun get bored easily, so will end the story. Already stretched it beyond my expectations.But will cook up another Arshi story one fine day!😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: nihasan
Now y did nk cum hre
agghh n he tld dat in frnt of arnav
n wl he go bck to london or marry khushi
cnt soon

Thanks for your comments. Arnav is going to London definitely😃

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