*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Suchi.R

wow.. that was superb part..


Thanks Suchi!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow what a timing NK 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
K


Edited:)
First of all, I know you would say don't apologize but I will😛
I am really sorry for being so late, my life is kinda hell right now but after reading this absolutely amazing update, I am feeling better. Thank you so much for writing a brilliant update.


I won't be able to write much, as I need to get back to my work😔
I loved the update. I loved the way Arnav tackled with each and every thing. I am impressed, Cheeni Khush hui😎
Zara dil ko thaam lo, naam lo, keh bhi do hai kaun, aa gaya aa gaya laut ke, dekho DON (Our ASR)😳

Is Shyam an engineer? Maal, abey gadhe LOL we kinda use these words😆 If yes, then its a kalank on engineering students because he is brainless😆 I don't understand why did he even think of messing with ASR and his girl? I wonder if he doesn't want to live? Poor guy..!!

Aww I loved the way Khushi hugged him and never left his side. But alas NK ruined every thing😡
Chalo koi nai, I know yo won't let them stay apart. Are we going to get dhansoo ending at the airport? 😳

When they hugged each other, the only song that played in my mind was, Kismat se tum humko mile ho, kaise chhodenge, ye hanth hum na chhodenge..!!
Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really really nice n awesome update.

Finally Khushi is safe.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Amazing Update!!
Its like a movie climax scene.
Superbly penned done. Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow interesting what a climax Khushi what you did to Arnav
NK toh NK hai galat samay galat baate hugging dekha nahi
WiWY you should take up a new job of episode writing
Edited by chalhov - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wiwy just loved it! i always love when shyam is bashed and banged up since you know how i feel about him. please continue writing my friend!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the fall of Shyam
Where did NK come from...after all that he had to ask that question now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the fall of Shyam
Where did NK come from
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Posted: 10 years ago
this billu ma ko bechega😡
kamina ,isko toh uske hi villa k garden mai zinda gaar dena chahiye...bloody greedy..

hmm anjaliki dimag ki batti itni late kyu jalti hai??
oh arnav was in full angry young man mood..
seriusly arnav wants to go london..."want to smack his head"
i love how she crashed in his arms..
aaye haye darling...
waah arnav beat snakewa black n blue...ooho..and their family members are so funny.sab apna haath saaf karne aagaye..!!!

n.k😡
aagaye rang main bhang dalne...!!but yeah his single line was enough to tumble down the mighty asr.
and arnav...
"dil k tukdetukde ho gye"😆


wat the ,u want to end ff,no..u will not show the wedding??
anycase make sure they use their suhagraat bed😉
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