*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shakrobaaj

What an update..Wiwyji..
Yeh Anjali bhi na...jab inhejab in between the lines read karna hota hai tab hi nahi karti...
kya ASR ke aise din aa gaye ki woh Laxmiji ko yaad kar or miss bhi..πŸ˜†

here goes another torture round for Aman..naam tih achchha hai but iss janab ki Kundli mai ASR naam ka jo grih hai woh kabhi shanti nahi lene dega...πŸ˜†

ASR ping pong bol...agar Aman ne Laxmi wali baat suni hoti toh kya hota...😳 just imagine..

toh ab aayega Camlewa hills ke niche..
I mean..
billu banega bhigi billi,
Shyam tera kya hoga..tune ASR se panga liya phir se ..😑 now see and bare the pain...
cause you don't have mind that too returned from Howard ...ASR will maaring maaring and chatni banaawing tumhare Bones ki aur Puppies ko baating...aur phir tum singing...

AAJ KAL PAV ZAMEE PAR NAHI PADTE MERE,
TUMNE DEKHA HAI MUJE CHALTE HUE?..

so Mamaji, Mamiji and Ms.La teeno ko uss Shyam ne phasaaya tha ...
gold digger hai Kaun..

thank you for the pm..
and for the hilarious update..


πŸ˜† You are tooo much, meri Khichdi!πŸ€— Your comments had me🀣! What a new twist to the song
AAJ KAL PAV ZAMEE PAR NAHI PADTE MERE,
TUMNE DEKHA HAI MUJE CHALTE HUE?..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothim78

Read last three parts at a time just now...

Loved them...

Happy to see Arnav's Harvard brain full at work... Is MAMAJi really good or just pretending...?

So Lavanya n Mamiji were involved with Syam in conspiring against ARSHI.. Hope Shyam keeps his words n leave khushi unhurt..

Hope Khushi stops doing the grave mistake she was abt to do by getting engaged to NK because she is angry on one ASR...


Thankyou for enjoying reading all the parts! πŸ˜ƒ
Let Mamaji be good, what say?πŸ˜‰
Shyam might leave Khushi unhurt but she has already hurt herself by making the grave mistake of linking her name with NK!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi_1982

Very nice plot...The story is getting very interesting.

Lavanya n Mamiji seem to have sold off their brains for cosmetics...How the hell can Shyam be gud when he betrayed Anjali...Idjits 😑

At last the Blessed Harvard brain of Arnav is doing its job.

Waiting for next ASR move.


Thanks a tonne for liking the plot!πŸ˜ƒ

"Lavanya n Mamiji seem to have sold off their brains for cosmetics"πŸ˜† Good one!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Next ASR move coming up tonight, late night!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

Wiwy wonderful update read both parts at once kidnapping they needed something like that to get back to their love.πŸ˜† very interesting turn


Well said Chalhov!⭐️
Thanks for liking!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sheemaparveen

wow wow wow just amazing do update soon dear loved it

thanks thanks thanks!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: koisk

Can't wait to see how Arnav rescues khushi.. Update soon...

Awww! 😳Okay! Update late tonightπŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: ambi08

Update fast
Waiting...

Thanks for waiting for my update. I am overwhelmed! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Aha, nice unfolding of the mystery. So, Mamaji, Mamiji and La are not really the culprits. They have been brainwashed by Shyam, hmm... La is Mami's distant niece. 😲 That's surprising.

So, ASR's Harvard brain zeroes in on Billu the driver. And Shyam is the kidnapper. Shyam and his dirty words, feel like strangling him. 😑 Waiting for the next update, eagerly.
Btw, loved these. Aman rolling his eyes upon hearing the name Khushi once again from his boss. And also Mami's bootiphool se April phool. πŸ˜†


Thanks Durgey! πŸ€— I was as usual waiting for your special comments!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: koisk

Eagerly waiting for the next update.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Wiwy dear kaha ho n wheres the update?
Update chayie jaldi se do😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Much fun, wiwy the wicked! Action packed update ending with the best flashback ever!πŸ˜† I may have to go back and read that early chapter NOW!!πŸ˜†
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