*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 23

cheesemad

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Posted: 10 years ago

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cheeni:)

Sorry sorry lakhon sorry for the delay but these stupid practical exams didn't let me un-res my comment.

Okay now coming to the update, I just loved it.

LOL Anjali must be thinking what happened to her Chhote? But she doesn't know that her CHotte has fallen hardly in love with Khushi Kumaari Guptaa..!!😆

I guess these things would lead us to a grand confession, I love you dammit..!! Wow I am already dreaming about that day.

OMG shyam fooled everyone, mamaji, mamiji and Lavanya too😲

I so want him to die😡

What the ..!!20 corers?! Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon?? Poor Shyam went all happy and ecstatic but he doesn't know after all it is our Arnav Singh Raizada.😳

Okay I need to thank you for one thing, Thank you for making Shyam kidnap Khushi because Khaali dimaag Shyam can never touch master mind ASR like he did in the show, totally over the top.

Jane jaan dhundta fir raha hu tumhe raat din main yahan se wahan..!!

Mujhko aawaz do, chhup gaye ho sanam, tum kahan??

Main yahan..!! Aww khushi wants to see him before something happens to her, of course our ASR will save her no doubt😳

Continue soon:D

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Beautiful Update wiwy🤗🤗

Your story is cutting the edge in a nick of time...unlike the real one where MU took million years to get over...

SO Akhroo can't sleep last night as you left us dreaming about him...Then he called in the morning as whenever she is in trouble, he is in convulsion...as always.

This Aman doesn't know either how to mind his business.Utter annoying...Love his barking...Shut up Arnav...

Shyam is behind all of this but Mamiji and La is involved some how...

Khushi and her worrisome about her family...Haye DM plz send Arnavji for her...in wiwy's style😆

Shyam and his deals always bring these two together

Arnav and his smart moves ...offering mouse a trap...👏

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aafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shyam is such a big manipulator.
But Arnav will sure teach him a lesson.

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ArnieBoyBarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wiwy it was a beautiful update, loved how much Arnav cares for Khushi. Why she has doubt again about his feeling for her? Loved how much understanding is NK. Lovely update.😃

Edited by KittenRose - 10 years ago

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