*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 18

Meerah14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Lovely update...

What happen to khushi...

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

updated on page 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93829598

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nisso

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

awesome update!

loved it! 🤗
I wait for the following updating

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Sasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Really really nice update.

Arnav is actually a phycho.

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shruti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

seriusly this arnav,ping pong ball ki tarah vapas lavanya k sath..

idiot,

anjali,dear anjali..why r u always pass bad news to kushi...

khushi transformed into lakshmi bai mode..

wat the i thought only mamiji gadbad kar rai h,but yaha mamaji bhi chalu hai...

dirty hands yeaks pakka shyamu hoga,,,

ooh arnav khushi aur unki telepathy...

khabar pahuch gyi arnav k paas...

go arnav save ur dd(damsel in distress)

P.S-the para you gave on malnutrition is it true?

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-UnknownSoul-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

omg this is so scary!

i think mamiji and mamaji are negative characters 😡

why on earth they're involved with lavanya and shyam ? 🤢 😡

OMG WHAT HAPPENED TO KHUSHI 😲 😭 😕

i hope shes okay

arnav had a nightmare too 😲 🤢

something is definitely wrong 😔

loved the update though

Edited by kidrauhlforever - 10 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update!!! I am first yay😊

Hey Anu! Yes you are first! And it makes me happy that it means something to you! 😃 Sorry for late reply

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: saomom
I. Hate. Cliffhangers. 😆

What the! 😆

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Sorry I am late...
My Grabbers...

He wants her to be safe and doing whatever it takes and at the same time denial in acceptance is gripping its roots.So typical of ASR.CAn't sleep , can't focus, can't remove himself from her thoughts but still "Mujhe fadal nahin padta..."

She wants to forget him...Hum peechli baaton ko bhula ke agey keh bare main sochna chahtey hai..."
Hey DM ...Khushi and her ego...Her jealousy for La and again hast decision to move on.

La is back and in Mamji's car...why on Earth Mamiji is involved with her...it must be 007 James Bond Mamiji.

Anjali is sweet and Naniji is awesome as always.She is giving her blessings...beautiful

Awww...cliffhanger...she is kidnaped...me loving it as this was the original story...

Love it his Mehsoos is killing him...

Arshi I am the one who is late!

Thanks for understanding ASR so well! The first four sentences of your Grabbers describe him perfectly! All the other characters are also well within your grasp! Superb Arshi! I have no words to thank you!And thanks a tonne for your edits!🤗

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shakrobaaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Part 21,

haaye..
I will miss you my ghar,
but not you..😡 because uss rakshas ne mera bhola sa dil jo toda hai..ja muje na ab yaad aa tu..😆
remember devil,devil appears..😕
haaye kyon nahi ja sakte..hum apna dhyaan rakh sakte hai samje aap?
bhaari bharkham samaan uthaana toh ASR ke baayein haath ka kaam hai tabhi toh paseene paseene ho rahe the janab..but iss baat se Khushi khush hui...the moment she left he already started feeling empty..sleepless night proved that he was missing her badly..but god ki marzi hai ki Arnav ko Khushi ki khabar milti rahe tabhi toh uske dimaag ki ghanti baji aur Anjalidi bhi ab ja rahi Gosak .."tera pichha na mai chhodunga soniye..chali tu chaahe Gosak re..😆"
Arnav Singh Raizada se pichha chhudana na-mumkin hai...
but the good part is Khushi ne apne babuji ko mana kiya sab ko NK ke baarein mai bataane ka...

Part 22,

Areey Khushiji aap yaha?
yeh lo jinse pichha chhuda kar aaye the unki di yaha pe Hey DM
Khushi and Naniji's milap..nanji pasand aayi Khushi ko...
ASR was feeling good after all now he can get her information through Di,
but haaye Ram yeh kya ? Khushi ne sunli baat La aur Arnav ke baarein mai..
La at AR, and planned dinner with him..he too agreed?,
so many questions were there in his mind when he recognized Mamaji's car, something is very fishy...Mamiji,mamaji,La and that Shyam team lagti hai..
and the last part of this update ...
Khushi is in trouble,It's Shyam's deed...
last name on her lips was Arnavji's and wake call for Arnav with the name on his lips Khushiii..

abhi Shyam and team be ready for Arnav's Taandav with his what thes, damn its and all...may be NK help him...
waiting for the next part...

I hope you love to read this Khichadi ...😆

take care.

Edited by shakrobaaj - 10 years ago

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