ARIYA SS:@@@haqq hai sirf mera@@@ completed pg 68

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hey friends back again to eat up ur brains with new story of mine..



its again an ariya story 



(mein toh hoon hi ariya obssessed)






toh hope u like it and agar pasand naye 



toh bhi bear it,,




itna toh karoge na ..




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prologue and character sketch pg 1.

part 1- pg 6,7

part 2- pg 11, 12

part 3- pg 15, 16

part 4- pg 20

part 5- pg 24, 25

part 6- pg 29,30

part 7- pg 34

part 8-pg 38,39

part 9- pg 43,44

part 10- pg 48, 49

part 11- pg 53,54

part 12- pg 58,59

part 13- pg 63, 64

last part- pg 68

Edited by pinkerbell - 10 years ago
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Prologue..




Riya s unconditional love is always 



shattered by arjun's rude behavior..




And it was high time riya's stands for 




herself and her self respect..




Wat happens whn riya will stand for herself 





for self respect.. putting aside her love.





To add fuel to fire they get an undercover 





mission in a college..





Wat will happen whn arjun will get a taste 




of his own medicine..?





Will he show his right on riya's love..?? 





on the love which he never cared for??




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Character sketch:




Acp arjun rawte.



same super hot headed cop as in show.. he 




have mellowed down bt never show his care 




and concern.. still scared of relationship 




and accepting his feelings..




Acp sameer rathod: 




same in show.. understands arjun well .. 




bt still the relationship is not friendly and 




open ..wants arjun to express himself and 




let go the fear of losing anymore...




wants him to be happy..

 




Riya mukherjee




Understands arjun even more and loves him 




unconditionally..bt decided to stand up for 




her self respect...




and give arjun a reality check





Choree



best buddies.. best supporters..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Prologue & CS...
Continue Soon...
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#6
nice concept.. Awesome cs n prologue dear.. Waiting for reading more.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Superb concept .
Nari shakti zinda baad.
Cont soon.
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#8
Super CS and prologue...
Loved it a lot,Pinku bear.
Continue soonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept and nice cs.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
awesome concept
the cs n prologue was amazing
looking forward to read
as to how riya stands
up for her self respect
thanks for cs n prologue
cont soon