Originally posted by: crazylove100
Really loved ur work ! gng back to virman memories ! Plzz update soon waiting for next chappy :))) Pm me if possible means !
Awesome!!!
Robert isn't. Aware of Virman's seperation...raaz khulne pe he will b admitted again😆(bechara)...Jealous virat(only)..dats too small..ussse tau saza milne chaheye fr tking a deviation towards maya😃Loved strong maanvi! Hope this frndship test is a litte tough fr virat😉Thnks fr the PM!
Originally posted by: madhuharini
this s really an awesome update Prathe... It is one of my fav story in Virman u know😊😊
sry for very late dear... I just luved it👏👏 Manvi is really so cute and best character😊 thanks for Pm😊
Originally posted by: Lovlyfairy_
Superb update dear [:-)] loved it..glad to see jealous virat. He deserve more...excited to read more !! Thnx 4 da pm n sorry for late comment
Originally posted by: skinnypal
Pheww.. i read all finally 😆
Amazing concept.. and really loved your Virman flashbacks!!I am liking Manvi and Robbie.. lol can they end up together? 🤣The words you write for their feelings in italics.. those are the best part of your updates.. 👏and yea let manvi give him the cold shoulder he so deserves it... make him suffer more.. tbh i m hating virat and dont want him to be forgiven anytime soon..Excited for the next part.. how he will react... and how this story progresses.. if possible give some more virman happy FBs.. 😛anyway continue soon prathe ji... will be waiting.. PM me please when u update coz i dont visit this forum!! 😊Oh and i love the title of your story... "Bhawara Mann" really catchy 😉
hahhaa so long comments haaaye after a long time am reading a feedbackyes virat deserves iti dnt knw skinno wen i will update bt wen i will update pakka i will pm u😳😉glad u loved t😳
updates ke liye anyone waiting😆
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