|EHMMBH|Bhawara Mann|VIRMAN FF||part 15 sneak peek||pg 64 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
dont get me wrong but would love to see virat in pain ,
the way he acts with manvi, he deserves it...

and manvi sweet as always...
nice part and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...
Awsm update...
My heart is breaking reading how they are getting seperated
Cont soon and thanks a lot for the pm...
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Replies To all the comments  😊
Angelic_Friend: Hello dude!πŸ˜›
The update was awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ and please continue soon!πŸ˜‰

And never feel yourself as a bad writer!😑
Its really good yaar and you are a good writer!😳

And yeah, Mujhe pm chahiye or else main rona shuru karungi!πŸ˜†

Take care! and Keep writing!πŸ˜‰

Reply: Thanks a lot for u compliments am happy...😳 and yes will try to keep writing always 😊



pink1:nice update he is a such idiot he doesn't value
what he have I hope soon he relies before going any thing wrong 
and bring her in his life back update soon
Reply:Thanks Marry...u are right...he will realise  as my stry progresses



Niaksharma:Thnx 4 pm
awesome
like it
fab
Reply:Thanks a lot ..and take care get well soon 😊

madhuharini:it's really nice update..
when he's gonna realise her care and love...
Reply: Thanks ...he will as stry progresses :)


footy:great story cont soon with long updates thanks for pm
Reply:Thanks a lot :)


Kicha111:Nice update
virat s so stupid to loose such a loving wife
Plz make hm realise hr importance in hs life
Maya s succeeding in hr plan
Do cint soon
thnx 4 d pm

Reply:thanks a lot and yes he will realize soon as the stry progresses

Jannat94Amazing update Prathe
liked it a lot
he is such a jerk or Dufford
people realize their mistake when they lost some precious hope he realize soon
waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4 the PM sweety πŸ˜ƒ
Reply:     Yes he will realise soon :)
welcome

naina927:Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ
I loved this super sonic one... Straight to the point...
Maya se aur kya expect kar sakte h but robby is a great frnd... He seems really mature n understanding...
Virman scene was fab...!!!
Manvi is soo sweet n caring n loving n viru will realise it soon... He will come back to manvi...
Loved it ❀️

Reply:yes u are right naina ...Thanks a lot u liked  it am very happy😳😊...yes robby is gud guy


  tazeen:.Nice update
Reply:Thanks :)

Vaarya53:nice update ..but a short one :( plzz make it long na..thnks for the pm :)
Reply: Thanks ...will try to give long updates :)

luvmanat:Poor manvi and monster maya
Reply: yes u are right :)

Syed695:SUperb Update..! Now the equation becomes inetersting..and would be nice to see till when will Virat b Blinded..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!
Reply: Thanks ...and  very soon ...dnt wry i wnt drag much ;) :)

GOOGLU:After long time dear...
But u update it .. .its more important...
Love ur way of writing...
Virat is sooo blind in fake wrld...
Maya as always so mean only think abt herself...
Love our caring and sweet manvi...
Robby is so understnding prson although he didnt knw manvi prsnly and also didnt belong wd India...
Love his character...
Egrly waiting for next update...
Try to update soon ...
Thanx for pm dea..
Reply:Thanks for u comments dear...yes robby is a gud guy... his blindness will be cured  bt will take bit time dnt wry i will nt drag much

maclean:oh my goddd its rally a g88 story, plzz pm me,, just read all parts,,,, awesome story track,,,,,πŸ˜ƒ  try to update soon, dr,,,,,πŸ‘
Reply:Thanks a lot for the comments dear...i am glad u liked it...will try to update soon..

jayprabu:Nice update. I feel bad for Manvi. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
Reply: Thanks :)

Bhabani90:Amazing story plot and awsum updates, pls pm me frm nxt update and update asap.
Reply: Wow am glad u liked it dear...and even i love to read u r stories too u are very good writer indeed and love the depth in u r stories dear :)...will try to continue soon

jia123sagar:it was awesome
loved the update
robby is so nice
poor maanvi
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
Reply: Thanks a lot ...and welcome dear...will try to cont soon :)

richa002:Nice update but it was short...
Virat is influenced by maya...
Want to knw..how they will apart...
Manvi is sooo caring...nd virat hurted her...
Update soon...
Reply: yes u are right  and  will try my lvl best to give long updates dear actually i am bad at giving long updates ;) Thanks a lot fr ur commnets :)

niki795:awesome update dear..
loved it
when will virat realises what's he is missing??
Robby is true friend
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Reply: u are right he will realise dear as the stry progresses...Thanks a lot for u r comments :)


hangok:dont get me wrong but would love to see virat in pain ,
the way he acts with manvi, he deserves it...
and manvi sweet as always...
nice part and thanks for pm
Reply: yes u are right  virat will be in pain dear bt  i will try to  potray it in a very subtle way in my stry no dramas :) ;) Thanks a lot for u r comments :)


devilaonmoon:Hey...
Awsm update...
My heart is breaking reading how they are getting seperated
Cont soon and thanks a lot for the pm...

Reply:   thanks a lot clara yes seperation ahead...will try to continue soon :)
thnks a lot for u r comments :)


 







Edited by prathe - 10 years ago
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi all am sorry for late update
A big thanks to all those who have read my story till now and a big hugπŸ€— frm me to all those who have spared their time to comment on my story...i have replied to all your comments pls do see
PG 22 if u all r free😊


Note:
SORRY readers for the delay in my updates am trying my level best to give update soon but nt able to...and yes i wnt discontinue  but will take bit time to update so pls bear with me
Edited by prathe - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates...
Read all your update in 1 time..
Feel really sad for Manvi..
Virat is really changing...
HATE Maya yaar...
Robby is such a good friend..
Really wanna see what happend in the present when Virat,Manvi and Maya will meet again...
Pleaseee update soon...
And pleasee PM me alsoo...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Frst thanks dear for ur replies...it means alot to us...
Abt srry note...
Don't be srry dear...its ok..
We will wait...
Take ur time...we can manage...
Take care...
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome updates...

Read all your update in 1 time..
Feel really sad for Manvi..
Virat is really changing...
HATE Maya yaar...
Robby is such a good friend..
Really wanna see what happend in the present when Virat,Manvi and Maya will meet again...
Pleaseee update soon...
And pleasee PM me alsoo...



Thanks a lot for u r feedbacks ...i am glad u liked it

pm i am nt sure if i will be sending any in future to anyone  but if i send thn i will definitely send it to u also 😊
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Frst thanks dear for ur replies...it means alot to us...
Abt srry note...
Don't be srry dear...its ok..
We will wait...
Take ur time...we can manage...
Take care...





no need to thank me for replying to comments because it my responsibility
thanks a lot for understanding
will definitely try to update whenever i can😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
the update was awesome. πŸ˜Š thanks for pm.
wishing u a  happy new year
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Posted: 10 years ago


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