Ariya FF: Kaha Ho Tum??? part 7 page 19/21-22 FEB 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Baba , kya School jana jaruri hota hai?" She ask him .
 
 
While driving he just give her glare & she immeadtly shut her mouth..
 
 
"Akadu kahi ke..." She mutter under her breath...
 
 
He stops his SUV near her School gate..
 
 
"Baba , love you." She says & kiss his cheeck..
 
 
"Baba , no.. mai to Akadu hue na.." He says .
 
 
" Ha , aur mai Akadu ki beti..." she says & smile..
 
 
 
 
 
Somewhere in  Different City
 
 
 
 
 
 
She hold one pic in her hand ..
 
 
"Baby Mumma miss you..."
 
 
"I dn't know Baby where are you... i just want  to meet you , i hpe ur fine.. " she cry bitterly
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
In Mumbai
 
 
 
"Kaha ho tum ??? Maine jo bhi kiya sirf tumhari bhalai ke liye... uska us urm mai tumhare saath rehena thik nahi tha..."
 
 
 
"Maine use dur kiya tumse , lekin tumne itni badi saza kyu di mujhe... kyu..." His eyes feel with tears..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Back to her School
 
 
 
 
 
 
She run to her class , and he lean to his SUV & watching her .
 
 
"Kaha ho tum ? "  he thinks..
 
 
"Sia ki hasi hamesha tumhari yaad dilati hai mujhe..." he says looking lost..
 
    Siya Rawte.
Arjun's adopted daughter..
 
 
 
Should i continue...
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi manali🤗...
 
i'm first😆......
 
amazing concept...👏👏...siya is so cute😃...
 
arjun's adopted daughter😃...well i'm sooo happy that i got  apm of ur work after a long time😃...
 
update soon n pm too😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is really interesting... Arjun have an adopted daughter... intresting... continue soon Edited by Leki - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Beautiful prologue...
Sia is Arjun's adopted daughter...
Lovely.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oye ye bhi koe poochhane ke baat hai..
ohh so siya arjun ke adopted..
us umer me door( lolll)..kuch to chhut raha haii..
so ariya leav sepratly..
n she is crying..
arjun remind her..
bahoot kuch hai..jo abhi raaj hai..
update karooo...
ab to tumhen pakka kidnap kerna padegaaa...
ps:solid despo...hum tum/sachha pyaar/sang hoon/ update as soonas possible lolll...ab wait ne hota...
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
amazing prologue :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Prologue is fascinating👏 

U continue de I love the concept

Siya 's pic lovely

Thanx 4 inform me 4 tht story

Hugs u de🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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O god

Awesome

Love it

Please cont. soon

And don't forget to PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesum prologue di
bacha wala love
one of my fav to read
yay
thanx fr d pm di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww,,lovely prologue...
interesting yrr..
looking forward to read it..
hope you will update it soon..😉
me waiting😳